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Cover Art done by: FlutterPal

While watching over the land of Equestria during the night, Luna hears the mind, and heart of a young child. She enters into the child's dream, only to find that he is being abused by his own parents. She chases away his fears, and decides to take him with her to Equestria.

She sees the pain the little boy is in, and decides to protect him from anymore harm, becoming the caretaker/mother of the helpless human. How would the Princess of the Sun and Luna's sister, Princess Celestia react after discovering the child? How will the many other ponies of Equestria react to an unknown creature in their home?

A Collaborative Story I am working on with lunafan69 on

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Comments ( 1198 )

woo its here!
and mommy luna!

finally a story with luna as a mother :twilightsmile:

3079169>>3079145 Thank you both always. Indeed, Luna is going to be a mommy in this one.:twilightblush::raritywink:

3079186 It was bound to happen, wasn't it? :twilightblush::pinkiehappy:

3079193 Your welcome always :pinkiehappy: and ok

3079198 now all we need is an oc taking care of a child hmm haven't figured out how that would play out

Was wondering when you'd do Luna.... now you need Pinkie, Applejack, Rainbow, Twilight, and Celestia as one :pinkiecrazy:

Can't wait to read Celestia's reaction to Luna adopting Timmy.

Timmy is his name? If he was Turnner it would be funny, Luna adopting A kid with Twilight Sparkle's voice :twilightoops:

You post the most cutest stories.

"In other news a house was strangely destroyed by a freak accident. A man and his wife were found in the wreckage. Witnesses state that a kraken was the cause. Back to you Bob" :pinkiehappy:

3079145


I knew i should have take Luna instead of Celestia:ajbemused:


Now to the author

Nice story i will wait the next one

What could his parents have done to make him have such a nightmare, and what reason could they have for abusing him:fluttercry:

3080061
You really don't want to know. No one needs that sort of thing in their heads, its bad enough kids go through this. As for your second question, does it matter what there "reason" is?

Moar children in Equestria!

Please tell me those parents'll get what's coming to them..

I'm so happy the better author finally got to it. I'll just sit and watch...:pinkiesad2:
Great work as usual my friend. :fluttercry:

A wonderful Story again, my Friend.

again with these messed up parents i can't stand them. like toby's messed up father. but still any story that is made of you will only bring happiness to the children of the stories. awesome work my friend i can't wait for an update soon

You love your children xD

3082292 Well, to be honest, I don't have any children. I just enjoy writing about children in Equestria, and also I think children, all children deserved to be loved. Especially after something I read on the internet that made me sick.:fluttershysad:

3081627 Thank you always my friend. :twilightblush:

3081500 A dear thank you always my friend. :pinkiehappy:

3080879 No my friend, you aren't going to just sit there and watch, do you understand me?! :flutterrage: I want you continue with your story, and I know you can write great, and your friends on here, your readers know you can write great!:raritywink: You know you can write great, so don't you dare give up on Son of A Pegasus! :flutterrage::rainbowdetermined2:

3080754 You shall see my friend, you shall see. :raritywink:

3080395 Thank you always my friend, and I love the meme. :twilightblush:

3080274 Thank you, and I am proud, and honored that you are liking my children in Equestria stories along with all my other wonderful readers and friends. :pinkiehappy:

3080061 I have to agree with 3080140, but you never know, I might put the reasons in this story.:twilightoops::pinkiegasp:

3079991 Thank you my friend. :pinkiehappy:

3079785 Lol.. uh..oh.. the kraken has been unleashed. :pinkiegasp:

3079773 Thank you very much, I truly appreciate that. :pinkiehappy:

3079692 That would be interesting, but I just think Timmy was okay. :twilightblush::pinkiehappy:

3079667 Oh, I promise it will be good. :raritywink:

3079269 Very true, and I will get to them after I do Heart of Diamonds, and this new Luna one. :pinkiehappy::raritywink:

3079262 Thank you always my friend. :pinkiehappy:

3082513 He needs to be let out every once in a while and Timmy's parents deserve it. Also
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3082559 Yay! South Park reference! :D

Timmy is not going to hurt nopony and this should also have Slice of Life in the some where on this story right and i love it

Odds are that Blueblood will say something inappropriate enough to invoke the RCV at full blast.

Great story its one of those stories that when the chapter ends you want more and more

3090909:pinkiehappy::twilightblush::rainbowkiss:

3090895 Thank you for this comment, and the one before. That is how I feel about a story when I get into it. :raritywink::pinkiehappy::twilightblush:

3090685 Oh, you know Blueblood is going to be a prick toward sweet little Timmy.:fluttershysad:

3090840 RCV? :rainbowhuh::pinkiehappy:

3091111Royal Canterlot Voice/real-life caps lock

good story so far but I find it kinda funny that time has meet princess Celestia and princess Luna were in hearts of diamonds conner has not meet any of the princesses other then twilight if shes a alicorn in that story I cant remember i aybe getting mixed up with a new home or a difforent fic im reading

3091111 why did you not reply to my comment

3091138 Oopsie, I am sorry. I missed it. :fluttershysad: Well, you are right, I am going to add Slice of Life to this, because of the situation Timmy is in.

3091131 Oh, hehe.. I understand. I think I am producing too many stories related to the Children in Equestria concept. :twilightoops: However, in Heart of Diamond, Twilight isn't alicorn Twilight, and also not in Dream Come True.

3091148 that ok and ok and can you be my friend on this website

3091111 Royal Canterlot Voice.:facehoof:

i know people are going to complain about this but if there is going to be a sequel please do what you did for a new home 2 (implying that this wont happen in this story). it would be awesome to see luna react the same way that fluttershy did to chrysillis.:flutterrage::pinkiehappy:

I'm sure Timmy well be very welcome. :pinkiesmile:

3091568 oopsie.:twilightblush: now I feel stupid. :facehoof:

3092179 I might, but this might just be an only one part saga. :twilightblush:

3092532 oh, of course he will. :raritywink:

3092767 Thank you always my friend. :pinkiehappy:

To quote from Shao Kahn, I'd just like to say:
"IF I EVER FIND TIMMY'S PARENTS I WILL DEVOUR THEIR SOULS INSIDE AN INFINITE POOL OF HELL FIRE UNTIL THEIR ORGANS LIQUIFY FROM THE UNIMAGINABLE PAIN"

3094723:pinkiegasp::twilightoops: They better start praying and hoping that Shao Kahn doesn't find them.

wow beautiful my friend i just hope twilight doesn't go insane with the whole new species thing

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