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Minds Eye


Are you not entertained?

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Princess Luna has raised the moon countless times in her life, but tonight was the first time she received a gift and an invitation to Celestia's chambers after doing so. While she accepts, she can't understand why the offer was made. There was nothing special about the day.

But she's wrong. Today was the day the newest letter from Ponyville arrived.

Cover art: My Sis by averagedraw.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 93 )

Fantastic. 'Nuff said.

Fantastic story! :pinkiehappy:

Well done.

A-freakin-dorable! :pinkiehappy:

Moooth-EEEEER!” Lunca screeched, “Tee-ya stole my boy-friend!”

Lunca want drink, durrr :pinkiesick:
(I think you meant Luna :scootangel:)

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:twilightoops: Fixed it. Thanks.

6231429 *bows*

6231447 No problem, it was kind of hilarious. I imagined Luna as a caveman-esque, slightly slow-witted disposition. It was good while it lasted :rainbowwild:

But yeah, again this was an amazingly adorable story. Loved it :raritywink:
Also, stallions are real jerkwads.

>> Minds Eye Nods in appreciation.

:rainbowlaugh:
that was hilarious!

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A job well done then!

Very well done.

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Glad you liked it.

That was a lovely read :twiglithsmile:
I never had a true sibling of my own, so I wouldn't know what it's like to be an older/younger brother, but this was certainly enjoyable.

This feels like it really should've been an episode in the show.

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My thoughts exactly. Just another ten seconds of banter at the end of the episode would have been nice.

6233206 If they did an ending bit to the last one, with the sisters sitting down for a chat to reminisce about better times, it would've fit quite nicely. Maybe brought on by Tia wanting to show Luna that there were far better memories to focus on than one mistake or something.

Either way, this thing is the thing and it was fun.

very well done! I loved this little story. It reminds me of time with my own sister.

A wonderful read, and practically flawless mechanically and grammatically, save for one thing:

“Oh, but I did, when I passed him the hall one evening.”

I believe you're missing the word "in."
Despite that, this was great! Kudos! :twilightsmile: I am indeed entertained! :rainbowwild:

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Thank you!

... and I'll add the word. :twilightblush:

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Whoops, missed your comment in my last post. Thanks!

The only issue I can find with this story overall is the indentations, but that's just obsessive nitpicking. Don't mind me. I loved it.

I don't know how but I think I just gave it three likes.
...
Regret none of it!

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Ah, sorry about that. Gdocs acting up, I guess. Glad you enjoyed it all the same.

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Ha! Neither do I! :rainbowlaugh:

I liked this story.

Absolutely adorable. I love seeing Celestia and Luna being sisters rather than princesses. :pinkiehappy:

"TEEYAAAA!" :rainbowlaugh:

A great piece here. I really enjoyed reading it while waiting for code to finish running! :3 Was the perfect insert to the evening.

That was fluffy and adorable and just a fun story. I love stories where the royal sisters act like sisters, and you captured that wonderfully :twilightsmile:

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Mission accomplished!

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Glad to be of service.

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:trollestia:

...we really need a Luna icon.

6234924 Oh my god yes we do

Loved the part about the flowers.:heart: Brilliant writing. :ajsmug:

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So did I. It was fun coming up with memories for them to have about their mother. Glad you liked it.

Sad to say I never really had to many spats with my brother and sister. My sis is older by four years but we never really did that much together (gender barriers y'know?) and my brother and I have always gotten along to the point that we can co-op a game with minimal talk. Enh, that's life

This was an incredible read.

Two sisters just enjoying each others company.

Thumbs up and #25

:moustache:

Yeah, that was good. Pretty much how I imagine them as well when they're off screen, and exactly how they were when they were younger. Yup, you managed to capture my headcanon perfectly- I'm impressed :D

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There's certainly joy in that as well.

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Glad you liked it! :twilightsmile:

Moooth-EEEEER!” Luna screeched, “Tee-ya stole my boy-friend!

Best. Line. EVER!!! :rainbowlaugh:

This was magnificent! AMAZING!! I freakin' loved it!! (Then again, seeing Celestia and Luna actually interact like sisters is something I've always enjoyed; that's one of the many reasons why I enjoyed 'Slice of Life' so much :twilightsmile:)

This was beautiful! I need more of this in my life.... :rainbowlaugh::twilightsmile::raritystarry::heart:

This is absolutely wonderful. Beware of Luna's ancient magicks! :rainbowlaugh:

Celestia and Luna have the ultimate banter session :pinkiehappy:

Wow, this was a fantastic story of two siblings (or friends) catching up. :yay:

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Indeed. Imagine if she unleashed that in the Royal Canterlot Voice. :rainbowlaugh:

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Glad you all liked it.

This fic desrves no introduction Best fic ever:twilightblush::rainbowwild::heart::raritystarry:

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That's... lofty. Thanks!

Very, very sweet. I can just see this happening after Sisterhooves Social. A perfect denouement to that episode. I kinda wish we had seen something like this in the show. Or was it kinda-sorta inspired by their interaction at the end of Slice of Life?

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Oh no, I couldn't believe they didn't do this in the episode when I first watched it, even before I started writing fanfiction. I mean, Luna Eclipsed was right before it, the next episode is about sisters, and... nothing? Always felt like a missed opportunity.

Like in Castlemania, after they all figured out the castle was a giant playground. I wanted five more seconds, after Twilight said, "Hey, I've got an idea!" of them all going down a giant slide.

Hm. I might just have my next story idea.

That was great. Thank you for it.

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