Twilight and her friends awaken in a strange facility designed to 'milk' stallions ~Mindless Clopfest~
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Chrysalis x Shining Armor sounds potentially delicious <3
4030844 Dude, thats, beautiful
Luna being double penetrated by Trixie and Gilda in the pussy while Luna's teats are inlarged to a curtain amount.
I say ChrysalysxShiningArmour
i dont know what smegma is but this was really hot stuff
My Request: How about some applejackxbig mac while big mac is gender swapped into being a mare with some nice crotch tits and applejack is forced to go down on big mac after being injected with loads of aphrodisiac.
Won't the muscle relaxer eventually shut down their major organs thus killing them?
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Smegma is stuff like skin oils, dead skin cells all accumulated under the foreskin. Only happens when you actually have foreskin.
Having said that, I will admit this story was definitely scratching the surface of unpleasantness for me.
cmc
Unfortunately, the smegma was a turn off for me. Oh well, there's always next chapter.
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Magic.
4035723 ...bull. Try something else.
The dick cheese did it for me.
Sorry.
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In large doses, so in this case, yes.
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OK, the specific kind of alchemy they're using made the mandrake root extract only block voluntary movement of striated muscles, rather than the expected effect of blocking involuntary movement of smooth muscles, which would kill her (probably through asphyxiation). Apparently, that's all it should have done, aside from giving her nausea, diarrhea, and hallucinations, so we already know that they've changed the effects somehow.
CelestiaxLuna gets my vote.
How about a mix of the three?
If not... CMC
Congratulations, you win the Best Smut Award for 2014
Nope, nopenopenipenope. Foals are where I draw the line.
Chrysalis/Shining Armor, however, I would be okay with.
Good, not totally my thing. Still impressive nonetheless.
How about Cadence getting broken, inflated and impregnated by Twilight while watching a genderbent Shining become a cum bucket brood mare for Rainbow Dash and AJ?
This just gets better and better!
of all the fics ive read where silver spoon and diamond tiara are punished this was probably the worst punishment i usually feel empathy for characters in these situations but this just felt right i can say i didn't even fap to this i just enjoyed the mentle imagery of there pain
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How often is it referred to? Kinda iffy about reading that chapter.
Luna wakes up in a room chained to a wall. all she can move is one hoof. this hoof can only push a button. she is a futa and has an active vibrator inserted in her. a lust crazed Celestia is chained to the wall opposite her. by pushing the button the vibrator turns of for a time but the chain holding celestia to the wall gets longer every time the button is pushed
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I couldn't even read this chapter in it's entirety because of it.
That and the thought of practically having poison ivy shoved up my crotch while in a stockade.
wait, is the ChryssyXShining one my idea or someone elses?
also, good chap, though now i realize i should have said aged up
New Idea: Trixie spit-roasted by AJ and Rarity seeing as they were humiliated by her.
Wish I could write a story this good.
Twilight penetrates her pussy Dash. Dash penetrates her pussy PinkiePie and PinkiePie penetrates her pussy Twilight. And all this time.
ScootNa or LunaLoo-However it works. Luna X Scootaloo. Luna futa and broken, Scootaloo being gender-swapped and not yet broken. I've always wanted to see-or rather read-that.
I can't believe I'm even making a suggestion, but I'd like to see Twilight have her way with Trixie. First an oral treatment, then an anal treatment, then a vaginal treatment, leaving the once "Great and Powerful" Trixie a broken, bloated mess and soaking in Twilight's cum at the end.
*Milky Way in an extreme lactation scenario with her breasts becoming inflated. The milk can/will be distributed to everyone in the building.
Making another comment, first all to express my appreciation for this story. There aren't many ways to say just how much I like this (so many of my fetishes, so little time).
