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Cover art done by : The Irish Pony

Rarity has always been a pony who indulges herself in the finest things in life, but also enjoys being in the company of her friends and family. She is a successful fashionista, a refined mare whose love is fashion, and a dear friend to those who need her.

From time to time she watches over her little sister Sweetie Belle while her parents are away on vacation. Sometimes she throws Sweetie off on one of her friends so she don't have to bother with her at times although she does love her sister.

However, how would Rarity react when discovers an abandoned child, a human child to be exact? How would she respond when she is thrown into being the mother figure/caretaker of this small one?

I want to thank http://www.fimfiction.net/user/midnightshadow1] for the name suggestion of Connor

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Chapters (26)
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first a New Home now this? you like these kind of stories don't you? :twilightsmile:

2962451well, I always see one comment or two in every adopt a human story, so, don't let it surprise you :twilightsheepish: (that's rich coming from me, I love those stories too :rainbowlaugh:)

2962468 I love these kind of stories to... kind from relaxing from the War in Equestria stories and the like :pinkiecrazy:
only thing that's bad is the Weapons Grade Feels are sometimes WORSE :ajsleepy:

an Alternate New Home? Nice

Gunna admit it, pretty much faved just by the description alone. Looking forward to more! :twilightsmile:

MOAR !!!!!:flutterrage:

um if thats ok :fluttershysad:

I like this new one so far. It has the potential to be just as good as a New home so long as it's not an almost direct copy.

So far, so good. Keep it up! :twilightsmile:

Now it's Rarity's turn to raise a different child.

MORE STORYS TO READ! YAY! :yay:

:raritywink: "I thank for the Chance to be a mother, too. I just hope, I make a good one."

nice and i can't wait to read more chapters when they come out

Quick question: are you trying to kill us with feels?

Human adoptions becoming your theme isn't:ajsmug:

I don't mind a story idea repeating its self, I do that all the time :rainbowwild: But I think it is the stammering child thing that I just don't like repeated... Sorry, read latered.

2962881
I agree I think I am going to have a stroke from all of the feels. But I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

2962451 Well, what can I say, I always thought it would be sweet with a young child going to or being brought to Equestria where he meets the Mane Six, princesses, CMC, etc. Also, not make the child like big or threatening.:twilightblush:

2962468 Indeed. :pinkiehappy:

2962483 I truly agree, that is another reason I decided to write these stories. :pinkiehappy:

2962491 In a way yes, but I am going to aim for it to be somewhat different. :raritywink::twilightblush:

2962494 Thank you very much always my friend, and I had a feeling the description would get readers wondering. :twilightblush:

2962544 Haha.. yes that is okay, just please don't go flutterrage all on me. :fluttershysad:

2962653 Thank you very much, and I promise it isn't going to be a direct copy. :raritywink:

2962710 Thank you very much. :pinkiehappy:

2962744 Yes it is, but the question is, is she up to the task? :rainbowhuh::twilightblush:

2962752 Thank you and yes Rarity it is your chance to take the role of a mother figure. :raritywink::twilightblush:

2962781 Thank you my friend. :pinkiehappy:

2962881 Lol.. well, what can I say I aim for the feels. :rainbowdetermined2::pinkiehappy:

2963166 yes it is, thank you. :twilightblush:

2963189 I understand.

2963249 Lol.. Well, I hope that doesn't happen you having a stroke. I wouldn't want to be the cause of that. :fluttershysad:

2963268 Your stories are worth the flowing of feels

so many feels i can't take it :raritycry:

2963366 Thank you very much, that means a lot. :pinkiehappy:

2963482 Haha.. what can I say, I always aim for the feels. :pinkiehappy:

I'm not sure if his parents are really really good at teaching him manners or if he was subject to serious abuse and this is his way of avoiding getting hit.

2963674 Well, in a later chapter I am going to reveal why he is like the way he is. The case in a way is like Toby's from "A New Home", but I think it might be just a very very very slight bit more painful although I think anything could top Toby's pain he endured in the past. :fluttershysad:

aiming for the feels already? will I need tissues later on?

"Another" New Home :) I like it already :twilightsmile:

i got a question are you going to be working on chapters for this story and chapters for A New Home II: A Queen's Revenge at the same time

2963934 I might appear crazy, but yes. I am going to get started on Chapter Ten of "A New Home II" and try to get it done by tonight, then work on Chapter Three of "Heart of Diamonds" tomorrow. My mind is like a well-oiled machine right now. :pinkiehappy:

2963898 Well, in a way yes, but going to be much different. :twilightblush:

2963894 You might. :twilightblush:

2964548 ok and you are not crazy to me

I have got to read this now. My name's Connor.

2964990 oh, gosh, I hope it is okay to use your name in this story. :twilightblush: It was hard for me to decide on a name for the child in this story so my friend midnightshadow1 came up with it, and I liked it. :twilightblush:

My heart can't take it!

2965128 And it is only the second chapter :twilightblush:

2965270 Great protectors of the night indeed wolves are. :pinkiehappy:

Nice going, since it's a Rarity first person narration, you mostly stood on character..... Except for some words you use in a new home like "small form" and "warm smile"

2965335 Thank you. hehe. I know, I might go back and change them into a different sounding way. :pinkiehappy:

I'm not sure why but I think a crossover between this story's universe and A New Home's would be a pretty cool idea. Aside from all the feels

2965738 Hmm.. I might think about that as a separate story, thank you very much for that idea. :pinkiehappy:

2965952 yeah I just think Connor and Toby would be good friends who are awesome gentlemen

I have to ask, when does this take place?:moustache:

Comment posted by Nova Nexus deleted Jul 31st, 2013
Comment posted by Nova Nexus deleted Jul 31st, 2013
Comment posted by Nova Nexus deleted Jul 31st, 2013

LOL, it should have been discord!:rainbowlaugh:

Eh, I don't know... The writing feels a little sloppy. I can't quite say what but the way it is written feels jilting and awkwardly paced. I'm sorry, I'm not sure I can read this...:unsuresweetie:

2966778 This takes place before Toby's time and before Twilight becomes an alicorn princess. :twilightblush:

2966053 Oh, indeed. Both are very exceptional gentlemen for their young age. :twilightblush:

2966968 Lol..:rainbowlaugh:

2967377 I understand, thank you though, constructed criticism I accept.

2967555
Okay....
1. That doesn't give me a clear indication. This means that this story takes place in between nightmare moon and twilicorn.
2.WHERE DO YOU LIVE?! ARE YOU JUST NOW WAKING UP?!
3.and about the 'you being nice thing' I only speak the truth.

2967566 Oh, okay.

1. This story takes place after Twilight is sent to Ponyville by Celestia, and after The Mane Six defeats Nightmare Moon. I hope that is a little better. :twilightblush:

2. I live in the Southeast, South Carolina to be exact if I may. It is 5:21 am here, and I woke up at 4:30, because of my darn cat begging me to feed him. :facehoof:

3. Well, I do speak the truth, but only if you get me mad, or may I say I speak my mind.:flutterrage:

2967599
1.thanks for the insight!:twilightsmile:
2.we live relatively close! I live in Tennessee!:pinkiegasp:
3.ahhhhh cats....the only house hold pet that doesn't abide by the laws of nature!:moustache:
4.I didnt go to sleep yet....:facehoof:

Connor! IS HE GONNA BE AN ASSASSIN?!

2967627>>2967599 HAHA I WIN!
I live in Australia xD currently 10:50 PM when I posted this, anyways gotta go, school tomorrow :)

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