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Writer/Admin/Title VII requirement for Horse News; humanized/equestria girls fanfic writer. Pardon my grit



When the main six find themselves in our world, it is up to one high school student to protect them from forces that want to exploit them and the portal to Equestria for their own needs.

Based on the "Equestrian Invasion" threads on /mlp/

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dude nice chapter. wonder who he will meet next. my guess rarity

is this like one story from /mlp/ "pie" ?

pie= ponies in earth

close but no, it was more the girls humanized
the anon i was mentioning had a good story, but it was shitposted and then he was deleted and banned by scruffy

Who doesn't want to sleep in class?


Nah. He slept. I'm surprised Dash didn't.


Good point.

Nice I like it so far can't wait to read more:moustache:

:moustache: I like the cut of this guy's jib! After discovering who's sitting next to him, with a very nice mental checklist, he starts poking her?! Dashie, you gotta notice when people are poking you! Cant wait to read whats next!:rainbowlaugh:

The "Am I Trippin' Balls?" checklist... gotta love it.

Good job genius, i keep telling you a hundred times not to stay up all night but noooooo, you had to not listen!

Exactly what I'm doing right now :D. Nothing like playing video games and reading fan fics at 4 am

Brony MC is a bit of a turnoff, IMO.

Five words in and I see an error (The 'i' needs to be capitalised)

Good detail for a clichéd fic, u have my attention lets see if u can keep it

2859867 funny ass chapter. i love it. good work. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Goddammmit! I'm so pissed! You updated without letting me check? Arrrrgggghhhh!*stomps around in rage*

3380011 *stops and hugs* there there, its not your fault. People forget things. Just remember next time, OK?

whats rocket surgery

you know how people tell you either "its not rocket science" or "its not brain surgery"? well i decided to do both!

"Fun filled my ass" sounds reeeeeeeally gay. :rainbowlaugh:
Try "Fun filled, my ass" :twilightsheepish:

but that was the point ;)


Do you enjoy having fun fill your ass?:twilightoops:

na, I just enjoy fun!

funny read. cant wait till the others come in. it will be in day 2 right? hopefully its :pinkiehappy: and :yay: great work chelis. your writing is improving btw not that im any better. im working on improvement myself. cant wait till next update!


breaking news: I think I found the story's official theme song

Finish it :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

MC. Main character.

dude handled himself like a pro. if dash had sat next to me in junior year...I uh..I would not have handled the situation ....to the reserved degree that he did.

*Double face palm at pinkie*

Bad Girl! Don't ask!

Keep going dude this is getting better by the day.

*sigh* Pinkie being Pinkie.

Bad Pinkie! Mind-reading is rude! Schtahp it!

That was a awesome chapter I love it so far and can't wait to see what happens next to them and who he sees next.

I loved this chapter but again this guy is a pussy.I can't wait to see what happens next to them and to see when the others come.

I loved it it was Adorably cute hope he does that with all the girls.can't wait to see what happens next.And who shows up next.

Is this story near the end? :derpyderp2:

And here I was thinking that the princess was Celestia or - even better - Luna.

Nicely done, do you have like an outline of when you plan to release new chapters?

why yes
I keep a clandar on outlook and I stick to it, completing each step of the writing process, and i do each step in making a chapter every third day. usually each day there's two different stories to work on, other than my other story "harem", the other fics are unpublished ones im working to release later (hopefully this year)

I loved it it was awesome he would have won if he doesn't get cocky
I can't wait to see what happens next to them all.

Just as I was to surrender to the serenity of sleep, it smacked me like a ton of bricks that, in fact, Rainbow Dash was probably sitting right next to me.

Of course he's the ONLY one who thinks that

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