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Elric of Melnipony

Elric of Melnipony #1 · May 9th, 2015 · · ·

two(teh shy mare being reluctant of it at first)decide
Dash is abotu to learn something

This is why even story descriptions should be reread by the writer before being published.

rail885478544 #2 · May 9th, 2015 · · ·

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I guess they are pleased with anyone who will put spaces between their paragraphs.

Maxes Altho #3 · May 9th, 2015 · 1 · ·

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Granted, one or two errors in the description is pretty light compared to some of the shit we've seen submitted.

rail885478544 #4 · May 9th, 2015 · · ·

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I strongly agree

Loki_115

Loki_115 #5 · May 12th, 2015 · · ·

not bad

Seanzilla115 #6 · May 12th, 2015 · · ·

5967132 Thanks. Had a bit of help on it from a friend of mine

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