Don't ever buy tickets to a con artists' convention. Chances are when you get there, no one else will be there...
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Great job.
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Thank you
A nice story, nothing really bad I can think of. You wrote it just as if it could be in the show, which is hard to do (for me) for some reason.
The pebble and boulder story was beautiful. Have this .
Amazing! You're writing is just fantastic. Everything flowed naturally and the characters were highly believable. Wonderful job!
Maud telling Pinkie a story is just the icing on the cake for me.
Great story.
Splendid job.
Poor Gummy. May he rest in peace.
Except for "alright" instead of "all right", this is a great short. You captured Maud's soft-spoken nature perfectly. I loved her in the show and would love to see her become a semi-regular character.
So sad!!
"Sugar Crystal" That is the most adorable nickname I have ever heard.
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I thought so too
That way, Maud can relate her to minerals. Rocks are made of minerals. (:
"Don't hate me please!"
How could anyone hate you for this story? It's short, sweet, and to the point. Maud singing and comforting Pinkie Pie was adorable.
I like the nickname Sugar Crystal.
And I like the way your wrote Maud. She's kinda like the way I wrote Rainbow Dash in a Scootaloo fic I did. Although to most people she's cocky, confident, and arrogant on the outside, on the inside and when alone with Scootaloo she drops her guard and is more open about her feelings, showing care and concern and even crying just a little when Scootaloo took a big risk and nearly crippled herself trying to prove she could fly by herself.
2 thumbs way up!
The Changlings didn't invade the Crystal Empire. Other than that, it was a great story.
I love this story, it's absolutely amazing. You wrote it perfectly to get readers to feel the emotions....I know I did, I teared up from it.....
Thefeels on the bus go.. round.. and.....round *sobs*
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I like your feels song.