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It has been a year since Toby has arrived in his new home of Equestria. He has a wonderful and caring family, great friends, and a good life. However, Toby is about to experience the dark side of Equestria, and he will come face to face with an enemy of the ones he calls family that they thought they got rid of.

He is about to come face to face with the Queen of Darkness, the Queen of the Changelings, Queen Chrysalis. What evil plans does Chrysalis have in store for the young child? How does she plan to use Toby to extract her revenge on Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, and all of Equestria? Will the Mane Six be able to prevent something terrible happening to not only their home, but to their precious little Toby?

Or will Queen Chrysalis overthrow Celestia and take what she believes is her rightful place as ruler of Equestria?

Chapters (15)
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Comments ( 582 )

well shit.... chrissy why? :applecry: and turning into his momma, thats a bit to far.

2922040
he might be emotionly scard from this... :fluttercry:

Well how's that for timing? I just finished reading Holidays With Toby and then I see that you posted this.

I fear for the child's wellbeing now. I hope Flutterrage is unleashed in some way soon! :flutterrage:

NEW STORY OMG! AWESOME! Kinda want to see an alt ending to this with both outcomes :) would be awesome!

2922042 she don't give no fucks, she wants to rule Equestria, she doesn't care about turning into a kids mom so she can lure him into a sense of false-security

Look intense, :twilightoops: Hope things work out good for Toby. :fluttershyouch:

2922262 You shall see my friend, you shall see. :raritywink::twilightblush:

2922040 What can I say Chrysalis is called the Queen of Darkness for a reason. :twilightoops:

2922042 Cruel, yet satisfying in her mind. :pinkiegasp:

2922048 YES IT IS. :twilightblush:

2922065 I am going to try my best to be more recent/current with the updates than I have been lately. Oh, don't worry, I plan to not disappoint. :raritywink:

2922099 That is a real good idea, I might really think about that, thank you always. :pinkiehappy:

2922286 You are very welcome my good friend :)

2922286 Better idea! Why don't you make it so that you write a different story per-say, like have two of the same chapter, but so that one works towards the ponies favor, while the other works towards the changelings, then have those chapters lead to the next one depending on who you choose, get it? It's hard to explain. Like a choose your own story, where you can choose either Changelings or Ponies for the end outcome

Bum Bum Bummmmm and the plot thickens the queen get toby i fear for the kid
i just hope toby doesn't fall to easy for the bug queen:fluttercry::raritydespair:

This isn't looking good for Toby. Nice start. :twilightoops:

Ooooh! This gonna be good! I expect twists and turns and when Toby gets done with Chrysalis she won't know what hit her.

:yay::yay::yay:new story new chapters:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:and i already love it:heart::heart:

It begins!

Blunt and too the point. The conclusion I've made: The Queen is evil O_O!!! LE GASP!!!!

Heh heh :D!! Awesome first chapter!!! HURAH FOR THE SEQUEL!!!

WOO HOO NEW STORY! :yay::yay::yay:

Chryssallis desires the throne does she, well I'm sure we can get Khal Drogo to find her a fitting crown! :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy:

Sadly that would drive the rating to M faster than you can say karma. :facehoof:

2922462 I think I know what you are talking about. Maybe write two endings when I get to them, one with the ending with Good prevailing, and the other ending with Evil/Bad prevailing? Is that correct, if I may ask? :twilightblush:

2922499 Well, you never know about Toby. He has such a trusting and giving nature to him, and Queen Chrysalis can be conniving and very meticulous.:twilightoops:

2922516 Thank you very much, and no it isn't. :pinkiegasp::fluttershysad:

2922527 No she won't, but also Toby won't either. :pinkiegasp:

2922649 Thank you very much always. Like I said I am going to try my best to be constant with good and quick yet good-quality updates with this one. :twilightblush:

2922799 Yes it does. Dun...dun...dun.. :rainbowderp:

2922848 Thank you. It came straight to me last night, and I knew I had to write it down. :twilightblush:

2922933 I promise, I am going to do my best to top "A New Home". :raritywink::twilightblush:

2923025 Indeed, she is evil, but the question is, will sweet young Toby be able to help reform her as Fluttershy did for Discord? :twilightblush:

2923251 Yes it is, and thank you very much always. :pinkiehappy:

2923466 Oh, yes the throne is her main objective, but she doesn't plan to take it over without some insurance. :pinkiegasp:

2923503 I'm so nervouscited!!! :pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:

I'm going to love this story, I can't wait for the next chapter. :pinkiehappy:

2923654 Thank you always very much for your kind words. I am working on Chapter Two now. :pinkiehappy:

oh wow awesome story i can't wait for undates

2924230 Thank you very much always my friend. :pinkiehappy:

Short... but not less AWESOME! A good start with Chryssalis and the D-Dogs.

Cant wait to read more from them.

2924341 Thank you very much, and don't worry you will. :raritywink::twilightblush:

oh they're in for a surprise :twilightsmile:

Way ago, can't wait to read more of this.:pinkiehappy:

I like the idea of the sequel but I hate how chrysalis acts!!!:flutterrage: She is supposed to be 'evil' which I can't see how she's 'evil' in the first place! She just wants her kids to be fed to they can live! To me its unfair how the changelings are generally treated in some fics! :facehoof:

Omg....The Sequel....*Likes* * Adds to Favorites* :)

i wanna know who disliked?

2924580 Yes they are. :twilightblush:

2924679 Thank you. :pinkiehappy:

2924683 I agree with how they are treated. :fluttershysad:

2924825 Thank you very much always. :pinkiehappy:

2925584 Haha.. that is okay, I don't hold no grudges.:twilightblush:

Oh no! Toby is going to be in danger!

well its his bucking b-day and shes useing his sisters!?
Worst b-day ever!

This is continuing to get worse for Toby. :twilightoops: :fluttershysad: Good work so far.

oh this is gonna be good :twilightsmile:

A kidnapping on someone's Birthday? Of all to gosh darn low-down dirty heartless things to do THIS IS THE WORST POSSIBLE THING!! :raritycry:

At least he'll get his party! :pinkiehappy: I've been waiting for this for so long.

I wonder if the CMC will try to pull some shenanigans on Chrysalis for their little Brother? Hmmmmm...

Why does something so evil have to destroy such amazing things. :flutterrage:

As always Great Job. :pinkiehappy:

So far I'm liking it! :twilightsmile:

:twilightgasp::twilightoops::twilightangry2::rainbowhuh::flutterrage: DAMN YOU CHRYSALIS!!!!!!

Chrysalis you monster. Is it weird that I had just finished reading A New Home when this updated?

don't worry i bet toby would be ok maybe spike has a katana to defend toby from his kidnappers :twilightsmile:

:pinkiegasp:curse you Chrysalis:twilightangry2:good luck toby faust be with you:eeyup::moustache:another great chapter as before:twilightsmile::pinkiehappy::heart::raritywink::yay:

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