The Adventures of Pat the Changeling
"Thank you, Diamond Tiara, for that uh… enlightening presentation," Cheerilee said as her student, Diamond Tiara, wrestled with her cat Dazzle to get him back into his carrying case. "Now then, next up is… Pat." Cheerilee looked over to the back of the class, where the changeling sat on the back row climbed out of his seat with a small box in his green magical aura. All eyes followed him as he passed by Diamond Tiara and Dazzle on the way to the front of the class.
As Pat reached the front of the class, there was a silence for several seconds as the changeling stared awkwardly back at the class. Cheerilee cleared her throat, and Pat used his magic to open his box, revealing its contents to the class. The foals all gasped and screamed, and some almost lost their lunches, when they found the skeletal remains of a small lizard inside of the box.
"This is the first thing I ever killed when I became old enough to hunt," Pat explained, looking down on his prize with a prideful smile. "My daddy is crippled so unlike the other kids, I had to catch this myself. He was so proud that he let me eat ice-cream for dinner, and then my mommy scolded us and I got an upset tummy." Pat looked up and found most of the foals looking green and covering their mouths or gagging. "Yeah, like that!"
Cheerilee wasn't faring too well herself. She reached over to her glass of water and took a long chug, downing it in one go. "T-Thank you, Pat," she said in a scratchy voice.
"Oh, I could show you how I caught it, if you want," Pat offered. "I just need a lizard and-"
"N-No, that won't be necessary!" Cheerilee scribbled onto the paper on her desk. "You've already got an A! No need for anymore!"
Pat smiled and closed his box, trotting merrily back to his seat. As he sat down, he placed the box down to the side of his desk and heard screeching noises around him. Looking around, it seemed that the foals neighbouring him had gotten further away. '… Was it something I said?'
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Meet Pat the changeling! As part of Equestria's attempts to make peace with the changelings, several programmes were introduced to help the two countries better understand each other and their customs. One of those programmes was a student exchange in Ponyville. One student from Ponyville and one student from the Changeling Kingdom traded places, and two months later the two will return to their own countries. Pat the changeling was selected as the representative from the Changeling Kingdom. And as for the lucky student from Ponyville…
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"How is the new student coming along?"
The changeling teacher, Ms. Polly Morph, adjusted her glasses and hummed nervously under her breath. "Well, she's adjusting well to her new surroundings, Your Majesty."
"And the other pupils?"
"They're getting along just fine with the pony. In fact…"
Chrysalis raised an eyebrow. "Yes?"
"This pony is… She seems to love unconditionally, meaning that she's able to give the students plenty of energy. I've never seen them so active. I just wish she could love them a little bit less…"
"How do you mean?" The teacher stepped aside and welcomed the queen to look into the classroom behind her. Queen Chrysalis accepted the invitation and opened the door. Inside, the class was divided. Half of the students were running around playing tag or throwing paper areoplanes, whilst the other half were lined up in front of the filly, receiving hugs one-by-one. The filly, Dinky Doo, squeezed the next changeling in the line, and the changelings horn illuminated the area before her bolted off to join his friends.
As Queen Chrysalis got close, she could feel the intense love that the filly was giving off and felt her own wings buzzing in response. "So, you are the new student from Equestria."
Dinky Doo looked up and smiled brightly at the queen. "Yeah!" she answered in a cheerful voice.
"You seem to be getting along with everyone quite well."
"Mhm! Mommy says that friendship is like rays of sunshine on the heart, and that it should be shared to everyone!"
Queen Chrysalis' eyes widened and she clutched her heart. Her horn sparked and she closed her eyes to calm herself down. "Nng!"
"Your Majesty, are you alright?" Ms. Polly Morph asked.
"I'm fine," Chrysalis responded, pulling the teacher aside and lowering her voice. "This filly is incredible! No wonder Equestria is as powerful as it is! We must kidnap this filly and have her power our army at once!"
"But Your Majesty, surely Equestria has an entire army of foals like this at their disposal. We couldn't possibly win with just one."
