The other side of the coin

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Princess Twilight Sparkle's work days are hard. She never comes to see her friends anymore. The only thing to cheer her up is Flash Sentry, the new, handsome guard. But when he suddenly disappeared, Twilight had no choice...

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Lord Dark

Lord Dark #1 · Jul 12th, 2013 · · ·

Too short, but daws anyway.

OmniFox

OmniFox #2 · Jul 12th, 2013 · · ·

She forgot the one thing to make this all fine: The kiss.

Unbekannt

Unbekannt #3 · Jul 12th, 2013 · · ·

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Well, I made it a hug ;)

VanHooooon

VanHooooon #4 · Jul 15th, 2013 · · ·

Good story. Congrats on learning English.

Unbekannt

Unbekannt #5 · Jul 15th, 2013 · 1 · ·

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Umm... thanks?

Melodypony3

Melodypony3 #6 · Jul 15th, 2013 · · ·

Boooring!

Unbekannt

Unbekannt #7 · Jul 15th, 2013 · · ·

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I know, it is my First Story. It didn't end up as well as I thought it would. Also, I expexted more criticism like this. Thanks :D

Sketchy Markks

Sketchy Markks #8 · Jul 15th, 2013 · · ·

good plot, pretty decent for a first story.

I've seen many tenth stories that were ten times worse.

Keep learning.

WillCHD

WillCHD #9 · Jul 18th, 2013 · · ·

It may have been a very short story but I really enjoyed it, if you ever decide to make a sequel I think it would be great to go more into there relationship

Unbekannt

Unbekannt #10 · Jul 18th, 2013 · · ·

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Sorry, I don't really want to do a romance, although i think these two are pretty cute together...
But I'm going to write more fictions, I already have two ideas for long stories.
Anyway, I write veeery slow so it could take a while.

Erebos