• Published 3rd Apr 2014
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The Wedding is Off! (Rewrite) - xd77

After Chrysalis gets defeated Twilight shows true anger towards everypony.

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It had been nearly six months since the changeling attack, but now everything had been nearly restored to normal, Twilight was now friends with everypony again and was officially Celestia's student once again, and Shining Armor and Princess Cadance were together again. Anyway, a real wedding was taking place in the same room as it was originally going to take place six months ago, it had been cleaned and repaired from when Twilight lost her temper and destroyed it then, but now here she was in her wedding dress standing beside her brother who was once again wearing his red guard uniform and blue sash as trumpets played in the background, Twilight nuzzled her brother's cheek.

"Now this is more like it." she said.

"Boy you sure can say that again."

Twilight's friends were back in their dresses that they had worn before while Celestia stood in the center.

"Mares and Gentlecolts, we are gathered here in the sight of Faust for a momentous occasion." she said, the ponies at the edge of the door started playing the trumpets and in came Scootaloo, Sweetie Belle, and Apple Bloom in their flower filly dresses tossing flower pedals alongside the aisle with Cadance behind them, looking as beautiful as a diamond walking up towards the edge of the aisle wearing a pink and white dress with a purple bow ribbon in the back center, her mane had been pulled back and she had the sweet smell of perfume on her whole body. Shining Armor stared in awe at her looks.

Pretty soon Cadance was now standing alongside Shining Armor with a smile on her face.

"Does thou Princess Mi Amore Cadenza...."

"Cadance, just go for me by Cadance." Cadance interrupted.

Celestia giggled, "Princess Cadance take Shining Armor as your husband in sickness and in health, and until death do you part?"

Cadance had tears forming in her eyes, "I do!" she exclaimed, Shining Armor was now relieved big time, Cadance was serious enough about giving him another chance like she said, Celestia then turned to Shining Armor.

"Shining Armor, do you take Princess Cadance as your wife in sickness and in health, and until death do you part?"

"I do." Shining Armor said with a smile.

"May we please have the rings?" Celestia asked, Spike was wearing a fresh brand new tux and hat and walked up to the stage with the re-engaged rings, Celestia put them on Cadance and Shining Armor's horns.

"Shining Armor, you may kiss your bride."

Shining Armor and Cadance then touched lips and kissed, Rarity cried and levitated a tissue while Applejack put her hat on. Meanwhile Celestia had told Rainbow Dash her cue for her Rainboom stunt and when she did she quoted that this was the best wedding ever.

Later on after the wedding there was a big reception out in the gardens, cake was eaten, songs were sung, and everypony danced. After everything, the crowds managed to watch Shining Armor and Cadance enter into their transport wagon that was bound to depart for their honeymoon, Cadance entered, but before Shining Armor went in, he looked over at Twilight and gave her a big hug for all she did.

"Twiley, thanks for everything." he said.

"I love you B.B.B.F.F." Twilight said smiling at the touch of her brother's hug.

"I love you too L.S.B.F.F." Shining Armor said back as he climbed into the wagon, Cadance threw the flowers out into the crowd before the wagon departed, Twilight watched them leave for their honeymoon with a smile on her face, she was soon joined by her friends.

"Now this was a good wedding." Twilight said.

"Yeah, if it hadn't been for your warning darling, this never would've happened." Rarity said.

"Girls come on," Twilight said cheerfully, "I've already forgiven you, we're all friends again, that's all that matters, we're friends to the bitter end."

Pretty soon they all got together in a group hug as fireworks lit up the night skies over Canterlot.


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Comments ( 25 )

kind of an anticlimatic end

I think it was good ill give it 8/10

was kind of hoping the wedding stayed off

6771101 Everything is rushed.

The beginning wasnt rushed, but everything became rushed after Celestia's meetings with the courts

6775330 I don't really care anymore. This fic was bad. I won't bother with feedback as it will likely get deleted. Bye.

6775367 i don't hope its gets deleted

6775864 I meant my comment including feedback might get deleted. *shrug*

oh well atleast its Finished.

Reading this story is like sitting on a toilet full of large, hairy, angry, poisonous spiders, except also with bad grammar.

author you dropped the ball at the end

Hey, I and a friend of mine named Key Strix did a riff on this story for Discord’s Funtastic Theater 3000. If you don't know what riffing is, its MST3K, but with fanfics! Thank you xd77 for letting us riff this story! I had so much fun doing it.

Chapter 1 - Chapter 2 - Chapter 3 - Chapter 4 - Chapter 5 - Chapter 6 - Chapter 7 - Chapter 8 - Chapter 9 - Chapter 10

6412761 excuse me xd77, but can you do another Canterlot wedding, this time with tragedy please? I like the wedding is off.

8007070 Well what kind of tragedy?

8036390 Well like Twilight got killed by the changeling Queen and the downfall of the mane five, celestia and shining armor.

8036771 Some time later, right now I have other stories to finish.

8038073 Ok Understood, Let me know when you write.

8120581 Supposedly her Element can detect lies.

As correct as that may be, I`m neither a pony nor a changeling. I`m a mix of a Tatzl, Lamia, and Earth. I have no quarrel with anypony.

Because from what I read, it's not criticism, it's negativity. I try my best to rewrite to make it better, but I just can't seem to understand how or why people commenting are always either negative or flawless.

They're not, they are from the heart.

Don't be silly.

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