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None o' your damn beezneez~ (The super secret clop account of DerpyDitzyDerpyDo, shhhhhhh)

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You...

You will write more of this.

That was not a request. :pinkiecrazy:

Comments would be much appreciated~

More... MORE... MOAR!!!

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How about an upvote instead :3? [+1]'d

interesting. I will follow

The last line you wrote makes it sound like she is mentally broken. I don't know of a way at the moment that would make it sound more like she is just temporarily without her mental facilities, but it seems a bit far of a stretch. Sorry if I misinterpreted the sentence.

The device hisses to a halt,

This is present tense while the rest of the story is in past tense.

Any second now some new and terrible villain will walk out and start monologuing about how he captured me, thought Twilight. Any second now.

Throw thoughts in single quotes, or italicize them, it would make it easier on the reader to differentiate it from the narration.

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Also, you need to stretch it out a bit. The sexiness comes(huehuehue) and goes so quick. Slow down, get into the details a bit more.

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It's nice, and I think it fits well with the sudden abruptness meant to accompany such. The little 'Twilight is too dazed to think' at the end is nice, implying if she's left perpetually milked she won't quite recover her faculties.

Mm! And if you get through the Mane 6, do the Princesses. A lengthy Celestia chapter would be awesome!

Sir I swear to god celestia if you don't write more you will be deleted in the most painful of ways. :pinkiecrazy:

Oh! Well this is certainly interesting.

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:pinkiecrazy:

This story........ it is quite unique. It can't be right or wrong at this point, unless we have someone who had a sex change come forth and share their experience about... stuff.

i want MORE:flutterrage: or this is gonna get ugly :pinkiecrazy:

I smell clop account alt! :derpytongue2:

3957928 You smell correctly~

Anyway, I will do each of the mane 6 then take requests for side characters

That was fantstic:rainbowkiss:
If you'll excuse me, I have a boner to remove:twilightblush:

So... Mind-breaking, something so lovably dark and brutal that appeals to me.

And then you have modification-without-consent, something also dark and brutal that just adds to the ethical questionableness that makes these stories so much fun; Perhaps only aided by the presence of machines that don't have emotions you can appeal to, with whoever running them assumedly not showing their face.

And then suddenly it's modified for transsexualism. That doesn't appeal to me at all.


Almost read this, almost... But hey, I'm totally going to be following the author now, just in case ;)

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If you don't like futas then I don't see you getting much enjoyment out of my work~ Sorry. Different folks have different fetishes.

This story will be all futa all the time.

3958069 Fuck it. I am reading this story

My sanity has already been butt-fucked with a cactus already thanks to the internet, how much worse could it possibly get? I must continue...for science! :pinkiecrazy:

*patiently waits for next chapter whilst polishing bladed weapons collection*

Comment posted by shynight deleted Feb 17th, 2014

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a lengthy chapter, or a lengthy Celestia? :trollestia:

3958294 Why not both?
EGH so sorry couldn't resist!

MOAR! GIVE US MOAR! :rainbowwild:

We'll that was.........interesting

I read it twice. I'm still conflicted on how I should feel about it...:pinkiehappy:, :ajbemused:, or :raritycry:. Please help my poor sanity.

And nice name for your account.

Next one do it Pinkie and Dash. I'm intrigued. Have a like and a favorite, my good sir.

How about zecora and at least three of the mane six gang rap her after your done doing the mane six

So, if you are doing each of the Mane 6, what is Rarity going to be doing other than swallowing AJ's releases? And when we see Pinkie, will it be Pinkie or Pinkamena?

Personally, I don't think Pinkie would have much of a problem going through with her scenario. She would probably make jokes about having a penis and play with it because, well, its Pinkie. She would find amusement with a piece of string.

You got It's and its wrong

YES!!! ME GUSTA om my gosh one my fetishes fulfilled this was excellent i need more :rainbowkiss: :heart::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

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that just means her chapter will probably be extra dark

CELESTIA DAMNIT, I WANT MOAR!!!!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage: (I've reread this five times and it's soooooo good:pinkiehappy::rainbowderp:)

perhaps you should ask yourself how you ended up in this unusual corner of the internet

I ask myself that same question every day.

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There will be no gore in this fic, if that's what you mean. That's one of the few things that doesn't turn me on.

3960109 And. Rainbiw Dash Presents pointed out the stupidity of having your torture chamber/love chamber (depending on the story), be in the basement of the eating establishment you work at. it would be like if I robbed banks and hid the loot in the basement of my house.

3960109 Oh yeah, and there are some stories that explain it. Like Pinkie has an alternate personality. She was possessed by her dark half like in Silent Ponyville, well, one of the endings, or the like.

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