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Chelis


Writer/Admin/Title VII requirement for Horse News; humanized/equestria girls fanfic writer. Pardon my grit

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Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy are helpless when it comes to dates and the associated baggage. They don’t even know how to kiss properly! With only a few hours to the prom, and their dreamy dates awaiting them, there’s only one way to make certain things go without a hitch.

Practice.

Proofread and was advised by the talented DustyPwny

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 39 )

So there will be more to this story?

Gah... Why do I keep reading these... Its too hot.
Oh wtf, I love Flutterdash too much. Its too cute.

-Shy

oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh! So adorablenesses!

I neeeeed more of this! I don't care how long it takes!

..I like this. I like this a lot.

Please update soon! *squee* :rainbowkiss:

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It was supposed to be a one shot

Oops!

5860890 Awww, shoot. That was awesome, though! Upvote for you! :heart:

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Thanks m8

I know that this is supposed to be a one shot, but I would love to see RD and Flutters attempt to get Soarin and Big Mac together.

Really enjoyed this, enough to see what happens next but if this shall be where it ends, ah well >.< but that last line I heard clearly in fluttershy's voice and just burst out laughing xD

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I like this idea.... Almost too much

No! Not a one-shot! :fluttercry:
Pretty please for a sequel of Flutters and Dash being matchmakers

Dat ending... WADDATWIST! :pinkiehappy:

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And include a sexy kissing scene... ;)

The writing for this story could definitely use improvement. The biggest problem I have with it is probably the under-utilization of contractions, followed closely by the tense errors.

I'm on mobile right now and can't really be bothered to put in the effort to pull out some examples from the text, but maybe tomorrow I will.

:rainbowderp: :rainbowwild: :rainbowhuh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowwild:
The whole of Rainbow through this story! Was fun. Maybe a sequel? :duck:

I'm... rather conflicted, when it comes to this story.

Half of me finds it overwhelmingly squee, which is a good thing...

And then there's the other half which can't help but get distracted by the dialogue which seems off, and the somewhat clunky text...

Well, I'll favorite the story!

More? Please? :D

Doesn't matter, getting lucky.

:rainbowwild: That is so, so very Rainbow Dash. Dash and Fluttershy were pretty nicely characterised, and the whole thing was really quite cute. As some others have said, a continuation of this either through sequel or an update would be fantastic, especially if it involves the girls playing matchmaker for Soarin and Mac. That said, it stands on its own fine, too, and all in all it was quite an enjoyable read.

Real plot twister at the end, but a cute story nonetheless. :rainbowkiss:

Big Mac and Soarin...

Well, theres another ship in the universe.

Awesome story!

Jesus christ Rarity! Rarity is now branded the closet perv.

Practice kissing is awesome. Once, Cassandra taught Rarity the secret to winning at tic-tac-toe in exchange for 5 sessions of practice kissing.

This is funny as hell. I like it. Irony and all. :rainbowlaugh:

You have my vote in making this more than 1 chapter!!!! Exciting!

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The ending is kinda dumb on the one hand, but kind of funny on the other, probably because it sounded like something considerably worse had happened.

AJ: Congrats on getting him!

Pinkie: Have fun! ;)

Rare: How was he in bed?

The last text came from her date himself, almost immediately after dropping her off.

Soarin: Hey, I know I can trust you, so can you not tell anyone what happened after we left prom? Thanks Dash.

Rainbow was in no mood to smile, but she did use whatever energy she had left to text Fluttershy.

Rainbow Dash: Hey

Back at Fluttershy's cottage, Fluttershy was awoken by the sound of her phone buzzer. Like Rainbow, she woke to a wave of sadness overwhelming her, wishing she would forget what happened that night. She also left early with Big Macintosh, with full view of her group of friends.

Pinkie Pie: How did it go?

Rarity: How was he in bed?

OMFG Rarity :rainbowlaugh:

1. I love The FlutterDash shipping! It's my favorite along with Sunset and Twilight!

2. I have to see a sequel, where Rainbow and Fluttershy have some fun. ;)

3. "Rarity: How was he in bed?" Omg. :rainbowlaugh:

Well, this has been a good enough read I'll follow you for it. Good job.

This is one of my favorite fics ever:heart: i love it so much:rainbowkiss: I have a fic that was just submitted. its very similar to this. the Mods might approved it by tomorrow:twilightsmile:

you have to do a sequel! it's very good

That was unexpected but funny

Do a sequels! Moar! Plz. I mean if u want to... :flutterrage::fluttershysad:

This is hilarious!!! That whole Soarin and Macintosh being gay for each other plot twist God save me please

Rarity: How was he in bed?

Oh my god, rarity!! Can you PLEASE stop saying THAT?! :rainbowlaugh:

Also, i'm so confuse about the title, and it makes me cringe :rainbowderp:
By the way, still love it thought :pinkiehappy:

XD HOLY SHIT! I can't breathe! That was fuckin' hilarious! That plot twist with Soarin and Big Mac being gay for each other got me; keep it up, man!

So...that was a ship I wasn't expecting. o_O;

WAIT, DID YOU ORIGINALLY POST THIS ON WATTPAD? :0

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