Queen Chrysalis was silent as she considered the teacher's response. "You're right. Okay then. We'll ally ourselves with Equestria, and then steal all of their foals! Then we shall have an unstoppable army with which to conquer the entire world!"
"Brilliant plan as always, Your Majesty!" the teacher said as she clapped her hooves.
"Of course it is. That's why I had it."
Queen Chrysalis felt a tug on her tail and turned around to find Dinky Doo standing behind her, holding a piece of paper in her magic. The filly turned the paper around to reveal a crayon drawing of herself and the queen, holding hooves together under a rainbow and a smiling sun. "I made this for you, Queen Chrysalis! Thank you for having me in your kingdom!"
The teacher and the Queen bother clutched their hearts in unison and Chrysalis clenched her teeth together as she willed her wings and her horn to calm down. "Y-Your Majesty, maybe we are meddling with forces beyond our control."
"Indeed. This is not an opponent to take lightly."
Dinky Doo tilted her head to the side with a confused look on her face, before simply shrugging and skipping away to join her new friends in making paper snowflakes.
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Cheerilee enjoyed watching the student playing in the schoolyard during playtime, though she had to admit that she felt a little envious. She remembered when she herself was a filly, completely oblivious to the troubles of the world and pretending that she was a magical princess in charge of her own kingdom populated by stuffed animals. She giggled to herself, until she spotted a lone changeling sitting on the ground, sniffing as tears rolled down his cheeks.
"Pat?" she called out as she approached, catching the changeling's attention. She noticed he was holding his left hoof with his right one and figured out pretty much what had happened. "Are you okay?" No response came, as expected. "Did you trip and hurt yourself?" The changeling nodded his head in silence. "Would you like me to take a look?" The changeling nodded his head again, but didn't budge until Cheerilee and kneeled down his level and gently tapped his foreleg. He removed his right hoof, revealing a small cut with green liquid oozing out of it on his left one.
Cheerilee paused for a moment, before cautiously reaching out and holding his injured hoof. As her own hoof came into contact with the green liquid, it began to sizzle and her eyes slowly began to widen. "… AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"
All eyes on the schoolyard, and just outside of the school, turned to the teacher as she ran around in circles, screaming at the top of her lungs as she waved her hoof around into the air. She soon began to demand water, and Pat finally returned his attention back to his injury. With a final sniffle, he brought his hoof up to his mouth and gave it a gentle lick, before slowly standing up, keeping his left forehoof suspended in the air.
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Weddings were rare in the Changeling Kingdom. With as many enemies as they had, the country was constantly fighting and so marriage ceremonies had to be cheap and short. Pat's only experience with weddings was clapping his hooves whenever two changelings declared that they had just signed the marriage contract.
The marriage experience in Ponyville was noticeably different, with flowers, cake, an entire audience, vows, and of course, the kiss that filled the entire room with enough love to feed an entire youngling colony for a couple of days.
The only thing he didn't understand were why the many foals in his class were sharing one seat when there were plenty available for them. They didn't share one seat in the classroom so this behaviour was quite odd to him. Still, he wanted to fit in, so he tried to join them, but the foals all ran away as soon as he tried to get close to them.
Lowering his head with a frown, Pat wondered why he still hadn't made any friends despite having been there for an entire week. 'I don't get it. I had no trouble making friends when I showed everyone the size of the lizards I killed, but the foals here just keep running away.'
Pat wanted to confide in his mother, but there was a problem as she was not there, so instead she walked over to where Cheerilee was chatting with some other ponies and stood beside her. The kind, gentle teacher was the closest thing Pat had to a mother in this town, and just being near her made him feel better whenever he was down.
He just wished he hadn't called her 'Mommy' in class the other day. His face turned red and he slowly began to back away, deciding he was getting too close to his teacher. 'Maybe that's why the others don't wanna play with me.'
