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Rainbow Dash needs help with a problem. It's the day before Hearth's Warming Eve, and she still doesn't have a gift for one of her friends. But for this particular friend it can't be any old gift, no. This gift is for Twilight Sparkle; Student of Princess Celestia, Element of Magic, and Rainbow's crush.
Happy Hearths' Warming to everyone. I hope you enjoy this special I threw together for the festive season.
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better late than never, good story.
Mmm, fluffy.
We needed some TwiDash goodness at this time of year. Thanks for delivering!
Dawww
A few misspell words but no biggie. This wasn't too bad.
A few punctuation and spelling errors aside, a really nice fic. I'd say you could try to jump less between different places, like putting the Princesses part at the end and instead add more fluff to the middle part, like:
Canterlot (RD asks for advice) -> Ponyville (the evening, the trip, the fluff and even more fluff) -> Canterlot (Tia/Luna dialogue + ending)
It's easier to read that way.
Anyway, good job! Keep it up!
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That was how I originally had it planned out, but half way through that I decided to switch it up because I wanted to have Celestia write a letter in reply to the one Twi sent, but then realized I didn't have anything for either letter that would make a reply necessary, so I didn't include the second letter, and just never fixed to order.
I think you mean back at the end
Its too bad we have to wait for more... but i want it NOWW!
Just a few minor spelling issues:
started
stare
she
With that aside...this was a wonderfully fluffy Twidash.
Aww, how cute! What a perfect way to start the new year.
There were a few spelling errors here and there, but not to any extent that it drew me out of the story. Also, the fireplace and hot chocolate scene reminded me quite a bit of "Winter's warmth", which I loved.
A great little story for christmas. Sad I only found it on new year's, but as I said, a great way to start it.
Nothing like a good bit o' fluff to lighten up your day, and this is just full of it! Love the bit with the box!
This is absolutely the sweetest thing :3 I especially love the structure of the gift (the whole three parts thing) and the inclusion/equality of the royal sisters in the plot. Overall, beautifully written TwiDash, somewhat fluffy but most importantly pleasantly heartwarming. You seem to have taken a different direction in your writing with this one, which I suppose could be because it's a holiday setting rather than a normal situation. Still, props for venturing out of the legendary comfort zone
As always, I enjoyed reading and I look forward to more. Ren out.
PS. Thank you for referring to Boxing Day; it's so disappointing when people (Americans) don't even know what that is.
PPS. Tell AppleDashFan132 that the editing is beautiful.
Honestly that was one of the most adorable Twidash stories I have ever read. Great job. Just one quick spelling change.
It should be corrected to stayed or even better a word would be remained
But I love love love this story. Quickly into my favorites.
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Hehehe, good timing; I'm actually working on a sequel to this right now for my second Christmas Special.
Thanks for the mistake, by the way, I'll get on that
TOO MUCH D'AWWWWW. My heart melted
Not much of a TwiDash fan, but this was nice.
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Great job once again! All the d'aaaaaaawwwww's were given that day.
Well executed. A great fluff piece.
D'awww that was such a sweet story
Great little
well written.
It's awesome.
My favourite part of this. XD
"Too much fluffy romance!" *heart explodes* I legitimately cannot get over how cute and sweet this is, brilliant job mate. #TwiDash4life
Oh no. Somebody check on Scootaloo, quick!
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How can that be your favorite part when it has dark connotations for Scootaloo!?
Come on, Celestia! Aren't you the least bit worried!?
over a chicken?