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It had been nearly six months since the changeling attack, but now everything had been nearly restored to normal, Twilight was now friends with everypony again and was officially Celestia's student once again, and Shining Armor and Princess Cadance were together again. Anyway, a real wedding was taking place in the same room as it was originally going to take place six months ago, it had been cleaned and repaired from when Twilight lost her temper and destroyed it then, but now here she was in her wedding dress standing beside her brother who was once again wearing his red guard uniform and blue sash as trumpets played in the background, Twilight nuzzled her brother's cheek.
"Now this is more like it." she said.
"Boy you sure can say that again."
Twilight's friends were back in their dresses that they had worn before while Celestia stood in the center.
"Mares and Gentlecolts, we are gathered here in the sight of Faust for a momentous occasion." she said, the ponies at the edge of the door started playing the trumpets and in came Scootaloo, Sweetie Belle, and Apple Bloom in their flower filly dresses tossing flower pedals alongside the aisle with Cadance behind them, looking as beautiful as a diamond walking up towards the edge of the aisle wearing a pink and white dress with a purple bow ribbon in the back center, her mane had been pulled back and she had the sweet smell of perfume on her whole body. Shining Armor stared in awe at her looks.
Pretty soon Cadance was now standing alongside Shining Armor with a smile on her face.
"Does thou Princess Mi Amore Cadenza...."
"Cadance, just go for me by Cadance." Cadance interrupted.
Celestia giggled, "Princess Cadance take Shining Armor as your husband in sickness and in health, and until death do you part?"
Cadance had tears forming in her eyes, "I do!" she exclaimed, Shining Armor was now relieved big time, Cadance was serious enough about giving him another chance like she said, Celestia then turned to Shining Armor.
"Shining Armor, do you take Princess Cadance as your wife in sickness and in health, and until death do you part?"
"I do." Shining Armor said with a smile.
"May we please have the rings?" Celestia asked, Spike was wearing a fresh brand new tux and hat and walked up to the stage with the re-engaged rings, Celestia put them on Cadance and Shining Armor's horns.
"Shining Armor, you may kiss your bride."
Shining Armor and Cadance then touched lips and kissed, Rarity cried and levitated a tissue while Applejack put her hat on. Meanwhile Celestia had told Rainbow Dash her cue for her Rainboom stunt and when she did she quoted that this was the best wedding ever.
Later on after the wedding there was a big reception out in the gardens, cake was eaten, songs were sung, and everypony danced. After everything, the crowds managed to watch Shining Armor and Cadance enter into their transport wagon that was bound to depart for their honeymoon, Cadance entered, but before Shining Armor went in, he looked over at Twilight and gave her a big hug for all she did.
"Twiley, thanks for everything." he said.
"I love you B.B.B.F.F." Twilight said smiling at the touch of her brother's hug.
"I love you too L.S.B.F.F." Shining Armor said back as he climbed into the wagon, Cadance threw the flowers out into the crowd before the wagon departed, Twilight watched them leave for their honeymoon with a smile on her face, she was soon joined by her friends.
"Now this was a good wedding." Twilight said.
"Yeah, if it hadn't been for your warning darling, this never would've happened." Rarity said.
"Girls come on," Twilight said cheerfully, "I've already forgiven you, we're all friends again, that's all that matters, we're friends to the bitter end."
Pretty soon they all got together in a group hug as fireworks lit up the night skies over Canterlot.
FIN
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kind of an anticlimatic end
I think it was good ill give it 8/10
was kind of hoping the wedding stayed off
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6771101 Everything is rushed.
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The beginning wasnt rushed, but everything became rushed after Celestia's meetings with the courts
6775330 I don't really care anymore. This fic was bad. I won't bother with feedback as it will likely get deleted. Bye.
6775367 i don't hope its gets deleted
6775864 I meant my comment including feedback might get deleted. *shrug*
6775967 ok
oh well atleast its Finished.
Reading this story is like sitting on a toilet full of large, hairy, angry, poisonous spiders, except also with bad grammar.
author you dropped the ball at the end
Hey, I and a friend of mine named Key Strix did a riff on this story for Discord’s Funtastic Theater 3000. If you don't know what riffing is, its MST3K, but with fanfics! Thank you xd77 for letting us riff this story! I had so much fun doing it.
