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RedStar76


Author of the Kamen Rider Drake series and all around fan of...just about anything with action in it. Shooting Stars Away! -RedStar

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------------Not on Hiatus, Currently being edited before new chapter are released---------
An eight year old boy and a sixteen year old boy that both live in Equestria. What more could they possibly have in common besides that? Are they cousins? No. Brothers? Getting warmer, but no. The same person? Yep.
What happens? The younger and older Toby not only switch bodies but time periods as well. This could get interesting...
Rated Teen just in case for future chapters.
If you haven't seen the ANewHome series yet, then this will make no sense, so please go read the series before you get confused.
If you haven't seen The Story of Red Tails yet, I suggest you should as the past sequences take place during that period of time in the Tobyverse created by my amazing friend APoeticHeart.
Cover art done by my amazing friend, ShutterGuy!
The latest ANewHome by Poetic and fred2266: click me

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 39 )

i love the Prologue and i am waiting for more chapters to come out

A good start. I await more with all the patience of a hungry manticore.

Good Start. Bad Cliffhanger.
:flutterrage: I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!!!
:yay: But I like your Story^^

Comment posted by OneLonelyPickle deleted Sep 15th, 2013

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Well, Toby isn't my OC. And, did you read the ANewHome series at all? It's the main reason why he calls certain ponies Aunt and Uncle. Seriously, you should read it before just calling him a *Mary Sue.
Yes, it's fairly obvious from the description that's going to happen, but the title of the story gives away the whole 'time' thing already.
Well, I put the SugarCube corner scene as I wanted it to be there. In terms of flow, yes, it's because I wanted it ti be there, I thought that was fairly obvious.
This is just the prologue, it's not like all those characters are going to appear in every chapter.
If you like it, continue reading, that's your choice.
If you can show me exactly 'how' to improve these, then do, I'm trying to become a better writer.
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3209777 I'm not helping anyone who would delete a comment I made to help them.

Sorry, your loss.

Look forward to more. I don't like the sound of that flash of light though from each Sweetie Belle. :twilightoops::pinkiegasp:

Pretty good, I must say. Favorited for obvious reasons.

For some REASON, my favorite part was

"Carrot Cake. Honey!"
"Ugh..." groaned Mr.Cake as he descended down the stairs with two high energy foals jumping up and down on his back. "Check."

Mighty clever of you. :rainbowkiss:

3221562 Hehe, thanks fred, that means a lot :twilightsmile:

3224129 Silver Spoon's character tag means she'll be prominent in this story, though.....BUT, I can move past that. :twilightsheepish:

Waiting for an update before I decide whether to fave and follow...

3238508 Great to know :twilightsmile: I should have it up by tonight, and if not, tomorrow morning or afternoon. I sincerely thank you for considering the fave and follow :pinkiehappy:, and taking the time to read one of my stories :twilightsheepish:

i love it and i wonder how the two fluttershys are going to react to her adoptive son

THAT is going to be interesting to explain. Cant wait for the next Chapter :pinkiehappy:

Well, let the adventure in the Twilight Zone commence. :pinkiehappy: Opal just uses anything or anyone as a bed. :flutterrage:

I'm glad which Toby belonged to which time-frame has been established. I was confused for a little bit. :twilightsheepish:

3263453
Yeah, speaking of which, I'm actually gonna edit the first couple of chapters before I post the next one next week :pinkiesmile: How's New Show ep.3 coming along after the 'virus incident'?

3263561 I am exactly 1,115 words in, which is the length of the intro. I'd probably be halfway done by now, but, as I said, I had to type it TWICE.

I'll work on it some more later tonight.

3263735 I see :twilightsmile: Is someone from the audience gonna be in it again? (Don't tell me which one, I WANT NO SPOILERS... other than this one :trollestia:)

3263748 Well, they'll ALL be in it, but in a prominent role?

Eeeeeeehhhhhhhhh...................yes.

3263755 I meant like when you forced Geo onto the stage (BTW, I've actually never had churro, where can I get one?) :pinkiehappy:

3263760 No, there won't be any audience members as guests THIS week. Sorry.

And to answer your question.....TACO BELL. That's the easiest and most affordable place. Other options would be making one yourself, or going to Mexico.

3263766 I see, thanks :twilightsmile: (Oh, and if something bad happens to Toby, y'know Fluttershy's motherly instincts will kick in and she'll probably be ragin' like a boss on the show :trollestia:)

3263787 This is why we bought restraints.

Oprah is prepared for EVERY situation.

3263790 LYRA?! (Well, that was unexpected change in profile pic) Wait, if Toby is there, then did he also steal Jason's waffles yet? :trollestia:

3263802 Yeah.....I get bored with my profile pic VERY quickly, so I'll be changing it up every week or so. Even though the Cadance one WAS ULTRA cute!

No, he hasn't stolen his waffles yet, he's been too busy STEALING MY CHURROSTIN!!!!!! :flutterrage::pinkiesmile::pinkiesick::rainbowkiss:SACFDSEFDfdefsreffsfffsfsFUKYUFUKYUFUKYUFUKYU

3263817 True (You seem to have a lot in common with Momotaros when it comes to rage :trollestia:)
So, is Jason gonna be moderating?

3263843 Yes, and so will I.

WE SHALL BRING JUSTICE UPON THY SUGARY CHILD.

When do the two toby's switch bodies?

3263817 Dude, it's okay. Toby was just hungry during a long journey to get his locket back.

C20

3263863
Hey dude will silver spoon and Toby have their first kiss 😄

Hello? Is this story gonna resume?

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