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Cheese Sandwich has always planned parties alone, but not anymore. Not since he found a certain pink mare...
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Various short little CheesePie things. They don't necessarily fit together or anything. It's just fluff and shippy things...

There are probably errors everywhere, so I apologize for that...

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 57 )

This is an interesting story. I hope to read more chapters soon.

I was actually thinking about writing a romance between these two myself -- I might still do it, but this is very nice as well. :twilightsmile:

This is adorable, I can't even form coherent thoughts right now it's that adorable. I really hope there is more soon, because I don't think I'll be able to handle going without delicious Cheese Pie for too long! It is a bit sad that Cheese has to go, but he's a wandering Party Pony after all. Maybe someday he'll be able to settle down, but until then, he and Pinkie will just have to treasure every moment they spend together all that much more! :pinkiesad2:

Not to mention... oh, what is the saying? "Absence makes the heart grow fonder" or something like that. Heh. :pinkiesmile:

The Cheese stands alone-- But he said nothing about sitting or laying on picnic blankets or doing the rubber chicken dance alone! :pinkiehappy:

I believe the phrase is

"But Pinkie, shouldn't someone be taking care of you?"

"But Pinkie, shouldn't someone be taking cake of you?"

Best of luck with the next chapter. I can't wait for them to go out on a real date.

3916756 Oh, wow. :applejackconfused:
Thank you for pointing that out. :twilightblush:

Wow. Nice chapter. Now we need the families to meet and greet. We can Pinkie's father threaten cheese with his pick axe. Best of luck

I literally applauded you (and Pinkie and Cheese) when I read "Since they were the ones that spiked it."

Good job guys. Good gob.

asfdghfhjfkalghjlsa please right more author-chan ;3;

I love these ;3;

I want to make a requeeeeeeeeeeestttttttttttttt <3

Pinkie is requested to help plan the Gala and the girls come along with her. All the girls get their own rooms and Celestia (or Trollestia?) accidentally double books Pinkie with Cheese. :rainbowkiss:

Or maybe.. uhm after the events of the birthaversary, Pinkie and Cheese become penpals. o3o

Or um, how they met when they were young o3o

Or uh.. what would have happened if Rainbow Dash hadnt interrupted their moment in Cheese Confesses. 0-0

Cheese confesses XD (puns..)

Youngverse o3o

Pinkie asks Cheese on a dateeeeeeeeeeeeeeee /o3o

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gawdammit xD

3918093 Ohhhh the dreaded Meet the Parents scenario! Well Cheese can take comfort in that Pinkie doesn't have a big brother who may or may not be overprotective!... Only three sisters who may or may not be overprotective of their energetic party pony sister. Huh.

3918516 Don't forget her father. I can he him chasing cheese around the field saying, you are no good for my daughter. Though I think cheese could out run him.

3918526 And who knows just how creative a rock farmer could be with threats... *shivers* :pinkiecrazy:

3918657 Or how many blunt objects he can throw at Cheese.

Update please I love this shipping

3918398 :pinkiegasp: That's a lot of requests! I'll see what I can do! That first one is definitely making the gears turn in my head...

If you don't mind could you finish this chapter it would be nice to see what happens after this you don't have to if you want.....

3920481 I might do that another time. To be honest, I'm really not sure what would happen next though...

3920722 ok I'll just wait then I'm pretty sure you can come up with somthing because you write amazing stories!!!!

why not make a chapter where she gets pregnant?

3921515 Aww, thanks! That means a lot to me.:twilightblush:

hm would love a chapter where their family made up with cheese but not in the next chapter cause that be too fast:P

:heart: :heart: :heart: love this chapter it was pretty nice!!!! :)

I was the one to suggest this chapter. I was bouncing ideas off of another reader.

the story is great. the ideas are interesting you just need a complete rewrite. while they're great and interesting. theres A LOT of misspelled words and it's TOO fast paced!! way too fast paced. you're giving me a tiny spoon taste of a wedding cake, man. you're leaving too much to imagination and not a full story

3926694 Well, technically, it's not a full story... This is more or less just a while bunch of CheesePie shorts. There isn't any storyline here at all.... They don't even necessarily go in order!

As for being fast paced, I suppose that's kinda the idea. I just want these to be quick, short little cute things that people can read if they want something fluffy... I don't know, that was just kind of the point here...

But I agree, I should at least go back through and read them over again to catch spelling mistakes and stuff, if not rewrite things.

Ah family. They mean well, buuuut, well, I'm sure we all have stories about that kind of thing. Don't give up Cheese! I'm sure the next meeting will go down better. Hopefully.

And Retcon must be back at the farm, I don't think I saw any mention of her here. :rainbowlaugh:

I understand that these things don't go in order. Maybe have a party class. Celestial have Pinkie and Cheese give a class to upcoming ponies that work in the place on how to throw a party. That would be funny to see what antics they pull on their class.

3927660 Ooh! That is a good idea!

Cheese and Pinkie babysitting. Cheese's reaction to Pumpkin's love of gnawing on rubber chickens would be funny.

Cheese proposing to PINKIE!!! It would be super-awesome-mazing!

April Fools' Day. That would be more chaotic than Discord. :trollestia:

Great story! I loved it! Hope you'll update soon! :pinkiehappy:

You totally need to continue this. I loved your stories! Keep it up, and maybe have them go to a party in another place like Manehattan or something and have Cheese propose... and then if you're having a wedding have Twilight figuratively tie Cheese and Pinkie down so they won't plan the wedding! That'll be so funny... Lol

Oh my gosh! My favourite so far :heart: I laughed my ass off reading 'Since they were the ones who spiked it" I love your stories! So cute! :pinkiehappy:

Like maybe a love triangle between pinkie where she has to choose tween discord or cheese

Why does everypony call Cheese Sandwich a colt!?! He`s a stallion!:flutterrage:

Aw man, why does Cheese have to go?:fluttercry:

I just CAN NOT BELIEVE that he has never had a b-day party!! So weird...:unsuresweetie:

The ending was hilarious!!:rainbowlaugh:

Awwwwww, Cheese was gonna ask Pinkie to marry him! But he didn't get to! Its sad..:fluttercry:

I SOOO AGREE WITH zZ Sky Ninja Zz! MAKE PINKIE PREGGERS!! DO IIIITTTY!!!:pinkiehappy:

I can not believe that Igneous Rock doesn't like Cheese Sandwich. It hurts my brain trying to fiqure out why he dislikes Cheese:rainbowhuh:

Didn't know he cared that much about sasandwsandwiches!n!!:rainbowlaugh:

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