Twilight and her friends awaken in a strange facility designed to 'milk' stallions ~Mindless Clopfest~
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You...
You will write more of this.
That was not a request.
Comments would be much appreciated~
More... MORE... MOAR!!!
dis gut
i like
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How about an upvote instead :3? [+1]'d
interesting. I will follow
The last line you wrote makes it sound like she is mentally broken. I don't know of a way at the moment that would make it sound more like she is just temporarily without her mental facilities, but it seems a bit far of a stretch. Sorry if I misinterpreted the sentence.
This is present tense while the rest of the story is in past tense.
Throw thoughts in single quotes, or italicize them, it would make it easier on the reader to differentiate it from the narration.
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Also, you need to stretch it out a bit. The sexiness comes(huehuehue) and goes so quick. Slow down, get into the details a bit more.
. ...Go on...
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It's nice, and I think it fits well with the sudden abruptness meant to accompany such. The little 'Twilight is too dazed to think' at the end is nice, implying if she's left perpetually milked she won't quite recover her faculties.
Mm! And if you get through the Mane 6, do the Princesses. A lengthy Celestia chapter would be awesome!
Sir I swear to
godcelestia if you don't write more you will be deleted in the most painful of ways.Oh! Well this is certainly interesting.
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This story........ it is quite unique. It can't be right or wrong at this point, unless we have someone who had a sex change come forth and share their experience about... stuff.
i want MORE or this is gonna get ugly
I smell clop account alt!
3957928 You smell correctly~
Anyway, I will do each of the mane 6 then take requests for side characters
That was fantstic
If you'll excuse me, I have a boner to remove
So... Mind-breaking, something so lovably dark and brutal that appeals to me.
And then you have modification-without-consent, something also dark and brutal that just adds to the ethical questionableness that makes these stories so much fun; Perhaps only aided by the presence of machines that don't have emotions you can appeal to, with whoever running them assumedly not showing their face.
And then suddenly it's modified for transsexualism. That doesn't appeal to me at all.
Almost read this, almost... But hey, I'm totally going to be following the author now, just in case ;)
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If you don't like futas then I don't see you getting much enjoyment out of my work~ Sorry. Different folks have different fetishes.
This story will be all futa all the time.
lol
3958069 Fuck it. I am reading this story
My sanity has already been butt-fucked with a cactus already thanks to the internet, how much worse could it possibly get? I must continue...for science!
*patiently waits for next chapter whilst polishing bladed weapons collection*
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a lengthy chapter, or a lengthy Celestia?
3958294 Why not both?
EGH so sorry couldn't resist!
MOAR! GIVE US MOAR!
We'll that was.........interesting
Oh my Celestia. MOAR. PWEASE!
I read it twice. I'm still conflicted on how I should feel about it..., , or . Please help my poor sanity.
And nice name for your account.
You got It's and its wrong
CELESTIA DAMNIT, I WANT MOAR!!!!!!!! (I've reread this five times and it's soooooo good)
Hmm... Well, it was definitely interesting. I'm not into this kind of stuff, but I'm going to continue reading it anyways.
I think its because of your writing style. Good job nonetheless.
3959395 what you pointed out is correct, but you used "its" in your comment incorrectly, haha
its - an adjective pronoun (his/her/their/its)
it's - a shortened form of two words linked by an apostrophe
This us pretty thoughtful. I like the build up of tension and the fact that this works so well while telling the reading as little as possible. Good job with this, it was really enjoyable to read (and hot too).
I have conflicting emotions throughout this chapter. I don't know if I should be mad, be happy or confused but damn. This is hot....
And your name is hot~.
This... I like this. Imma follow you.
I... um... well... well shit i have no words... waet i do all i can say is... damn.
That was a awesome read can't wait to see what s next.
I feel unbelievably guilty for enjoying this. If you see me comment on a plot-less clopfic, you've seen an internet Bigfoot. Excellent job of appealing to my inner fetishes futa, milking, and... copious amounts of semen. I've taken a liking to this.
So much yes, not even close to enough no.
hot character trait appearing
hot character trait disapearing
3959070 what does that have to do with anything?