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Distorted Flare

Distorted Flare #1 · Sep 3rd, 2014 · · ·

Hey thought I would be the first to comment on your page. Nice story!

goaway

goaway #2 · Sep 3rd, 2014 · · ·

Rough_Draft #3 · Sep 3rd, 2014 · · ·

That was sexy cute! Nicely done, hardly any grammar errors (in a clop story no less!).

tigrean

tigrean #4 · Sep 3rd, 2014 · · ·

Well I have to say it was tastefully done and sexy Very well done.

Spinner of Tales

Spinner of Tales #5 · Sep 4th, 2014 · · ·

After she was sure Fluttershy was unsuspecting, she went down a little further and let her hoof glide over one of her nipples. It elicited the expected gasp, making both of them giggle.

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StormLuna #6 · Mar 4th, 2015 · · ·

Absolutely spectacular story. I have a feeling that this was the first time for both of them, am I right?

RandomSomepony4357

RandomSomepony4357 #7 · Mar 20th, 2015 · · ·

Thanks for the kind replies, everypony. I really appreciate it. Feel free to call me out on inconsistencies or errors of any kind.

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Yes, they both basically manage to come out of their shell by accident.

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