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DCLzexon


i arts, and apparently write.

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UUUUUUUUGH 17K words? that's way to long for me to get into when i need to go to bed >_> .....

4940958 I apologize for the length, some times these things get away from me. :twilightblush:
4940742 Prequel technically but yes! point is more bdsm themed sex!

:rainbowderp::rainbowhuh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild: MY `EMOTES.

“I wonder if I could convince Applejack for some fun soon? I miss getting use out of this riding crop…”

Sequel please?:twilightblush:

Yay the sequel is here!:yay:

Wait. who is pinkie with? Gilda?

4941152 SHHHHH! NOT SO LOUD!

4941152 Also.
HOLY SHIT. one of my favorite writers on this site is reading my work.

that is so awesome! :rainbowkiss:




btw your prose is also sweet as hell.

sequel eh? :trixieshiftright:
*throws pen, notes, and textbooks in the air*

aaaaaaaand favd..flutterdom :rainbowwild: thou.. now we jsut need applejack and rarity...maybe a few other couples to >.>

I was readin the description and it reminded me of Trying not to Love You by Nickleback.

4941705 Not sure if i like being compared to nickle back, i might have to change the descript later :trixieshiftright:

4941712 i meant that it just reminded me of the song. There was no ill intent there. It is a good description.

4941717 Dont worry, i take it with a grain of salt. I just like replying to comments, they are the life blood on which i feed on after all. :pinkiecrazy:

4941719 ok yeah true. Personally I probably could have phrased that second comment of mine softer but that may just be me. And thanks for replying anyway.

4941152 Nah she's with Gummy.

I needed this in my life. This and the Twixie fic are, together, two of the very best things I have ever read on this site. :pinkiehappy: New favorite author? New favorite author. :D

Have a like, a fave, and a 'gasm.

I almost don't want to know what Rarity has been doing to other ponies and their depravity, the little voyuer...she probably goes to every one of Pinkie's "parties" uninvited...

And she does love being the center of attention when she's discovered by Pinkie...

4941001 Oh i plan on it....just not right away after working on this one X_x
4941017 hope you enjoyed :heart:
4941567 sleep and proper education can be damned, there are ponies having sex that need to be read.
4941641 Im working on ideas~
4942126 atleast thats what im going to keep telling people :trixieshiftright:
4942199 why thank you, glad you enjoy my work so much:rainbowkiss:
4942408 Dont give me any ideas, Rarity's chapter is already shaping up to be the most perverted and i haven't even written it yet.

4942419

Dont give me any ideas...

I hate it when people say that, because there's so much more to say...

But I'll be good!

:pinkiegasp: *Inhale*
:pinkiehappy:
:pinkiesmile:
:pinkiecrazy:

Holy shit, that was amazing. I love subDash, and this delivered. Ooooh, did it ever deliver! I fucking loved it, and bluntly just about ripped my dick off reading it. Er, figuratively, of course *shudders*. A few typos here and there, names uncapitalised and things like lack of apostrophe at times like "Pinkies friends" when it should have been "Pinkie's friends", but otherwise, damn you man, I love this one.

I liked this story, the solution Fluttershy came up with was brilliant. But why, oh why, must Twilight and Trixie be like that? It's so sad, they could be really good for one another, instead they're just hurting eachother. Oh I know it's all about have passionate sex, but it can't be doing either of them any good outside of that. It'd just make them more aggressive and insecure. The saddest part is that they could be really supportive of eachother and make eachother feel really about themselves, if they could just admit that they admire eachother. They could go about their day feeling great about themselves, but instead they spend their time being aggro, seriously you can't have sex like that and feel good about yourself the next day. And if they were supportive of eachother it would NOT negate the possibility of having rough passionate sex, it may not be as violent but that's probably a good thing. If you go around with scratches and bruises all the time, people are going to start accusing your partner of being abusive. Sorry to rant like this, I just think it's sad that they are just one step away from having a wonderful relationship.

4942842 I'm really sorry, I fucked up big. I don't know why I missed so many errors.

4942857 Its okay, I'm glad my story is good enough to make you put so much thought into it.

The important thing to remember is that their fighting is just the way they tell each other they care. Its dysfunctional in a way, but think of it like two best friends, they fight with each other and get on one anothers nerves because their so close and can trust that its okay to do so in the end.

And dont worry, they have plenty of soft cuddly moments where they stop their arguing and act like a normal lovey dovey couple, why do you think they where resting so close to one another?

Maybe i can even address this in a future fic expansion


4942842 Thanks for enjoying it, and I'm glad you fapped like mad, I'm a smut writer in the end, so i'm trying my damndest to make my work inspire boners, and make the few sisters we got drip :trollestia:

will work on those errors pronto, thanks for being a sport and pointing em out!

