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Con Arty


Don't ever buy tickets to a con artists' convention. Chances are when you get there, no one else will be there...

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Pinkie Pie has been feeling a bit odd lately. Butterflies in her stomach, a tingling in her hooves, a loss for words... And only when HE is around. This "he" is Cheese Sandwhich, and she can't stop thinking about him!

But why?

Will they get their happy ending?

(Main Characters: Pinkie Pie and Cheese Sandwich)

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 13 )

OMG! It really was a good story! I just can't wait to read more of it! Please update soon! :pinkiehappy:

Alright! Short and sweet and nicely done. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter

Nicolas Sparks?

They're an awesome pair, aren't they?

Do you mind a few tiny suggestions? They're teeny tweaks: you can easily do them, and you don't need to do any of them. You might like to use left justification. Or maybe you are using a simple indent? I'm not sure, but it almost looks center justified, and that makes it harder to read.

Sweet Sixteen--well, I guess you could do that, or it could be her cute-ceanera, too. Pinkie's even got a resume for that. I try to fudge things like ages and holidays, although I guess they do celebrate birthdays. Here's another idea, and you can use it or not: maybe, instead of a flyer, which could take a while, Rarity or Fluttershy could pull some strings to get Pinkie the job. After all, Photo Finish is an important pony: she might not have a flyer which would advertise to just anypony. Rarity could still be the one to suggest the idea and get things rolling, but she's likely to have heard the latest gossip in the fashion world. I'm also wondering if Rarity would say "the lucky bi--" even in her head; maybe something like getting sidetracked over how it's not faaaaaair. Anyway, it's all up to you.

Seriously, who would ask Twilight for advice on romance?

I love it when Pinkie pulls things from hammerspace. :pinkiehappy:

Anyway, good luck with the story! I'll keep an eye out for it. Fellow CheesePie shippers must stick together.

I love it! :pinkiehappy: :heart:

Also, I must say that you write for Pinkie Pie very well. You kept her very, very in character, which is something most people have a hard time doing. She's not an easy one to write for. :twilightsmile:

Yeah go Pinkie and Cheese. I can't wait for the next chapter. This story looks promising.

There's literally only one thing wrong with this: there isn't more yet! I seriously love this and I'm beyond anxious to see more. :rainbowkiss:

I REQUIRE MOAR HRGNXXXVNDKL:FJIO

I cant wait for the next chapter yeah:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Please write more soon!:fluttercry: It was so good!

Please write more soon, this was so good!!:raritycry:

Let me just say this; I expected CheesePie shipfics as soon as I saw them stood next to each other in that episode.
I never expected something to completely blow off the roof of my expectations.
It's chapter 1, and I can already see the character of every pony you've written.
This is getting a like, a favourite, and a smiley Pinkie face from me! :pinkiehappy:

I wanna see more this is adoreable:rainbowkiss:

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