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Not every foals was afraid of Pat, though. There were a few that were willing to open up to him and let him into their lives. There were those like the Cutie Mark Crusaders, who could see that the lonely visitor needed a friend, and made him an honorary member of their club. They had even prepared him a cape made out of a special fabric that wouldn't tear whenever he transformed.
"This is for the win!" Sweetie Belle declared, holding a stick as though it were a microphone as she threw her right hoof into the air. "Both competitors are neck-and-neck! Who will take the gold?! Will it be the reigning champion Apple Bloom? Or the new wonder from afar, Pat the changeling?!"
"Ye're goin' down!" Apple Bloom declared, closing one eye as she studied the rod in the sandpit ahead of her. She picked the horseshoe beside her up in her mouth and threw it. It hooked around the rod, and Scootaloo cheered loudly behind the fillies.
"And it's a perfect score!" Sweetie Belle declared. "Pat'll need to match it to stay in the game!"
Pat gulped, and picked up his own horseshoe in his magic. He threw it, and it seemed to be good… but as it hit the rod, it went just a little too far and fell just a little past Apple Bloom's.
"And it's over! The winner: Apple Bloom!"
The three fillies cheered and high-hooved, whilst Pat simply clapped and congratulated his opponent. It was indeed a fierce battle, and even though he didn't win, he enjoyed playing such games with his new friends.
"And now…" The three fillies turned to Pat with evil glints in their eyes, and the clapping stopped. "The loser's penalty is…"
Pat took a step back as the three fillies took out several makeup kits and some DIY toolboxes. He did not enjoy this part.
"MAKEOVERRRRRRS!"
Pat turned and ran, the fillies tackling him from behind and laughing menacingly as he struggled to break free. "NYAAAAAAAAAAAAH!"
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Meanwhile, some ponies had befriended Pat for… different reasons.
Pat transformed himself into a perfect mirror image of Diamond Tiara, and stood perfectly still as the genuine article dressed him in a frilly pink saddle and then stood back to scrutinise. "What d'you think, Silver?"
Silver Spoon tapped a hoof to her chin and hummed in thought. "I think the purple one will work better."
"You think?" Diamond Tiara removed the saddle and replaced it with an identical one that was purple instead of pink. "Hmm… Do a twirl."
Pat obliged, twirling on the spot. Silver Spoon clapped her hooves together and nodded with a smile. "Yep! The purple one for sure!"
"Well, if you say so. I'll trust your word." Diamond Tiara took the saddle off and then held up blue dress with flower decorations. "This one next, Pat!" Pat sighed, but took the dress in his magic regardless and put it on. "I think I saw a cute manepin that'd go with this! Hang on one second!" Diamond Tiara ran out of the changing room and back into the store.
Silver Spoon stared at the changeling, disguised as Diamond Tiara, wearing the pretty blue cute flower decorations. She took out a camera and said, "Smile." Pat smiled, before being blinded by a flash of light as the shutter clicked. Silver Spoon chuckled and put the camera away. "And that's another one for the collection…"
"In my country, stalking ponies is taught when changelings enter middle school."
"Hmph! How rude! I'm not a stalker," Silver Spoon responded, fiddling with her braid as she blushed. "I'm just romantic. I'm waiting for her to make the first move."
"I always feel full when you two are together," he said. "I can tell you really like her."
"Ohhh, stoooop," Silver Spoon giggled, her face resembling a tomato.
"It's the same feeling I get whenever Diamond Tiara talks to Apple Bloom."
Silver Spoon stopped giggling, and her face returned to its original colour. A deadly silence fell between the two, shattered when Silver Spoon, in a cold, harsh tone, asked, "What?"
"And then I get that feeling when Apple Bloom talks to Scootaloo, and when Scootaloo talks to Sweetie Belle, and then also when Sweetie Belle looks at you in class while she nibbles her pen."
Silver Spoon's eyes widened. "What?!"
"What are you yelling about?" Diamond Tiara asked as she re-entered the changing room.
"We were talking about-"
"Nothing!" Silver Spoon interjected, cutting off the changeling with a harsh glare. "And we will never bring it up ever again, right?!"
