Starlight

The night Sunset Shimmer got into a fight with Princess Celestia was the last night she would see her ever her again. What was supposed to be a final journey through the portal to the human world becomes a situation of being in the wrong place at the wrong time.

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Color Nova

Color Nova #1 · Dec 27th, 2015 · · ·

Oh good, I thought Sunset was gonna die.

hakim35

hakim35 #2 · Dec 27th, 2015 · 5 · 1 ·

This is really a good story. Hope can see more.

emgrbu

emgrbu #3 · Dec 28th, 2015 · 2 · ·

This made me so sad. However, even if it's based based on another story, it's an interesting take on Sunset's arrival into the human world. You made it seem like it fit with Sunset's past, connecting her to Celestia. I like it.

Chelis

Chelis #4 · Dec 28th, 2015 · · ·

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Silent hill? No.

If I can describe it... It would be about the inhumanity of humanity from a non-misanthropic writer

Chelis

Chelis #5 · Dec 28th, 2015 · · ·

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Well based on real events that took place.

DustyPwny

DustyPwny #6 · Dec 29th, 2015 · · ·

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It's not so bad. It at least sparks an important side to the story.

mycutiemarkisagun

mycutiemarkisagun #7 · Dec 29th, 2015 · 3 · 3 ·

It's a shame Sunset had to provoke the brave officers, forcing them to defend themselves.

Lucky Seven

Lucky Seven #8 · Dec 29th, 2015 · 1 · ·

6778799 She dindu nuffin

Chelis

Chelis #9 · Dec 29th, 2015 · · ·

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god dammit MCMIAG!

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DustyPwny

DustyPwny #10 · Dec 29th, 2015 · 1 · ·

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JFalk

JFalk #11 · Dec 31st, 2015 · 3 · ·

Very well written!
I imagine that this Sunset would develop differently (with a different personality) than EqG-Prime's Sunset...

josue

josue #12 · Jan 12th, 2016 · 2 · ·

6778951 my feels I must have a sequel maybe she returns to Celestia and her world one day

josue

josue #13 · Jan 12th, 2016 · 4 · ·

Those two cops are disgrace to all cops everywhere that do their job correctly i curse them on pain of death they shall suffer at the hands of discord

Highlord Langslock

Highlord Langslock #14 · Mar 8th, 2016 · 2 · ·

It sucks that those police officers will probably get away with it, but at least Sunset survived and is now in good hands. I found this fic shortly after reading the latest heartbreaking chapter of Apologies Aren't Always Enough and I was in desperate need for a happier ending to similar circumstances.

MustacheMerlin

MustacheMerlin #15 · Apr 9th, 2016 · 3 · ·

I read this, horrified at the actions of those officers, but taking solace in the fact that they're fictional. Then I read the article you linked to. I am absolutely disgusted that anyone with a shred of humanity could do such a thing. I just don't understand.

josue

josue #16 · Apr 19th, 2016 · 1 · ·

7108425 there is no humanity in them they are beasts depraved dogs that should be put down

josue

josue #17 · Apr 19th, 2016 · · ·

6778955 no puns this is just to sad at the moment

MustacheMerlin

MustacheMerlin #18 · Apr 19th, 2016 · · 1 ·

7139434 Be very, very careful with that kind of thinking. That's the kind of thinking that lead to the Haulocaust. It's the kind of thinking terrorists use to justify themselves. It's probably what those very cops were thinking.

Never, ever seek to play god and judge who lives and dies. It's how monsters are made, no better than the very monsters you want to stop. Beware he who hunts monsters, lest he becomes one.

josue