After asking for Fluttershy's hoof in marriage, Big Mac and the shy Pegasus begin the slow, steady steps in their relationship that shall lead them to their wedding day.
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OMG!!! I have a poetic reference to this Fanfic ^^
No that's ok. I didn't need my heart. This fic reminds me of Toby: adorably awesome
you have caught my attention.
That was beautiful. You never cease to amaze me.
An interlude story interesting
5045207 Thank you very kindly.
I wanted to have Big Mac & Fluttershy have a wonderful and beautiful first date. 
Awesome my friend. 
5045090 Oh?
5045124 Lol.. thank you very kindly as always my friend.
5045164 Thank you very kindly and I hope to keep your attention with the rest of this fic.
5045179 Thank you very kindly, that means a lot to me.
Wait a minute.....Don't the CMC already have their cutie marks?
Ok lets see if I have this correct.
This takes place after "A New Home III", The CMC got their cutie marks in "A New Home I", and now their looking for their cutie marks again? I'm confused.
Yeah I see that.
Luv it!!! The only issue, made me squee. At school! Good job!!!
I'm so excited!
5045124 Just in case you suddenly need a heart, I have some in reserve when I read this type of stories^^
5045429
http://20334survivor.deviantart.com/art/Confessions-482620482
~Yaaaaaayyyyyy~
5 Yays for the win
Looking good so far.
Tag this properly.
Oh man, I am loving this! But, not to be a total prick, but these are some things you should look over;
1. The Cutie Mark Crusaders already have their cutie marks
2. In the first story, Fluttershy said that her parents died when she was young.
But the story is getting good, keep up the good work my friend
Great opener, but as another commenter said, don't the CMCs already have their cutie marks?
5045516 Applebloom actually got her cutie mark in A New Home 2
5047311 Oh I uh didn't know that, I actually skipped that one. As soon as I saw Chrysalis I said "Nope, screw you Chrysalis, I hate you." What is her Cutie Mark, I'm not going to read it so please just tell me or tell me which chapter it's in.
5046656 Wait what? Which chapter did she say her parents are dead in?
5047432 I think it was probably in the first or second chapter, I forget which
5047442 In A new Home chapter 19: confrontation with diamond tiara, or something like that
5047488 I'm rereading the first one and I didn't see that at all. Find it, quote it and type the chapter and I'll try to find it. I looked in both Chapter 19: An Honorary Crusader and Chapter 16: Confrontation with Diamond Tiara and I didn't see it in either chapters.
5047482 I really don't want to read it because it has Chrysalis in it and she is a bitch so did it involve cooking and did it have an apple in it?
5047609 ok, 1 it is in there, and two, her talent was in country fashion
5047623
1. As I said find it, quote it, and type the chapter name and I'll look
2. Wait excuse me? Country fashion?
5047747 1. Ok 2. Yes, or something like that
5047747 OH wait, I was thinking of A mothers love! Oopsies!
5047773 2. Why fashion? That makes no sense. sighs Well to quote my favorite MLP villain.
5047805 It's ok we all have our brain fart moments.
well this was a treat can't wait to read the next chapter, although you'd think she tell her parents she adopted a child sooner but im looking forward to their meeting
stay classy
Awesome, I can get started on a cover if Ya want
also, do you have like a mental image of Fluttershy's parents?
Okay I have a little problem. I have the coverart done, but it won't upload on dA.
5046656 I'll fix that with the CMC part and them already getting their cutie mark. I wasn't thinking when I wanted to give Toby a good fib to tell Fluttershy without spoiling the surprise.
Also, I looked over those chapters you listed, but no I don't think I did write that Fluttershy's parents died. I think you were talking about how she overcame her fear of flying.
5045516 I fixed that part.
I completely forgot that I gave them their cutie marks, Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle achieved theirs in A New Home at the talent show and AB got hers in A New Home II. 
5045532 Thank you very kindly my friend. I am glad you enjoy it.
5045567 Well, it's just the beginning my friend.
5045756 Thank you always my friend.
5045984 Very beautiful and straight from the heart. Thank you for sharing.
5046014 Thank you very kindly for the yays.
5046038 Thank you very much and I hope to make it even better with the next two chapters.
5046627 Well, I tagged it romance, but what other tag should I use?
5049238
Human.
5049318 Oh, thank you for that.
5049211 As I said to another writer, I mixed up your story with A Mothers Love, the story with Lightning Twister
5049238 No Thank you for getting the chance to read my poem. ^^
well i hope i can actualy read this (i dont think i will make 2 chapters)
This will be interesting....there are so many ideas on how her parents truly are without a more solid context to go off of.
I don't usually like this kind of stuff. But this
this is a gem.
Right in the feels, as per usual.
Brilliant!
And I thought the Toby saga's finished.
I haven't even read it yet but I know it's gonna be great
Very good, my friend! Keep it up!
Oh man, my heart is crying of what Iron Badge said about Toby.
What gives with Iron Badge?
He shouldn't just judge something by what a book says!
Also, good work.
I like Honey Dew she seems nice. I have mixed feelings about Iron Badge. He was quick to judge but he is looking out for his daughter. I'm just glad he is willing to change his mind about Toby and accept him into the family...unlike a unicorn stallion that got what he deserves
Wait when does this take place? Before a New Home III or after?
Found the right Soundtrack for a saddening chapter.
(Fluttercry Icon isn't crying because of the cruel chapter, she's crying because the music is beautiful). Can't judge a book by it's cover, right?
Keep up the good work APoeticHeart!