happy Holidays, Everypony! A holiday special brought to you by me, Wade the Lesser. The cover art belongs to AnnieGamer on DeviantART.
Anyway, it's a Twixie shipfic, a simple but (or at least in my opinion) decent holiday themed shipping themed for the yuletide season. Trixie's one wish for this Hearth's Warming Day...to be the adrokable Twilight Sparkle's filly-friend. However she is doubtful that Twilight's feelings are mutual.
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Howdy there!
This is a nice little piece overall,but if you dont mind a sincere opinion, it could've ben even more hearwarming.
I'd recommend starting to re-read carefully to wipe some errors here and there such as: "Tears rolled began to roll down her face"
And my scond thought about it it's that it all happened realy fast,that's all.
Happy holidays, nice job
It would've been funnier if:
"Will you be my filly friend?"
"No.Now go catch a cold."
No?Is that just mean?Ok
This was a great story! My only complaint is that at the begening, you said rarity had fluttershy and applejack had rainbow dash. Personally, I prefer applejack with rarity. But great story anyway! :)
4206276 Why did this get a dislike, it is perfectly reasonable for people to have their preference of the ships.