Pat nodded his head slowly, sweat dripping down his face.
Diamond Tiara simply shrugged and approached Pat, affixing the manepin to him. "Oh hey, how about after this we go to Sweet Apple Acres and see what those losers are up to?"
Silver Spoon narrowed her eyes. "No." Diamond Tiara turned her head and was about to say something. "No." Diamond Tiara simply nodded and resumed her work.
Pat noticed that the love inside that room had vanished, replaced entirely with a tension so thick it threatened to strangle him.
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Fluttershy sang as she poured the chicken feed into the troughs of her henhouses. She put the bag down and tapped the sides of one of the houses gently. "Lunchtime! Come out and eat before it's all gone!"
A grey pegasus pony stuck her head out, startling Fluttershy, before she crawled out and started to walk away.
"Um, Derpy, could you please stop entering the hen… houses…" Derpy Hooves seemed to have not heard a word as she walked away blissfully back towards the town. "Um, o-okay then. Have a nice day…"
"Excuse me." Fluttershy turned around and gasped as she found the changeling Pat standing before her, dressed in a filly scouts uniform with a wagon on cookies behind him. "I'm selling cookies for charity. Would you like to buy a box or two or three or four or-"
"Um… a-aren't you a colt? S-Sorry if I'm mistaken! I just though that-"
"Yeah, I am," Pat said.
"W-Well, the filly scouts is a group for… fillies, so…"
There was an awkward silence between the two, as Pat's face grew progressively redder. "No wonder everypony looked at me funny…" he mumbled. He was surrounded by green flames, and when they disappeared, he had assumed the form of Sweetie Belle. "Is this better?"
Fluttershy smiled awkwardly and nodded her head. "Um, I-I'll take… one box, please."
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"Sweetie Belle! There you are!"
Pat looked to his side to find a walking marshmallow moving towards him. Only it wasn't a marshmallow; it was Sweetie Belle's older sister, Rarity. "Where have you been?! You know that we are supposed to go shopping for our parents' anniversary present today!"
"I-"
"And is that a filly scouts uniform? When did you join the filly scouts?"
"Y-"
"Oh, never mind that! Come now, before the store closes!" Rarity grabbed 'Sweetie Belle' by the ear with her magic and dragged her through the town.
"I'm not-"
"I know, I know! You're uncomfortable picking out presents, but that is why we're doing this together!"
"But you-"
"Don't worry, I will cover your half of the purchase, Sweetie Belle."
"…" Pat removed his transformation, returning to his original form. "I'm not Sweetie Belle."
Rarity skidded to a halt. She turned around quickly, freezing up as she noticed her magical aura around the ear of a changeling. He waved nervously to her, and Rarity jumped back with a start. "OH! I-I mean, oh, Pat! I-It's you!" Rarity quickly cancelled her magic and took a few cautious step backs. "T-Terribly sorry about all of that! Please do go on about your day!"
"Sweetie Belle is with her friends at the farm," Pat explained.
"Is that so? Well, thank you… Pat…" Rarity slowly turned around… and then sprinted down the street. Pat sighed as he turned around to return to his task.
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Natural disasters were common in the Changeling Kingdom. Queen Chrysalis had specifically settled on a land plagued with hurricanes and earthquakes, as it repelled enemy nations, and then devised spells to protect her subjects.
It seemed that Equestria was in a similar boat. The country seemed to have been founded where it would be attacked by monsters on a weekly basis, with guardians to protect it from harm.
The first couple of weeks that Pat had been there, he was terrified of these random attacks. Now, however, he was content to just sip his juice as he watched from the park bench whilst Princess Twilight Sparkle blasted the beast with powerful beams of magic and Rainbow Dash kicked it with rainbow kicks of justice.
Pat turned to his side when he heard the sounds of laughter. There were three foals playing together in the distance – Ruby Pinch, Shady Daze, and Pipsqueak were their names. He watched as they circled around each other and laughing, until they stopped and looked over to Pat. The laughter died down, and so did the fun, it seemed.