Second of all, to throw out another suggestion. This one involving futa Rarity and Sweetie belle. Rarity wakes up after her "encounter" with Applejack, free if rather groggy in an empty room but all of the walls are a very reflective metal. Around her middle is a box of some sort with an open bottom (enough room for her to move her legs and walk but you can't see under it. After shaking off the grogginess an exceptionally pleasant feeling spreads through her lower body, bring back memories of Applejack and the feeling she gave her. As she walks around the empty room she realizes that as she moves the pleasant feeling increases, as if something were swinging along her length. The aphrodisiac spritzers being doing there work and Rarity starts moving around the room for the sole purpose of pleasure. As she increases her speed the box slowly falls to pieces, revealing that, strapped around her middle and impaled on her is her sister Sweetie Belle whom she had being using as a pleasure aid moments before. Rarity stops and gets a good look at Sweetie's expression before the spritzers come back, and her mind goes blank, and she slowly begins walking around the room again, picking up speed to a full gallop, running around in circles simply for the pleasure, her sister all but forgotten as anything other than a toy.
My preference for the end would have Rarity straining to get herself as deep as possible any way she can as she climaxes, either squishing Sweetie against the floor or against a wall (not injuring her, just kind of slammed against the surface). An addition to the ending could be that, as Rarity finishes, the straps unclasp and Sweetie slides off her. Rarity backs away and falls to her side, some semblance of her mind still working and realizing what she had done. Then Sweetie picks herself up and walks towards Rarity, and proceeds to lick her clean , bringing Rarity back to full attention and wiping out any semblance of her rational mind. Again, any use of stomach/throat bulging and/or cum inflation is a bonus (although they would be preferred, at least by me).
You'll have to forgive the detailed suggestions, I just get ideas randomly and if I don't write them down it drives me nuts.
I would like to see Celestia help break Luna. Maybe electro-stimulation, and hypnosis.
If you do the CMC, could you leave out the smegma stuff?
Other than that, the other chapters have been pretty hawt. Celestia does seem rather sub like, tbh. I do hope you take advantage of Luna's dom like behaviors in future chapters. I am curious about who is running the facility if they allow them to watch from the observation deck after being broken in. I'd almost say it would be Chryssie (likely because she not an alicorn or unicorn, per se) or Cadance as they both are in tune with the love side of pony exchanges.
That said, the technology is rather advanced for simple ponies which I assume is why you applied AU to this story.
I think perhaps another chapter with Fluttershy would be nice. She wakes up in a new cell, drained of the mixed fluids. The drain and buttons have been removed and the walls and floor are clear, the thick polarized glass putting her on display to ponies in several rooms but blocking their views to anything beyond. Her body feels strangely empty, as though she's had the world's most thorough cleansing. Well, not completely empty. There's something filling the first twelve inches or so of both of her holes, the thick intruders stretching her wide. As she wiggles her hips, she finds them lodged fast and more still, that her plush rump is pressed flat against the wall behind her. And then, the pipes stuffing her start to pump, pushing more and more extremely thick, viscous cum into her, filling and inflating her inexorably until it fills every nook and cranny and oozes from every opening.
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A potential modification to this, in a separate comment so people can vote on which version they prefer.
Fluttershy's hollow feeling is more than a hunger. Her entire body feels empty and lighter than it should be. Her rump squeaks as it drags across the glass. As she inspects her body more closely, she notices her fur is completely smooth and shiny. Running her hoof over her other leg reproduces the squeak as her mind finally understands; she's been turned into living latex, a sentient sex toy. She feels empty and light because she's full of air, but the nice nozzles stretching her out are going to fill her nice and full and make her heavy again.
All I ask for is trixie with a tiny dick being fucked by a mare with a big dick. If the big dicked mare where to, say, taunt trixie and tell her how useless she is, how weak her magic is and how her only use is to be a cocksleeve then that would be perfect.
Shining strapped to a wall with Candace on the floor. Mare or stallion comes (). Has bigger dick that shining. Has far better sex with Candace than shining ever had while shining can only watch and feel useless. Taunting and making Candace beg optional but preferred
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To be honest, since only bronies can get off to a story like this (myself included >_>) I think it's humans who are running this milking chamber.
CelestiaxQueen Chrysalis
I think you have begun to break my mind, CloppetyClopClopClop. I read the majority of this story despite it containing fetishes and darkness I don't agree with. If you continue to write in such a way that makes everything hot, I will have no choice but to break my mind and read every word.
This has got to be I think the most wonderfully depraved and evil story I have ever read. Looking forward to lots more extreme fetishes.
CMC please.
Cadence being fucked and is broken by Fluttershy while both mares teats are being enlarged while Shinning Armor is watching.