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ThatOneWriter


I dunno if I can be your favorite, but if you like my writing, that's pretty good in my book.

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Twilight and Fluttershy watch a meteor shower together. Each makes a wish. But wishes don't come true, right?


Cover art by GAleckz. Edited by Cerulean Voice

Reading by Goombasa!

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Comments ( 31 )

Nice little piece here TOW.

Great work as always.

>Now a pairing of mine.<

You influence me so.

D'aaaawwww. :heart:

That was adorable. :yay::twilightsmile:

Beautiful. Very beautiful. The way Twilight kept it a secret, yet was kind of obvious to me, only hoping that she'd get her wish.

And what do you know? She did. These two feel like very good snuggle buddies. :heart:

Hmm... interesting. As a man of science I think I'm gonna have to see if Twilight's findings on the power of shooting stars are repeatable. :raritywink:

Eeeeeeeee Cuteness abounds.

Twilight the master manipulator...

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Heh, that was the goal I set out with a while ago. I wanted to be one of the authors that sells people on TwiShy. It's kind of an underrepresented ship outside of clop and comedy.

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Cuteness is something that's just naturally there when both Twi and Fluttershy are in a fic. :yay::twilightsmile:

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I think the two would make a very cute couple if the show ever took that path. Unfortunately, I have to write that myself to see it happen, basically. There just aren't that many experienced writers shipping them.

On the bright side, there are sooooo many TwiShy pictures. I think there might be enough for me to write a new story with a never-used-before cover art every single day of the year. I might not even have to rely on new art at any point if I did that.

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Hm. I've regrettably never seen a shooting star before. Let me know if it works, all right? :raritywink:

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Fitting song, I think~

*squeeeeee*

I needed a good TwiShy one-shot. Thank you for this.

Only trouble I has was the "new moon" bit. New moon = no visible moon. But then again, who cares when you're coming out to see the stars for a bit before having a nice make-out session?

<3 DarqFox

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I know that fact about the new moon. I switched it from the full moon because it seemed like the new moon would make things too bright to see the meteor shower. Probably just a pointless concern of mine, and I really didn't consider the other implications of the switch. I'll probably switch it back.

I'm glad that you enjoyed it, though! As I've told you before, I've strived to become one of the writers that makes TwiShy a solid, believable, and popular ship. It'll take more than one fic, obviously, but hopefully this helps.

OK now i'm jellos. wish o could write a one-shot as good as this.
This was a big bag of adorableness good job 4.9/5 not a prefect score but VERY close.
~Tobben

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Thank you! Glad you liked it!

“Well…” Twilight said, rubbing the back of her neck. “It turns out that with all the lights on at night, there’s too much light pollution, at least for most astrological sights.” She sighed. “If I can’t see anything, there’s no point in looking.”

Wouldn't she have had this problem with her old home, as well? Granted, she was probably fibbing here.

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Originally, this was supposed to be a lie that Twilight admits was an excuse. Instead, the story flow never led me down that particular way, so it's just kind of an odd reason now.

Amazing fanfic! Specially because I was hearing to a song from Legião Urbana and most of them are or melancholic or romantic; it was a romantic one, so the mood got a lot more intense while reading. Your writing is simple and I admire it in you. The way you managed to show us what happened that night is good. I really think you could have added some more details, however this subject is more like about writing style, so no need to worry about this too much (only if your intentions were to put as much details as possible).

Criticisms aside, your fanfic is awesome and I forgot to say your idea of 'stargazing to unite both ponies is very creative and cute /)(*3*)(\.

I love it TwiShy is one amazing shipping

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Ah, yes. Detail is usually my Achilles heel. As you said, I normally just keep things simple, and that sometimes causes description of things to be a bit...lacking.

I'm glad you enjoyed it, though, especially with the nice musical accompaniment. The music you listen to can do so much to either enhance or detract from the experience. I personally find it distracting, however, so I read in silence, but I think I might try having music sometime.

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Glad you liked it! I've been trying to give TwiShy a few good stories, since it doesn't really have a reputation for producing quality fics. I'm quite happy that the general consensus so far has been that this is one of the good ones.

The truth is that I have not found many TwiShy shipping stories that I like and well this one I liked thanks for a good read. :twilightsmile:

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You're welcome!

TwiShy, unfortunately, has only a short list of good stories. This is mostly due to the fact that TwiShy authors seem to be too inexperienced to pull it off. It's a hard ship, honestly. Two introverted, relatively quiet characters may make for a stable ship, but it also tends to result in a boring story in the wrong hands. I have a TwiShy adventure in my favorites, and it works, believe it or not. It depends on the author.

5251033 I think that I will check it out then

Took me a while to get around to it, but finally was able to sit down and read it. Great work, TOW :pinkiehappy:

As I promised, I read it. It think it was well written, although I saw a couple of things which bothered me a bit, besides the Alicorn Twilight thing :twilightblush:
Maybe you should check out my TwiShy fics one day if you haven't alrady. They're popular for some reason :rainbowlaugh:

Lovely story you have here :raritystarry:

Hrk. I think I just got diabetes.

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Good thing I always carry insulin around! :twilightsmile:

Okay, the blanket part was cheesy
But in a really good way
This was good. Really good.

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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

PresentPerfect
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For being a fluffy shipfic where both ponies have always loved each other, I actually enjoyed this. :O

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:O

Present-senpai has noticed me! And looked favorably upon my work!

But seriously, thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it! :pinkiesmile:

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