Pat lowered his head. His juicebox was empty, so he discarded the carton into the bin beside him and slowly slid off of the bench. "Hey," a voice called out beside him. It was Berry Pinch, and the two colts were there, too. "Wanna come play with us?"
Pat blinked and looked at the three in surprise. They had actually wanted to play with him? They seemed to afraid of the changeling just one week earlier, but now they actually wanted him to be their friend?
With a smile, Pat nodded his head, and then Berry Pinch poke his foreleg. "Tag! You're it!"
The three foals ran away laughing, and Pat gave chase.
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Twilight stopped fighting for a brief moment as she watched the children in the distance playing together in joy and laughter, and a warm smile crossed her face. "Maybe ponies and changelings can learn to live together," she said to herself as she extended her magically-enhanced hoof to kick the giant flying fox monster in the face as it lunged towards her.
She wiped a tear from her eyes as the ponies and the changeling gathered together in a group hug. "Maybe it's time to stop the violence and extend our love, instead." Twilight turned back to the monster beside her and fired an intense magical spell, pushing it hard into the ground.
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The day finally came for Pat to return to the Changeling Kingdom. His escorts were all ready to go, but Pat was not. Even though his bags were packed, he had reservations about leaving all of his new friends behind. The Cutie Mark Crusaders, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, Berry Pinch, Shady Daze, Pipsqueak, Snips and Snails, and his teacher, Cheerilee.
"We're gonna miss you, Pat!" Apple Bloom cried as she gave Pat one final parting hug, Sweetie Belle joining her and forcing Scootaloo to join in as well.
"Write to us when you get home!" Sweetie Belle said.
"But we don't have a postal service," Pat told her. "And I can't write Equestrianeese very well."
"It feels like just yesterday you had just come to our school," Cheerilee said, wiping her tears away with a hoofkerchief. "Oh, how time flies!"
Berry Punch rolled her eyes as she pulled Cheerilee aside. "Honestly. She gets like this every time a student leaves…"
"Hey!" Diamond Tiara shouted. "You'd better spread some fashion sense to those other changelings when you get back!"
"But you only showed me dresses and girly saddles," Pat moaned. He felt a tap on his shoulder and turned around to face Berry Pinch, whose face was a mess of red and tears. He face was scrunched up and her hooves were shaking. "Uhh…" Pat was interrupted from saying anything as the filly gave him a quick peck on the lips, before running off as fast as her little hooves would take her.
Everypony around was taken aback by the sudden action. Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle wasted no time cheering Pat on and congratulating him on his 'new fillyfriend', whilst Scootaloo joined the colts in groaning and gagging at the disgusting act of 'cootie transfer'. Pat was simply frozen solid, unable to formulate any words whatsoever.
"Well, if you are done breaking our ambassador, we must be taking him back now," the male changeling guardian, Raijin, picking Pat up and carrying him on his back.
The female guardian, Fujin, picked up Pat's bag, which suddenly exploded into confetti as a pink pony jumped out and landed in her hooves. "Surprise!"
"W-What?!" Fujin cried, dropping the pink pony onto the ground with a start.
Pat's ear twitched and he looked over Raijin's head to find a cake being shoved into his face. "Surprise!" Pinkie Pie repeated as she appeared behind Pat, also sitting on Raijin's back. "I heard you were leaving today, so I wanted to make you a cake for your loooooooooooooong journey back to the Changeling Kingdom!"
Pat gasped and smiled widely. "Really?! Thank you!"
"And hey! While I'm here, would you mind answering a quick survey on how fun your visit to Ponyville has been?" Pat nodded his head whilst Fujin begrudgingly carried the cake onto her back. "Great! Question one: how fun was your stay on a scale from one to ten?"
"Ten!"
"Thank you!" Pinkie Pie hopped down and skipped along her merry way, humming a tune as she moved.
"Well then," Raijin said as he and Fujin prepared to move out, "Say your last goodbye to your friends, kid."
