• Member Since 20th May, 2012
  • offline last seen Aug 29th, 2018

Chelis


Writer/Admin/Title VII requirement for Horse News; humanized/equestria girls fanfic writer. Pardon my grit

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When it is discovered that a book containing hidden magic from a young Starswirl the Bearded is located deep within the Griffon Kingdom. Twilight and her #1 assistant team up with The Crystal Kingdom's newest guard for a bradical adventure about teamwork, friendship, and the (awkward but cute) art of waifu stealing.

Chapters (13)
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Comments ( 27 )

I'll read this later; you won me over with the title alone.

I can't wait for more to happen.

Do you need a proofreader? This story has potential, but it needs a spot of polish to look great.

So... much... grammar... mistakes... elipses... taking... over :trollestia:

No, but seriously, you need a proofreader, stat. Otherwise, a cute story, if a little confusing at time and at the same time not much has actually happened. Keep improving and dont worry about Flash Sentry haters :raritywink:

so yea looking for proofreaders!

Guys! We need a proofreader! Anyone know where?

oh yea forgot to mention my sister did a proofreading so take a look!

giving up on the second chapter, should (for the sake of getting the story moving) i skip the canterlot scene and move on to the crystal kingdom?

To those who are down voting because it is Flash Sentry: you guys are real upstanding bronies that should teach the world how to "love and tolerate" *playful sarcasm* :rainbowwild:

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It was the reason why It took this long for a update, every approach or scenario I tried to put in didn't feel right, so I skipped it and moved on to keep the story going

3015218 Find a proofreader yet? I can help if you need it, and it really seems like you do. :pinkiehappy:

3015218 I'll give ya a thumbs up if you publish the second chapter! :twilightblush:

Is every chapter going to have a Brad pun in it? :ajbemused:

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yes! puns are bradical!

Gilda's hear, woopty fucking do!

Spike irked an eyebrow "Twilight, you were trying to make up excuses to leave him our room a few hours ago! Are you trying to magically fall in love with Flash just so Chelis doesn't have to take the time to explain why you might have feelings for Flash Sentry?"

W....T.....F.....

You all should totally follow my twitter for my misadventures!

https://twitter.com/Chelis714

Don't forget to favorite, thumb up, and "watch" me too!

I think I would know if I wanted to follow/watch/stalk you....

Also, that first quote SHOULD'VE been said by a Pinkie clone from nowhere. It fits that way. xD

Still a good chapter but I feel that it is a bit too short, chapter-wise. Meh, I don't mind short chapters.

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and she is always listening man! :pinkiecrazy:

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yea i like to have some 4th wall fun sometime, its unexpexted.


as for that quote it's that or forcing everyone to, but that that would be immoral, illegal and cost too much money!

Pinkie Pie:Fourth wall breaking now!Disregard physics and your ears!

Sorry I just had to type that.Its from "Helping Twilight Win the Crown"(literal version.)it's SOOO funny.And at the end, Sunset Shimmer says in a deep man voice," quit twerking fools!Mama needs some fried chicken!"

OMG gets me every time.

A little sloppy on the form and grammar but not enough to detract from the humor. So far, a fun little fic making light of one of my favorite ships.

Did Spike go all sweet on Gilda? Oh snap!

Sad how many dislikes this story has.
Stupid Flash-hating trollers :ajbemused:
I swear they hunt down Flash stories, just to dislike them.

Fair enough, not all the dislikes are because of Flash hate...but still
this is ridiculous!

Flash Sentry better look out, not only has he been arrested by that evil King, it looks like Prince Bradley of the Griffons is trying to steal his waifu.

NO. NO. WHY. WHY. NOPE. I. HATE. CLIFFHANGERS. WHY AUTHOR...WHY?! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME. WHEN I SCROLLED DOWN, I WAS EXTREMELY HAPPY BECAUSE A NEW CHAPTER WAS PUBLISH (IM BEING 4 REAL) THEN..IT ENDS UP WITH A CLIFFHANGER.

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cliffhangers and making people believe something bad happened when it was actually innocent are my forte

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