Chapter One
As morning arrived in the land of Equestria, within the dreaded Badlands, Queen Chrysalis was devising a plan to extract her revenge on Princess Celestia and her faithful subjects. She paced back and forth inside her cave as she had an audience of her changeling army, and the Diamond Dogs.
Her fangs were dripping with saliva as she thought about the image of the young child who won the heart of the ponies of Ponyville, especially the heart of Princess Celestia. “Mm… I can just taste all of that pure and true love that flows through the heart of that tasty little morsel,” she stopped pacing and turned her attention to the Diamond Dogs who had their heads bowed ready to hear of her plans.
She stomped her hoof hard against the ground glaring at them “Now listen you mutts, I have witnessed this child that you spoke of through the mind of one of my own. My hunger has grown from the sight of him, and I believe he does possess enough love that will give me and my army enough strength to finally end the reign of Celestia,” she let out a sinister cackle.
Rover spoke up for the other two “Neh… my queen, we are at your mercy and shall perform whatever dastardly deed you give us,” he kept his head bowed. Fido and Spot nodded their heads in agreement.
Chrysalis smirked evilly, but looked at the three curiously “You mongrels seem obedient enough, but I want to know if I let you three assist me with my plans, what do you seek in return?’ She loomed over them staring ice cold daggers at them.
Fido and Spot was unable to speak due their uncontrollable trembling under the changeling queen’s glare. Rover sighed in annoyance at the two as he looked up at her “Neh… w-well, my queen, being Diamond Dogs, we know that there are many gems and diamonds that exist within the underground caves of the Badlands.”
Chrysalis looked down at the lead dog “Hmm… so if I allow you assist me with my plan, then all you ask for in return is to use this land, our home as your own personal diamond mine?”
Rover nodded nervously as he started to shake a little himself “Y-yes my queen, and I promise me and my fellow Diamond Dogs will never bother you or your children,” he looked up with a hopeful yet fearful look.
She raised a fore hoof and tapped at her chin in a thinking manner “Hmm… that sounds like a fair trade for your loyal services to me. You mutts have a deal, but first we must succeed at the first part of my plan, then you can have all the gems your mangy hearts desires,” she let out a cackle.
The three dogs nodded as Rover spoke up “Thank you my queen, we promise we shall not fail you,” he bowed his head.
She smirked down at them “That is what I like to hear, and you better see that you do not fail me,” she sighed contently as she turned to a changeling drone that was hovering beside her. She reached up to stroke at its head “My child, I must ask you to look after your fellow drones, because Mommy has to go retrieve us some food,” she gave the drone a sinister yet warm smile as it nodded in agreement.
She turned her attention back to the Diamond Dogs “I shall accompany you three so we can capture this young one and bring him back to feed myself and my children,” she grinned evilly.
The three nodded and said in unison “Yes your highness,” they bowed their heads and shook nervously.
“Good dogs,” she sighed softly as she trotted past them outside of her cave. She took a deep breath of the morning air and the grin on her face grew wider “Mm… today will be the beginning of the end of Celestia’s reign as the Princess of Equestria, and the beginning of the rule of the Changeling Queen,” she let out an evil cackle. She hovered into the air as her army hovered outside and stopped before her.
The Diamond Dogs came walking out last looking up at the intimidating sight.
Chrysalis smiled at her army “My children, soon we shall rule all of Equestria, and get our revenge on those who done us wrong!” She spoke with power and pride “And it will all come true, because of the small child that these three speak of. For now my children, you all must stay here until you are able to feast on this young one’s pure love,” they all nodded with evil grins on their faces.
Rover shook nervously as he looked up "M-my queen, what do you have mind to capture that little runt once we get to Ponyville?"
She lowered onto the ground towering over the three and glared at them "That you mutt is very simple. With the ability to shift into any pony I want, I will change into one of the young child's beloved and lure him away from prying eyes," she grinned evilly. "Then you three fleabags will jump the tasty little colt and hold him still so I can cast a sleeping spell on him. Won't want him to struggle too much on the way back here, and waste all that precious energy," she let out a heartless cackle.
The three laughed along with her until she stomped her hoof in front of them "SILENCE!" She yelled as she hovered up into the air again "Now let's go, we have a kingdom to overrun," she cackled evilly.
As she flew ahead with the three dogs following behind on the ground, she thought to herself “Princess Celestia, I vow to get my vengeance once and for all,” she flew above the Diamond Dogs as they began their trek toward Ponyville.
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OH new story!
well shit.... chrissy why?
and turning into his momma, thats a bit to far.
