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SonicBlitz18


A rocking brony with a love for crossover and adventure. Currently part time in college

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I DEMAND THE IMAGE LINK~

That story I do like to see a sequel.

I demand the sequel. Please.:fluttershyouch:

5211948

I looked it up on Bing.

A sequel would be something I would like.

It was great and I enjoyed it, but at the end the pacing was a bit too fast at the end and the story could've used a bit of fixing up. Still, the story was enjoyable and I liked it. I hope there will be a sequel to this!

Nice job other than a couple of typos. I can't wait for the sequel. I'm guessing Scoots had something similar happen to her with SS AND SB getting pregnant?

:pinkiecrazy: Sequel with Scootaloo, Sweetie and Spoon plz!

ALL OF MY YES!!!!!! But I must read it later.

I have a diamondbloom ship/clopfic in the works, but i've hit a few roadblocks with it. For a second, i was afraid this was going to be the same idea, but I'm glad only the ship is similar.

Now, I REALLY gotta finish it.

Nice buildup, good resolution, but it was a bit too hasty at the end there. Still a great one shot though.

5211948 I AGREE WITH THIS GUY!!! :flutterrage:

To me that escalated quickly of them having sex, anyway 10 out of 10. Also keep up the good work.

It's a pity. I enjoy the idea of the story. But applebloom not acting like herself thing and the grammatical error all over the place, I cant enjoy myself.

please make a sequel i would like to see how it happens:applecry:

Plz make the sequel!

Sequel!!! The Horny Collective demands it!!!!

I love this story please make a sequal to this story I want to see how it continues:raritystarry::rainbowdetermined2:

5424649 Yes, it's the sequel. I finished it two weeks ago so I thought I wait until Christmas to pull it off.

5424652 oh ok great job can t wait to read more of your stories:raritystarry:

A sizable amount of tense slippage, quite a bit of character whiplash - especially around the time DT confesses to being a virgin - and numerous points where paragraphs should be split because a new character starts speaking...but overall, interesting.

Wait, so the kids grew up without parents?


~OreoKookie

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I'm pretty sure that despite the pregnancies were a little unexpected (that just being that Sweetie just realized her estrus period and it was coincidence that Spoonie was in heat too) and their jobs, there is still a lot of time for their kids, not to mention their families will more than likely help out.

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While this is true, I don't think they were around their kids as much as regular parents. Then again, this is us looking to far into a story so, yeah.


~OreoKookie

I'm not certain if you are from the southern part of the states but the usage of y'all when AJ and AB talk is not in the right terms. Y'all is mainly plural possessive and and can be used singular but only in some special circumstances. If you'd like some help with the southern vernacular i'd be happy to help since im form texas

5570276 Thanks that would be helpful. Plus I also live in Texas by the way.

Well I must that this was a good short story and how it ended way to surprise us with ending. It really wasn't expected and I have read a lot of fanfics almost like this but this ending is really Good, I give a 4 out of 4 hooves plus a wings up for the ending

Bronze knife huh...

Anyone else feel a future murderer in their future :rainbowderp::twilightoops::pinkiegasp::raritydespair::fluttershysad::applejackunsure:

5570276 north Floridian here. Can also assist.

Because the further south you go in florida, the further north everything looks.

That reminds me: How's Zecora handling this incident and how will her boy or girlfriend help her?

Sadly, the constant grammar issues, especially the frequent and random tense shifting, made this unreadable for me. I wanted to get into it, but those problems are just too distracting.

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Yeah, this was when I just started. So yeah, I don't blame you in the slightest in this.

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