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Chaotic Ink


Game over, mare! GAME OVER!

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This story is a sequel to The Witching Hour


Midnight Storm has had one heck of a year. She's gone from being a wandering outcast to a respected and liked member of the community of Ponyville, a captain of a secret guard created by Celestia herself, and even a mother.

That was last year.
This year she'll have to deal with chaos entities, rogue dragons, and her past. And that's all just before Nightmare Night!

Follow Midnight and her friends and family as they chart their way through one life changing event after another in part 2 of The Witching Hour!


Cover Image by Valkyrie Girl

Chapters (24)
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yes yes yes yes yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy:

Posted just before I have to leave but I'll immediately read it once I get the chance.

See, Celestia, this is why withholding information always backfires. Better to keep them informed than have someone be able to use that info as leverage.

What happened to requiem For The Kirins? is it on hiatus or something?! ANSWER ME!!!! :flutterrage:

Should I just shut up and post the next chapter already?

yes plz :p lol hard decisions for midnight D: I blame you for not doing my homework :derpytongue2: hook, line, sinker....:trollestia:

Should I just shut up and post the next chapter already?

POST THE NEXT CHAPTER ALREADY! :flutterrage:

A triumphant return for one of my favorite MLP OCs! Why do I get the feeling that Celestia was directly responsible for the disappearance (death!) of the Kirins?
Great chapter, and I can't wait for the next one.

So I guess you still haven't got your cover? damn, I understand real life and laziness, but come'on!!

You know what I'd like to see that would really shake up your re-telling of season 2 would be if Discord doesnt get stoned at the end.

I noticed few typos, but the should be obvious when you do a quck read through. To help out I believe you meant to say 'cat's maw' instead of "cat's meow". Looking forward to the rest.

Faust bless thee, Chaotic Link :pinkiehappy: :rainbowkiss:
Great return of my favorite OC (along with Nyx)

holy **** my heart skiped a beat when i saw this on the featured list

Oh boy! I just LOVE when an author I'm following posts a new story and FIMfic neglects to update me!

In all seriousness though, I'm glad this is continuing and I look forward to see where this all goes.

I find it particularly enjoyable that you included Screwball in this chapter, given she's one of my favorite background characters. Will there be room for Screwball after the season premiere, or have you gotten the whole thing written out already?

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It says it the story description that there will be an update after every part of the main story. In other words: next chapter there after season 2 is done.

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Chaotic Link

Didn't realize I changed my name :derpyderp2:

5051590 :twilightblush: And here goes my dignity......
Sorry, I had a long day.
Still, your story is awesome :pinkiesmile:

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You dignity is in that box and if you grab it now you can get out of the internet

You linked the wrong story in your blog post...

omg this was great is it wrong that I like your version better then the original can't wait for the next chapter. :yay: :yay: :yay: :yay: :yay: :yay:

For nightmare night could you do something like the Nightmare Before Christmas opening song but MLP version? A Captain Sparklz in Equestia fic did it wonderfully and I would love to see it again!

“Well, if anypony needs me, I’ll be outside in the chocolate puddles with a giant squiggle straw.”

If it started raining chocolate milk, that just about would sum up my reaction.

Well it's nice to see Screwball, I almost forgot about her. Nice to see her in a story. So is she Discord's kid or what?

Depending on what information Discord has isn't a real guarantee. Spirit of Disharmony and Chaos here, not exactly Mr. Honesty. Even if he does give here anything, will it be the whole truth or just bits and pieces with crucial information omitted from it.

Welp, top of the feature box! Not a surprise to me, how about you :raritywink:?

So Discord "discorded" AJ pretty much the same way? Shame on you, Dissy! I thought you were better than this!

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O... ok sorry I was pretty much dead with it being midnight and all *puny right* no ok ;(

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I believe they mean the original episode.

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Definitely a big surprise, considering I never made it past 8th place with the first part.

I thought Discord's approach could have been better, but, yeah, the results would be the same, since lying is the opposite of honesty.

Woo hoo! :yay: I've been waiting for this!

Minor typo:

Bursting through yet another set of doors Midnight finally breathed a sigh of relief. “Finally,” she muttered. She was in the throne room anti-chamber, where those wishing to see the princesses waited their turns.

I believe "anti-chamber" here should be "antechamber".

(Insert obligatory "Write moar faster!!11!1!11" here.) :twilightsmile:

Ok I'm just gonna say it, I wanna hug Squeaks!

good start to this season, looking forward to more of the witching hour.

The 'Samurai Jack' reference was a nice touch. There was one typo where you used 'form' rather than 'from', but I made a similar error when I used 'tried' instead of 'tired'. Although my question is why Celestia nor Luna never bothered to tell her before now? Looks like I'll have to wait to find out. However here is my problem with that:

5053736 After that sucking the watermelon scene in Chapter 19 of 'The Witching Hour' who doesn't?!

5054046 That's right, she's just so cute! :yay:

5052709 I meant the organel TV show that used discord sorry I was not clear. :facehoof:

5054055 agreed Squeaks is now number two on my favorite oc charters list sorry but Nyx will always be number one. :twilightsmile: :twilightsmile:

Celestia watched the door close behind the kirin and sighed, looking back at the stained glass and the various historical moments they showed. ‘I will tell you what happened eventually Midnight. Now, however, you have an important and dangerous task ahead of you. A focused mind might just mean the difference between victory and defeat.’

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the cliff hanger the horror!:derpytongue2:

YES, you should post the next chapter already!:flutterrage:

Woo! Sequel- ... ... what the hell is that?
https://www.dropbox.com/s/h5cspss32x5pm8g/Screenshot%202014-09-25%2021.43.07.png

... do I detect foreshadowing? <_<;; Before it was strange OCs appearing in there and now it's that thing. What the crapola? XD

Ink are you doing something over there?! D8<

Edit:

to decided

to decide.

“Sorry Midnight Storm, but your princess is in another castle,” :rainbowhuh:............:rainbowderp:........:rainbowlaugh::trollestia::rainbowlaugh: OH GOD MY STOMACH!!!! *dies*

.....more? Also, Midnight took the loss of her wings surprisingly well, considering, y'know, fire and that tail she has.

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