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This story is a sequel to Against the Wind


Twilight and Trixie raise their new foal. A rambunctious unicorn colt, whom they named Starswirl after the historical unicorn wizard. And like the mage with whom he shares his namesake, young Starswirl Sparkle seems to be destined for greatness.

CANCELLED STATUS: A lot has changed in the show since I started writing this. Trixie's return, Starlight, and Canon Starswirl that I just couldn't find a way to write around. Sorry about that. :applejackunsure:

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 122 )

And so it begins...

YES!! THE SEQUEL HAS ARRIVED!!:yay:

"It's a colt. And what a colt!"

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: you got that line from The Simpson didn't you:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

"PUSH!" Nurse Redheart yelled from behind her.
"I'm trying to! It won't go back in!" Twilight screamed.

Really Twilight?:facehoof:

4367666 :ajbemused::rainbowlaugh: but still keep up the good work

4367465 That's actually a reference to something I know of, but I can't for the love of Luna remember where I heard it

4375369 Family Guy: Emission Impossible.

And for the next trick I will fave this story!

*click*

TA-DAAA

"PUSH!" Nurse Redheart yelled from behind her.
"I'm trying to! It won't go back in!" Twilight screamed.
"No, Trixie, you push! Princess Sparkle, just be ready to catch the foal!" Redheart advised.

I fucking died. Woke up the family with my laughter.

:rainbowlaugh: that ending was great

'...Oh. Was that today?'

GLORIOUS!

That ending was epic. :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:

Cadance saying how much Stark looks like his 'uncle',
The whole Discord exchange,
Trixie walking down the stairs during history,

I feel bad for Pumpkin though. She has no friends because of her brother's hovering.:fluttershysad:

:rainbowlaugh:You, my good sir, have just made my day.

Great chapter! :pinkiehappy: This is shaping up even better than the first part!

4451822 That's the idea. The first chapter is really more of a prologue. It really ought to have been the last chapter of ATW, but here you have it. More to come soon-ish.

Why do I get the feeling the Cadence figured (or will figure) out that "Stark" is Shining's Biological son? Or better yet, when "Stark" figures out who his uncle really is.

Why didn't you mark this story as a sequel? You can do it by putting a prequel story ID in your story settings. The site will do everything else for you.

4454066 SHHH! It's a secret!
4454883 Thank you. Fixed!

Dayum that ending :rainbowlaugh:

:twilightsheepish:Well this is going to be an awkward Parent/Teacher conference.

That's just evil, dude. You're evil.

Remind me to get one of those coffee worship shirts for Trixie's birthday.

Excellent chapter!

I was scared to read this chapter because of the title. It was as bad as I thought. Stark had to ask about his father while Twilight wasn't there. Stark is going to need some serious therapy after Trixie explains everything. Plus, we still have to deal with the Epilogue from 'Against the Wind'.


4474283 You might want to get her this sign also.

Dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuun

Comment posted by Frankie2 deleted Jun 7th, 2014

4510480 Really?:duck:
I thought I was stating the obvious.:rainbowhuh:
Oh well, sorry.:fluttershysad:

She gave it a bath?

Then fed them after midnight?

No one ever listens to the old China Man's warnings....

4510544
Never saw that movie (Gremlins, right?)

4510768 Yeah. Good movie, but don't expect it to follow many laws of physics. It's mostly a funny movie xD

So he finally gets to learn that he is the byproduct of accidental incest between his mother's brother and his mother, who happened to be a long lost family member who fell for her sister. Took you all of four chapters...


...CONGRATULATIONS! YOU JUST BROKE A RECORD!:trollestia:

"Discord!" Rarity fumed. "It is incredibly cruel to toy with somepony's heart like that. You should be ashamed."
"You're one to talk." Spike said under his breath.

Good for you Spike, finally see she for what she is!

Celestia does know they make candles in the shapes of numbers now?

The amount of cliffhanger in this chapter is unbearable, MOAR NAOW! :flutterrage::twilightangry2:

Please?

4517833 You have to wait until Saturday like everypony else.

4526191 But saturday is like, four days away! Urgh, fine... :facehoof:

Dem abs :rainbowlaugh: wish my own work was this good :twilightsheepish:

Lols, lols everywhere

Crunches? That noise what Shining doing crunches on the bed??

Anyway, does Twilight and Trixie know that they are actual sister? Why she wasn't raised with their family?

4546098 Read the original, especially the final chapter.

4546231 That's what I am talking about. Do they know the truth?

4546344 yeah they know the truth

4546344 No. Only her father knows the details surrounding Trixie's birth.

4546344 Orion told them.:ajbemused:

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