Chapter 1 - Chapter 2 - Chapter 3 - Chapter 4 - Chapter 5 - Chapter 6 - Chapter 7 - Chapter 8 - Chapter 9 - Chapter 10
6412761 excuse me xd77, but can you do another Canterlot wedding, this time with tragedy please? I like the wedding is off.
8007070 Well what kind of tragedy?
8036390 Well like Twilight got killed by the changeling Queen and the downfall of the mane five, celestia and shining armor.
8036771 Some time later, right now I have other stories to finish.
8038073 Ok Understood, Let me know when you write.
8120581 Supposedly her Element can detect lies.
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I agree with ya.
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As correct as that may be, I`m neither a pony nor a changeling. I`m a mix of a Tatzl, Lamia, and Earth. I have no quarrel with anypony.
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Because from what I read, it's not criticism, it's negativity. I try my best to rewrite to make it better, but I just can't seem to understand how or why people commenting are always either negative or flawless.
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They're not, they are from the heart.
6873836
Don't be silly.
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Why should I, I`m allowed to laugh at what I want.
Secondly, if this is a bad fanfiction, simply because the author is demonizing one side over the other, then why are you reading it?
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Ever heard of sometimes people(or in this case ponies) just can`t be saved? Plus not everyone enjoys the Disney style Happily Ever After ending. It should have been a Bittersweet ending at best. They had their chance at redemption after Lesson Zero and they threw it away so they could continue a wedding for a pony they knew for one day.
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I disagree, I really love this fanfic, especially when Celestia and Luna are put on trial and shining and mane five show with their actions not with words their genuine remorse to twilight. I would have been devastated if this ended badly.
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My point being that would you want someone who only cares about their own agenda/character join your team?
How is this story so bad? This story has strong resemblance too and reminds me of my favorite miniature pixar film BAO. That has to account for something.
10515467 The biggest problem with this story for me is that the reaction of the uncaring public should be equal to what they know and actually care about. Not what Twilight, the writer, or the reader feels. What do the Wonderbolts care about Twilight? Absolutely zero relationship between them, so their reaction to Rainbow getting into a fight with someone they have no connection to should not be equal to a fan's anger at how the Canterlot Wedding story was handled (that's also not bringing up the inaccurate legal hyperbole of getting a restraining order on someone who didn't do anything to you).
I personally call this situation in writing "Emotional Bleed Through". It's a type of reverse Mary Sue situation. Part of a Mary Sue complex is the written world itself treats the Sue as flawless and perfect. People who don't know or have any reason to care about the Sue are either super friendly and nice to the Sue or every bad thing they do to the Sue gets them extreme negative immediate Karma (so you call the Sue a bitch and as you drive off your car breaks down or you get pulled over immediately by the cops who arrest you for insulting the Sue without any action on her part)
In this case the author didn't like how Twilight's friends treated her in the original Canterlot wedding so all those bad feelings are suddenly the Wonderbolts feelings, the Apple or Cake family's feelings (cause yes you can write them disappointed but the level of anger they had to AJ/Pinkie was unrealistic) Fluttershy's animals feelings, and the general public's feelings. Making a "the public is upset with their leaders for failing to stop the invasion" is fine and doable but having a random guard tell Luna she's gonna get her butt beaten or the general public swearing at Celestia is unrealistic.
We get this same writers trap with Anon-a-Miss stories. The Human 5 break up with Sunset because they think she is spreading their secrets. This hurts Sunset emotionally because she isn't, this angers fans. So we get a lot of stories where the fan writers expel the human 5 from school for hurting Sunset's feelings because they believed a lie. It is super unrealistic to expect a school to expel your ex friend cause they stopped being friends with you because the reader knows this is unrealistic the writing comes off as if it was written by either someone who doesn't see that situation as unrealistic (so too young to know better) or someone who's twisting the narrative to punish the characters at the cost of a cohesive story (so a revenge fic that goes too far or messed up in the handling)
This is the biggest problem I see with this fic. Yes consequences are a part of the type of fic this is, but the way they are written come off as unnatural and driven by the writer rather than the characters.
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Boom! Roasted!
The ratings being disabled is a serious red flag right there.
This story is amazing.
I'm glad this had a happy ending.