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On a stormy Winter night, Rainbow Dash crashes into the library. She decides to stay the night, but the chilly weather leads her to teach Twilight the proper use of wings- cuddling, of course!
This is my seasonal oneshot, since I'm a terrible person who never wrote anything for Hearth's Warming Eve. Enjoy some Wintery TwiDash fluffiness!
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DUDE THE SECOND I CLICKED ON THE CHAPTER TITLE IT STARTED SNOWING WHERE I AM. IT'S A NEW YEAR'S MIRACLE.
...*ahem* anyway, please excuse me while I melt from the cuteness.
Short and sweet, I like. :)
Great story, It was just
I thought this story was very relaxing and calming,and there is not a chance that this would be a bad story to someone.
That was cute. I don't have much more to say.
3713543 same here, though it could of been fleshed out more in Twilight's concept or should I say lack of when you are being hit on, though I've never been in romance but I have a general idea of the flow...
Don't we all just love a piece of cute fluff once in a while?
Sweet story.
Nice touch.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Fluffeh.
And wing hugs are best hugs.
Cute! I put your story into the Romance is Magic! group for being so cute!
Adorable and easily digested fluff.
Fluffy and short, but satisfying the need that I was looking to read.
There are some little mistakes here and there, but nothing that really needs to be pointed out.
All in all, a nice little story for a cold winter's night
DJRD
CUUUUUUUUUUTE
I Love Fluff *squee*
This story is interesting...
It tries to be cute, sure, but the problem is, that there are fare too many grammatical mistakes to get the full potential of cute from this story. It really, really needs a proofreader.
~Twi
More?!?
More of a statement then a question!
Very cute. I have just a few corrections.
still a chill
let's is a contraction of let us. You meant to put lets, as in allows.
in the
it does," she teased. <-- do this every time you continue a quotation after a declarative sentence ends. (that means if there would be a period, use a comma instead)
iwish it was this easy to ask someone of the same sex out in real life, where i live gays are still not regarded very well by many, anyways, great story, keep it up!!!!
At least you don't live in Indiana where it's -7 degrees Fahrenheit (about -22 degrees in Celsius) and waiting for a huge snowstorm.
3723154 far*
Also, irony!
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Indeed so.
~Twi
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At least you don't live in Canada where it's -30 (-35 with wind chill) Celsius with a blizzard going on outside.
Fire in a jar. I see what you did there...
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Pffft. -30C? That's nothing. Come to Maine, where we regularly get -40F (fun fact: that's the same temp in C) plus wind chill and massive snowstorms that lead to state-wide power outages and ice several inches thick covering everything.
Did I mention it's still snowing as of today's posting?
Gotta love the state of ice, saltwater and trees...
*Checks teeth.* nope no cavities. still way to sweet.
Tail Spinner, Spinner of Tales presents for your enjoyment...
These two videos.
Play them together, with the blizzard video at a lower volume than the fire video.
And for your own personal enjoyment...
i really enjoyed reading your book well fic it was very well written with a catchy title and surprisingly i found a link between these 5 twidash fics, though subtle but worth the time but the last one is sad by last i mean number 5.
1.The Proper Use of Wings: - The 8-Bit Flame Princess
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/143752/1/the-proper-use-of-wings/oh-the-weather-outside-is-frightful-but-the-fire-is-so-delightful
2. The Beach Kinda Sucks without You: - elPossenreisser
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/132504/the-beach-kinda-sucks-without-you
3. Perfect : - Henry T-R
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/149469/perfect
4.Taking Care: - This Account Is Dead
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/151261/1/taking-care/of-the-ones-we-care-for
5.I'll be Home for Hearth's Warming Eve: - Incredible Blunderbolt
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/5275/1/ill-be-home-for-hearths-warming-eve/ill-be-home-for-hearths-warming-eve
Well they are the only links i have found so far please read them it was quite the tedious task to find them thank you my fellow bronies and sister ponies
Awww - lovely.