THERE IT IS!
2922040
he might be emotionly scard from this...
Well how's that for timing? I just finished reading Holidays With Toby and then I see that you posted this.
I fear for the child's wellbeing now. I hope Flutterrage is unleashed in some way soon!
2922065
^ this
NEW STORY OMG! AWESOME! Kinda want to see an alt ending to this with both outcomes :) would be awesome!
2922042 she don't give no fucks, she wants to rule Equestria, she doesn't care about turning into a kids mom so she can lure him into a sense of false-security
Look intense,
Hope things work out good for Toby. 
2922262 You shall see my friend, you shall see.
2922040 What can I say Chrysalis is called the Queen of Darkness for a reason.
2922042 Cruel, yet satisfying in her mind.
2922048 YES IT IS.
2922065 I am going to try my best to be more recent/current with the updates than I have been lately. Oh, don't worry, I plan to not disappoint.
2922099 That is a real good idea, I might really think about that, thank you always.
2922286 Yea, I will.
2922286 You are very welcome my good friend :)
2922286 Better idea! Why don't you make it so that you write a different story per-say, like have two of the same chapter, but so that one works towards the ponies favor, while the other works towards the changelings, then have those chapters lead to the next one depending on who you choose, get it? It's hard to explain. Like a choose your own story, where you can choose either Changelings or Ponies for the end outcome
Bum Bum Bummmmm and the plot thickens the queen get toby i fear for the kid
i just hope toby doesn't fall to easy for the bug queen
This isn't looking good for Toby. Nice start.
Ooooh! This gonna be good! I expect twists and turns and when Toby gets done with Chrysalis she won't know what hit her.
It begins!
That was quick.
oh images.wikia.com/glee/images/9/95/This-is-gonna-be-good.gif
Blunt and too the point. The conclusion I've made: The Queen is evil O_O!!! LE GASP!!!!
Heh heh :D!! Awesome first chapter!!! HURAH FOR THE SEQUEL!!!
WOO HOO NEW STORY!
Chryssallis desires the throne does she, well I'm sure we can get Khal Drogo to find her a fitting crown!
Sadly that would drive the rating to M faster than you can say karma.
2922462 I think I know what you are talking about. Maybe write two endings when I get to them, one with the ending with Good prevailing, and the other ending with Evil/Bad prevailing? Is that correct, if I may ask?
2922499 Well, you never know about Toby. He has such a trusting and giving nature to him, and Queen Chrysalis can be conniving and very meticulous.
2922516 Thank you very much, and no it isn't.
2922527 No she won't, but also Toby won't either.
2922649 Thank you very much always. Like I said I am going to try my best to be constant with good and quick yet good-quality updates with this one.
2922799 Yes it does. Dun...dun...dun..
2922848 Thank you. It came straight to me last night, and I knew I had to write it down.
2922933 I promise, I am going to do my best to top "A New Home".
2923025 Indeed, she is evil, but the question is, will sweet young Toby be able to help reform her as Fluttershy did for Discord?
2923251 Yes it is, and thank you very much always.
2923466 Oh, yes the throne is her main objective, but she doesn't plan to take it over without some insurance.
2923503 I'm so nervouscited!!!
I'm going to love this story, I can't wait for the next chapter.
2923654 Thank you always very much for your kind words. I am working on Chapter Two now.
oh wow awesome story i can't wait for undates
2924230 Thank you very much always my friend.
Short... but not less AWESOME! A good start with Chryssalis and the D-Dogs.
Cant wait to read more from them.
2924341 Thank you very much, and don't worry you will.
oh they're in for a surprise
Way ago, can't wait to read more of this.
I like the idea of the sequel but I hate how chrysalis acts!!!
She is supposed to be 'evil' which I can't see how she's 'evil' in the first place! She just wants her kids to be fed to they can live! To me its unfair how the changelings are generally treated in some fics! 
Omg....The Sequel....*Likes* * Adds to Favorites* :)
i wanna know who disliked?
2924580 Yes they are.
2924679 Thank you.
2924683 I agree with how they are treated.
2924825 Thank you very much always.
2925584 Haha.. that is okay, I don't hold no grudges.
OH MY GOD,
THE SEQUEL
. I have been looking forward to this for so long!
yesyesyesyesyesyesyesYES...........sorry,
lost control of myself there for a moment. Thank you for releasing this sequel.
Now, let's see if it is possible to kill a ghost.......WITH FEELS!!!!!!
I dont like the dark tag :(