Pat nodded, and turned back to all of his gathered friends, minus on Berry Pinch. With a tear rolling down his face, Pat waved his hoof. "Goodbye, everypony!"
"Goodbye, Pat!" everypony responded as the three changelings left Ponyville.
And so ends the story of Pat the changeling, the little changeling who, together with the friends that he had made in Ponyville, forever altered the course of pony-changeling relationships for years to come. But that is a story for another time.
So to me, the episode really only had two flaws:
1) The princesses yet again neglecting their duties (this has really become a pet peeve of mine, since it happens WAY more often than it should).
2) The random changeling that had no explanation as to why/how it was there. If they intend to use it again later, with some backstory, then fine, but just in this episode alone, they really could've done with a minute or two to establish why it was there in Ponyville.
Because I already wrote a fic about 1), I decided to go ahead and write a fic about 2) 
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It's about time this little guy got a story.
I was getting worried.
6091800 I'm actually writing a story about that Changeling but it looks like someone beat me to it. I'm still going to write it but Yukito has my praise for writing this, I thought I'll be the only one. Give this story a read and my version should be done later today. Having more than one view on this should be nice.
There needs to be an actual episode focusing on the changeling.
Great story,
I think you mean her
....ok this was adorable.
Only advice:
He just wished he hadn't called him 'Mommy' in class
^cherilee is a male? o_O
and the breaks of 'pat the changeling' get a bit annoying. I understand the purpose of them; but perhaps a different organization method?
Bucking Dinky. lol
Loving this so far. Story #92 and you go and made a story with best exchangeling student.
What story/presentation did DT use this time? lol
Honestly I think Equestria is in pretty good shape.
That love chain circle! You used the joke! Only with less Rarity and RD. lol
Great story. Just loved this.
I still think the princesses aren't really shirking their responsibilities much. They just happen to live really close to Ponyville and know a fellow princess there. And... and... okay yeah they are but come on you gotta admit they have lots of time before having to lower some celestia body.
Far as Pat here goes? I think it ties in well with your Ace stories. So now you have an excuse to use changelings in stories more! Win-Win!
More Pat in the future? We can only hope so.
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Little-known-fact that Cheerilee is a guy. Hence the 'Lee' in his name
But in all cerealness I'll fix that right away
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And Zecora is trans :P
YAY! This was such a cute story, and is actually more or less my own headcanon with why s/he was there. (Chrysalis and Equestria making peace). Mwahaha, fear the power of the Dinky, Chrysalis!
I don't know, they probably just found some free time to do it. Just because they're heads of state doesn't mean they have no free time, that's what delegation is for.
THOSE BASTARDS DID IT ON PURPOSE TOO, JUST TO FUCK WITH US!
Hoping against hope to see more about this!
Can you right more of this this is a awsome story.
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Well first, it seems all three of them had the time off, plus Shining Armor, at the same time. Despite that none of them seemed to help with that big monster attacking Ponyville.
And even assuming they DID all have time off on the same day, why would they spend it going to the wedding of two donkies they don't even know? Heck, you can't even begin to use Twilight as the excuse this time because there's never been any indication that she knows much about them outside of their names.
Like I said, it's a pet peeve of mine. Probably shouldn't bother me this much, except I've come to hate Celestia and Luna as rulers because they're constantly skipping out on their duties, either giving them to Twilight or just ditching them to help a filly get over her fear of the dark or whatever mundane problem she has. So every time it happens, it's another nail in the 'down with alicorns' coffin :3
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Schedules can be moved around and changed. Plus, we don't know how long in advance they got the invitation.
We also don't know when they arrived, or how. They could've just teleported inside the building without even seeing the bugbear.
I don't know about 'don't even know'. I mean, Cranky's best friends with a sea serpent. He and Matilda may have been government workers at one point.
Keep in mind, we only see them when they're not doing their duties. We're not going to be seeing them filling out mountains of paperwork because that's boring as shit.
Can we get a chart of how many duties they've given to Twilight, and how many they've done themselves?
Um... ahem... that's part of Luna's duties.