I've said it before and I'm gonna say it again!

Once again, outstanding work! :twilightsmile:

Is this part of a series, because the continuity is pretty good.

And seriously, we need that Rarity/Applejack story, and then an all-out, no-holds barred orgy with EVERYBODY

And now i over my everything TWICE!

I plan on reading theses stories later, but i have to ask this now. Will there be a Sparity or Rarijack one?

4945114 I have plans for rarijack, yes :3c

4945142 just F/F or will Spike come into play? (Not sure if old or big enough to do so. Or if he likes somepony else)

4945148 unforchanitly spike is currently just there as sass character. I dont really have any plans for him to BE with anyone, but i can always think about something later down the road

4945155 aww :fluttershysad: oh well. Can't wait for the fic!

You wrote this in 4 days?
HOLY SHIT!
I must say this;
YOU ARE THE GREATEST RISING AUTHOR I HAVE EVER SEEN
3 FICS, ALL OF THEM BRILLIANT. YOU WILL ONE DAY BECOME ONE OF THE GREATEST

4946138 I dont think im worthy of that praise, but I atleast to think that i come up with semi unique and good concepts for my stories :trollestia:

thank you for enjoying my work so much

4943026 Oh yes, I understand that, it's just, why fight at all if they really do care. Apart from that moment where they were resting together, there was a distinct lack of loving moments in either story. Okay, there was almost one in their story but it didn't quite get there in my opinion. I'm glad their fighting is only a sometimes thing, but still, it can't be too healthy for them. Take the moment after the above mentioned one, after they finished screaming at each other they both just ended up in a huff, when they could have still been holding eachother and having a good time, just saying.

On that moment though, I'm surprised that Rainbow didn't cringe at that. Twilight said she was going to rape Trixie, Rainbow knows what it is to really rape someone. For Twilight to say that about someone she apparently loves, well it surprises me that it didn't disgust her at least, if not anger her

good work there!
and now i'm looking very much forward to the next sequel

yes yes yes this was amazing fav fav fav:pinkiecrazy:

pretty good read... had great 'unf' inducing moments here and there but compared to the first one this story had more 'icing' than cake. too much build-up (which is not bad) but way less clop material than the first.

4948096 The unfortunate nature of a story about denial play, even the plot is meant to leave you hanging more times than not.

dont worry, I plan to fully make up for that when I get around to writing the continuation bonus chapter :pinkiecrazy:

4948105 i look forward to it :pinkiecrazy:
don't get me wrong... i love how you set the story, how you pace, and DEFINITELY how you build sexual tension between unlikely couples. You're attention to those makes the clop all the more satisfying and enjoyable. however... err.. make the clop as great as the build up (like make something - actual rutting - happen) just like the first.

this still is better than the ussual clop i read so... *clap* *clap*

now if you'll excuse me im going to take a realllllllly cold shower.

I loved it. My hat's off to you. Crazy good!

I...I don't know how to feel about this.

I mean, I loved the story.

But I had an idea for something like this about six months ago and never got around to writing it, and here's yours. Now I feel like I'd just be copying if I even attempted mine. Plus I've tried writing porn before. Everything's great up until I try to write the actual SEX PART.

Just because I'm curious, how long have you been writing erotica to get this good?

4952068 Thats just it. this is only my 2nd attempt at erotica.
I am a person who immerses himself in smut how ever, I've done pin up/pervy/porn art for the past 3 years of my life, hang around perverts who do write or draw smut for a living, and i take a very artistic interest in the finer points of the art and love to read good quality porn.

Also Im some one who is very critical on storys/plots, But mostly character motivations and interactions, so what i lack in experience i some what make up for in taste and pure dedication to trying to make a good story.

I am no where a genuis or talented for such things, nor am i a better writer than many of the smut writers here or anywhere for it, It simply allows me a head start.

Oh you brilliant son of a bitch.

You do angry and kinky in all the right ways.

~Skeeter The Lurker

"the joys she could inflict,"
sounds painful.....

this was as good as your first story I await your third story:twilightsmile:

Pinky being the kinky one making the others look inocent should be with Gilda....and spike...at the same time. That is my gueas.
Ps. I think Pinky went back in time to wright the origonal ponysutra together with Luna.

This story made my day, you have such amazing imagination. All the Flutterdom/Dashsub thingy is well thought out :twilightblush:

Now I want to know what Rarity is hiding under her sheets :trixieshiftright:

What the fuck did I just read??? :derpyderp2:
I need to go bleach my collective consciousnesses.... I feel dirty... I'm going to go read come yuri that isn't dominatrix thank you... but meone send my click if there is ever a sequal... :ajbemused:

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