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Dying. Funny thing, that. It never happens how you expect it.


After Twilight is kidnapped, it's up to Trixie and the Elements of Harmony to save her. They travel to Canterlot in search of answers, but get more than they bargained for. With some truly surprising knowledge, they set out on a quest to save the princess.

Others in this series:
1. Trixie's Return
2. Something About Her

Chapters (7)
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Comments ( 148 )

Lol Discord slapping his own mouth off... Classic!

4278897 Lol. I had hoped I wrote him well enough. :yay:

4278918 i found with Discord the farther out there you go the better he comes across.

In my experience anyway.

4278960 I feel like I just don't make him enough of a douche and a bit too helpful at times, but I think I'll just blame Flutters for that. :twilightsheepish:

4278966 always remember there is a twist to everything he does. He WILL help but in his own unique way (princess twilight pt 2).

4278992 That's sorta' what I meant. Lol. He's too straightforward. I'm hoping, with the next chapter being a story, that it doesn't seem too OOC for him. :unsuresweetie:

4279095 there's a good opportunity right there
He might tell the truth but he's not a hole truth nothing but the truth type of guy

The door was gone, replaced by a small tree with leg-like roots. It took chase from nothing in particular down the stairs. As it reached freedom, it shouted out into the night air, "Leeeeroooy Jenkiiins!!!"

:applejackconfused::rainbowderp::fluttershysad::duck::pinkiegasp::What was that?
:derpyderp2::I don't know, but it looks like it's heading to Fluttershy's chicken coup.

Discord snorted in amusement. "Obscurity always was good at that," He mused.

Sorry, just felt like being silly.:derpytongue2: Anyway, nice start. I look forward to more.



Damn! :pinkiegasp: Why didn't I think of that! That's brilliant! :raritystarry::fluttershysad:

Surry knows indeed. :twilightsmile:

Btw, I'm glad you managed to put this excellent piece together. :raritystarry:

And Discord and Fluttershy are lovers? :rainbowhuh:

4279458 It's touched on briefly in the first one. Yes, they are. I suppose a lot of things would have been forgotten by now, considering how long it's been since I wrote for this series. DiscordxFluttershy, Spikebloom, RainbowxSpitfire, and Cheesy Pie are all side ships in this. They're not a main focus at all, but they exist nonetheless. AJ's single though. :rainbowlaugh:

AJ: :ajbemused:

I may actually do a one-shot Fluttercord side-story for this. They live together. I believe I mentioned that in Trixie's Return as well. :twilightsheepish:


Btw, I'm glad you managed to put this excellent piece together.

Excellent? You guys are too nice to me. :unsuresweetie:

4279766 Lol. Well thank you. How'd you manage to get a free meal at McDonald's? I'm in the Navy, and I can't even get a free meal there on veteran's day or memorial day! :rainbowderp:

4279909 That. Is. AWESOME! :pinkiegasp:

Edit: Oh, and congrats on the permit, man. :twilightsmile:

4279930 Wow. :rainbowderp: That's a bit...over the top...but still cool. :pinkiehappy: It's awesome you were able to inspire him to be himself. :twilightsmile:

4279949 Well, your day just seems to be getting better and better. Lol. I'm glad to hear it. :pinkiesmile:

4279949 Btw, you're lucky. :raritywink: Everyone else has been waiting for this story since Feb 09. :twilightsheepish:

4280021 Lol. I dabble in many arts. :moustache::trollestia::rainbowlaugh:

No need to thank me, though. I don't do much defending. :twilightsheepish: I'm a medical guy.

:twilightangry2: Don't mess with me Dash. I have a medical background. I know what makes you tick.

:rainbowhuh: Ok...Jesus!

:twilightsmile: Oh yes. .....:facehoof:

Lol. Sorry. I love the Mentally Advanced Series. :rainbowlaugh:

Idk if you watch my videos or not, but later I'll be doing a livestream on youtube with a friend of mine. :twilightsmile:

4280107 I was wondering who that was. Lol. Your profile is private. :twilightsheepish:

4280149 Ah. I see. Lol. I was never shameful of the fact I was a brony. I have no shame. :rainbowlaugh:

4280260 There's a funny story about this, but for a later date. :rainbowlaugh:

"Leeeeroooy Jenkiiins!!!"

You won me with that line :rainbowlaugh:

4281437 No, thank YOU my good friend!
Extra note, close to finish the 1st page, expect it either tomorrow or this Friday.

4281776 Crelyous:rainbowlaugh:
This is my signature name, you know.

4281784 Mine's Okrin. made it long, long ago, and I never changed it. Lol. I just watched you and sent you a note. :pinkiehappy: I really like your art! :heart:

4281796 Coolio, I'll check it later, I'm doing a small work here, and thanks for the compliment:ajsmug:

4281875 Nice, that was fun to make =9

4285509 I'm going to have to read the comic she's in. Yours has intrigued me. :trixieshiftright:

4285560 The "You're Perfect" one? That one has been on a small hiatus 'til I find the proper vectors, if I can't, then I'll have to create them myself, and that's rather a pain... for me. :ajbemused:

4285573 I meant My Little Sterelis. I like Lene, and I want to know more about her. :rainbowderp:

The door was gone, replaced by a small tree with leg-like roots. It took chase from nothing in particular down the stairs. As it reached freedom, it shouted out into the night air, "Leeeeroooy Jenkiiins!!!"

Shouldn't that be 'Tree-roy' Jenkins? :trollestia:

I gotta say, that cover art is amazing, matches the epicness of the story i say

4291144 Lol. I thought it was cool too. It was very...Orphen. This story has not begun its badassery yet. :rainbowdetermined2:

4291177 *forms evil finger pyramid* excellent, muhahahahaha, I mean, cool

4291232 Have any predictions of your own yet? :duck:

4291330 well... Me thinks trixie may be gaining a fair bit of power in her quest to save twilight, also probably some kind of epic showdown of magical prowess between trixie and twilight's captor

also discord, plenty of funny discord/trixie moments

4292754 Hmmm. All correct, but you've barely scratched the surface. Intriguing. :duck:

4293672 that is also excellent, i look forward to the riviting story my friend

I thought something sounded familiar. lol

So Discord created Surpise (who I assume is Celestia) as a gift for his sister?

Not sure if I got that correctly…

What about Luna?

It would be hard for me to say what I really enjoyed without sounding self serving. :rainbow laugh:

small issues, just to help

I preferred instead two stare at the magical spheres my sister

instead too* stare

Smiling , I said, "This will be

Smiling, I said…

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