Your down with alicorns coffin is just entirely headcanon.
6092174 Hey, don't you dare to belittle Bloom & Gloom and dream duty
. We all know what happened last time those feelings were ignored.
What is this Slice of Life you speak of?
~Leonzilla
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Of course, that's what I get for not jumping to it as soon as it came out.
Thanks for answering.
~Leonzilla
OK, Pat is simply adorable, and I hope we get to see many, many more adventures with him.
i knew there was going to be fanfiction about this little guy!
i freakin' love Pat
6092282 np but I think some videos of it are still up on youtube
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In fact actually, I'm putting this in a GDoc because that is a LOT of text ^_^;;
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vqRpp2n7V0iJ1HQvoZf1u53UHtZAbOS0uNE-U_-6FlQ/edit?usp=sharing
... Sorry 'bout the ranting there, but as you can see, this IS a subject that gets to me about the show ^_^;; Celestia and Luna are built up as these great rulers and yet everything we see of them only convinces me that they're more like kids playing a Diarchy Simulator.
Who else would be more qualified to be the foal exchange student then Ditzy Doo? She has a heart of gold!
6092347 Thankfully there is always EqD with a bunch of links to the Episodes
Basically if the video exists somewhere, they got it.
~Leonzilla
his name is stanley
My god... Well, there's only one solution. ORGY!
And then Pat returned to the Changeling Kingdom to find Queen Dinky the Playful upon the throne, and Chrysalis suffering five forms of cuteness-induced diabetes.
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Dinky draws and colours in a heart in her notepad and the Changeling Kingdom has a power outage after all the fuses blow.
EDIT: If anypony has watched Monsters Inc., Dinky's love is like Boo's laughter in that world. More power than one kid should be allowed to weild.
I absolutely loved this. Couldn't stop laughing, especially at the bits with Dinky and the dress-up scene featuring the love... quintangle between the crusaders and the Terrible Twosome.
In other news, "rainbow kicks of justice" is my new favourite phrase.
Why does the tag on this story say complete?
We need more Pat!
Also more Dinky shenanigans in the changeling kingdom
Dammit, why cant I click the like button a infinite amount of times for all this win.
6091800 I totally agree with this! But hey this isn't Pat! This is Doomie and he's there because of Pinkie
So quick to be featured!
That episode was such an awesome hoot! It was so wonderful of the producers to give a bit of a shoutout to all the fandom's speculations.
As for the changeling, I just figured he got bumped a tad bit hard when everyone was thrown into the town hall and he figured that if he didn't move a muscle, nopony would notice him sitting there
Now, what we all have to do is go through the images of ponies caught up in Vynil's stereo-hog just before the crash and the folks in their seats to see who's "missing"
Excellent work, man - I really enjoyed this. The love triangle (or pentagram?) made me chuckle, and the whole story has a very entertaining slice of life vibe to it. Cool little trick with the scene breaks too
Also Fujin and Raijin at the end there, awesome
Keep up the good work!
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Maybe Vinyl's wubs were so epic, they opened a wormhole that sucked the lil' fella in from somewhere across the world. Hell, maybe she sucked him in from the future, where changelings live in Ponyville. (whether they live with ponies or rule them, we'll leave to speculation
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Self-evident answer: they did it specifically to kick up speculation and inspire fanworks on the subject. Like this one.
Hahaha! Yes! I knew this was coming!
We've been referring to this little guy as "Steve from accounting" but Pat works, too!
6092638 The whole episode is inspired by fanfiction, dude.
Also, I read somewhere there MAY be a point to the Changeling being there other than a clever reminder back to the Canterlot Wedding episode.
6092604 But if you watch that scene again, you'll notice the foals near him are cowering from him, so the ponies ARE somewhat aware he is there at the wedding.
6092353 So? It shows there is more to them than just being responsible characters. You don't want them to be as dull and bland as Princess Elise from Sonic 06, do you? I pray to God you don't!
