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A 5-year-old boy, named Nathan, is brought from his orphanage in Texas into the Crystal Empire Equestria where he is found by Princess Cadance and Shining Armor. After spending a day in Ponyville then going back to the Crystal Empire, when he tells them that he doesn't have a family and has nowhere to go, Cadance and Shining Armor adopt him as their son.

Cover Art by Gorokai

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 157 )


He was created? He is a city?

i love it :pinkiehappy: and why dose it say Chapter 2 ยท 25th Sep 2013 when it say First Published
2nd Oct 2013 Last Modified 2nd Oct 2013 and please don't turn this story to complete just because i put a comment on this chapter i would like to see more of this story

I'm a bit winded from my writing so I'm going to take a break for a while.

3287890 Because it took me a while to write that chapter 3,153 words, that takes time to write.

Awsomeness....that is all:eeyup:

Too fast.
You get a like, but that's all.

3296655 Thanks, it was my finest hour.

Comment posted by Nova Nexus deleted Oct 4th, 2013
Comment posted by xd77 deleted Oct 4th, 2013

That Story is Awesome!!! :pinkiehappy:
Loved It!!! :heart:

3300346 More soon!

Cute and sweet, just the way I like my stories.

moar please 'cause it awsome:eeyup::yay::pinkiehappy::heart::heart::heart::coolphoto:

It will be a while before I write chapter 5.


It's ok,

Have a like

Does anyone know how I can make my paragraphs italic?

I am glad that Nathan put Diamond Tiara in her place but in my opinion he should have choked her I mean not until she dies but just long enough until she learns her lesson.
I wonder why people call me violent :pinkiecrazy:

3350916 What expression did you have in mind?

3352867 Hey sometimes fighting is the only other answer, whether is a pony world or a human world.

You all wait Nathan is going to get a pretty awesome surprise.

i got a question did Princess Cadance and Shining Armor adopt Nathan yet in this story or do we have to wait and see and i like this chapter

3370772 Patience my dear one, and the good part thou will get.

this sound like the most cutest story ever!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy: i cant wait to read it.

Well Nathan can be the designated 'Batboy' for the Crystal Empire Baseball Team.

Comment posted by Thule deleted Oct 23rd, 2013

3384957 He's just a human with bat wings, nothing else

Comment posted by xd77 deleted Nov 13th, 2013

3387760 You do realize that I was making a rather bad joke right?

3387805 and I was just giving a compliment.

3387264 nope he's Batboy!

3415762 ok then when he's older he'll be Batman

Hey everypony, I'm sorry this is taking so long, I had a wedding to attend so I was out, I promise this will end ASAP.

Comment posted by xd77 deleted Nov 5th, 2013

i can't wait until the next chapter and i love it

3444253 i forgive you for taking so long

damn slow service if it takes a couple of hours to get your meal.

Nathan gets a family now yay:pinkiehappy::yay:

Wait... "Nathan Cadenza". Is Equestrian society matriarchal?:rainbowderp:

3461490 No that's just the last name I chose for him since Princess Cadance's real name is Mi Amore Cadenza.

Y'know... if you do that, Spike is either his cousin or his uncle. :pinkiegasp:

3462471 Well Twilight will be his Aunt, so Spike will be his cousin.

xd77 i got a question is chapter 11 the last chapter for this story not this chapter and I like it

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