6092113 I think this author is racist towards alicorns. XD
Also, I heard the Changeling MIGHT be a hint to a future episode. I also heard he could be Rhubarb, a character from a fanfic on this site of the same name. I hear a lot of things, mostly voices telling me to kill.
Must kill famous bronies and become the sole ruler of this fandom...
Sorry, I spaced out there for a second.
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tbf I only know four, two pure-blood and two transformed.
The two pure-blood I just think have no right to be rulers and should return the land back to the Three Tribes. Cadance and Twilight I'm okay with. Especially Twilight :3
6092733 If Hasbro makes an episode showing just how much hard work they do for their kingdom, you're gonna look really foolish. XD
And I'll be demanding credit for the idea if Hasbro does do that. XD
I like this story, I really do. And I could easily jot it down to the way you've portrayed changelings here as total individuals, and that probably wouldn't be a surprise to those we know me here on fimfiction. However, while that may have initially sparked my interest, there's much more that makes it a lovely read for me.
A major reason is how well it just works a cute, upbeat slice-of-life story. I have no doubt that some will take those few seconds of the changeling in the episode and him sitting apart from the fearful kids and will turn out a slew of sad/angst stories about his "misery of being an outcast and being persecuted because of his race by ignorant and hateful ponies at a time of love, while either just trying to make the wedding for altruistic purposes for his friend Cranky". If people like those stories, fine, but they're just not for me personally as we see plenty of those kind of changeling angst stories on this sight already.
But here, while Pat is disheartened a bit about the other children being scared of him, he's not being aggressively hounded at every turn like in some fanfics, and nor does he himself spend the whole time wallowing in wangst or lamenting how "rejected" he is. Pat is still a happy, outgoing and sweet little colt (he even takes part in the filly scouts for crying out loud!) and out of the thousands of changeling OCs out there, he's one of those I'd be happy to follow and see explored more.
He also has quite the interesting and even heartwarming relationships with the other characters, like with the CMC, Cheerilee (how he calls her 'Mom' is just an adorable ideas) and even DT and SS. It would've been easy to turn those last two into the designated antagonists of this story who pick on him, only for his designated romantic interest character to swoop down and save him, but no, even they have a fairly good relationship with him, even if it's for their own shallow ends. But hey, that's Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, what else do you expect? Not to mention, that scene itself was really funny.
And yeah, it was pretty damn funny. The aforementioned filly love... pentagon(?), Momma Cheerilee getting her hoof burned by acidic changeling blood, and even Twilight wiping a tear at the possible future of peace between pony and changelingkind while simultaneously fighting Bugbear. It remains a predominantly slice-of-life story at heart, but its showered with comedic beats like those that make it all the more enjoyable.
I also like the general idea of the changeling in question (Pat) being a child, which can work given how he is sitting in the children's section, which is then for a Exchange Student program story, something I'd love to see used more in mlp fanfiction, especially changeling stories.
I may have more to say later, we'll see, but for now, I can happily say this was a story I very much enjoyed and eagerly look forward to more of little Pat the Changeling in the future if you decide to revisit him again, hopefully about his life in the homeland.
10/10. Thumbs up and fav. An adorable little fic that lifts the spirits while at the same time not needing to indulge in the cliche angst/sadness that run rampant in changeling stories. Well done, mate.
Annoymous Pegasus was right
>But that is a story for another time.
I'm hoping that there is.
Darn it! I knew I should've been faster!!!.. Now I have to get rid of my own Random Changeling and/or change it.. Funny I named him Jeff but Pat works for me...
6092796 Cue the changlings are the real heroes and ponies are the speciest evil folk!
This was good.
The only thing that I think I wish I could have seen is to find out what Dinky was doing while all of this was going on. Don't get me wrong, Pat's adventures were a good read, but I think I also want to see Dinky's side of the story since, you've introduced her to begin with. Plus, we've only got only one scene with her and we have no idea what happened to her other then giving love freely to everyone she runs into. Just a few details here and there to balance out what was going on with her in the Changeling Kingdom.
But other then that, this was a good read.