Starlight Skydancer fell deeply in love with a human that came to her dreams. Determined to be with him she calls upon Princess Luna for help to be with her love. The Princess reluctantly granted her wish and to protect her from the harshness of the human-world she transformed her figure into the appearance of a human.
Three year's pass, before Luna hears a very distant cry of help from Starlight. She transports her back and finds that she has turned back into pony and isn't alone. She had brought her newborn son, Jason, back with her, but this wasn't a colt. It was a human baby. With wings!
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Chapters (5)
Reading the prologue... OMG your just as amazing with your writing as you are with your art! Keep up the fantastic work!
Great first chapter. Oh, the yearning of Starlight to be with the man she loves, that she was willing to be transformed into a human. However, I feel that her life is not all complete like she thinks it is.
This is very interesting, and great, and beautiful, I look forward to reading more.
Oh? OH? this is one of the most intriguing descriptions to a story I have read and must read!
Oh man now I'm thinking on the circumstances that sky wants to return and with her child no less
I have a specific scenerio in mind but I don't wanna spoil it great first chapter!
GOD DAMN IT IT HAPPENED AGAIN!!! I thought of Starlight a while ago in fact, and somehow without me knowing telling you, you happen to have the same OC. Damn it... First Genesis... Now this... sigh... I don't write the stories, I just come up with them. Mabey I'll just change the last name of it... Yea that's it... Ok I forgive you!
Okay, critique time. There's a healthy smattering of typos and whatnot across this prologue. Primarily, it's all structural issues, such as added words, and I think I saw a tense error or two.
Now, your description of the story claims that it is the child of these two. However, you focused the prologue just on the soon-to-be-deceased mother, and the father of the child. I caution you against spending too long on these two, as it's the description that draws folks in. If that makes any sense.
Good luck writing. It's a somewhat interesting idea at least, so you've got that going for you.
damn. this is looking like it'll be interesting!
Sheet this interesting quite interesting
I don't know if there's a typo, but I think you meant that she thought aloud or something like this; otherwise it just seems strange that Luna suddenly reacts on her thoughts
Anyway, seems promising
I like,more or I will kill you all
meh
Love it, but... Nooooooo not poor starlight!
I feel like I am one year old again in my own mother's arms as she holds me and comforts me. Poor Starlight though. However, I know that she loved her son with all her heart. I wonder what happened with her and Ken back on Earth to cause such damage.
"In Your Arms" was an excellent choice for this chapter.
2731081 *gives heartfelt hug* same here.
2731106 *Returns heartfelt hug* Thank you.
2731299 fimfic needs more hugs!
Beautiful chapter "hugs for everyone" just lovely
2731299 2731309 2731458 Here everyone can have some more hugs *hugs all*
And poor Starlight
I don't know what happened to them but I blame whatever human government they lived under 
Good chapter
But your video link is broken 
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I was fearful that Starlight was going to die because Ken was an asshole, but it's now clear that he tried to protect Starlight and their kid the product of such a beautiful love. To bad it met such a tragic end , a short, but a beautiful love story
2732331 I was thinking that same thing
2721836 Thank you so much I really do appreciate your kind words I try my best with everything I do.
2722417 IF you what to PM me I would love to hear your theory.
Thank you for your kind words.
2722447 I hope you know I didn't mean to do it intentionally.
You really ought to Capitalize your ideas into writing I'm sure what you put down would be interesting. 
2723326 Thank you I haven't found a proofreader as of yet and I probably could use one. Your insight is very valid and I Appreciate all criticism because that is what will make me a better writer in the future.
2724241>>2724415 I really am happy you're finding this to be interesting I hope to satisfy with what I have ahead.
2727088 I went back and fixed it Thank you for pointing that out to me.
2727833 Don't worry there will be more lol
Don't hurt anypony they need to live.
2730205 Yeah you think so too huh?
What do you think could be improved? I would love to hear your input. 
2730948 Thank you so much and I know I teared up myself at this point of the story, Is it okay for the writer to cry to his own story?
2731081 You will see my friend, you will see... I don't like to leave things unexplained. I get kinda Twilight obsessive about that stuff
Thank you for your great support. 
2731106>>2731458 I LOVE HUGS They make my day so much better.
2731750 I Can't seem to fix it... hmm
I'll try to figure it out. Thank you my friend I appreciate the support. 
2732331 That's a great song I listen to this song sometimes when I write. Thank you for sharing that.
2732704 Thank you so much that means a lot to me to hear that.
Thank you all.
2733330 yes. it. is.
Oh god why... *Curls in a hole to cry eyes out*
2733667 Hi Pyro. *Pats you on the back* Don't worry
2733667 Wow I'm really sorry, here hopefully this will make it up
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starlight ;-;
2732704 its what I thought too no doubt after giving birth to there son there musta been an uproar of some kind about a human being born with wings and either having religious ties scientific ties or something of the like and wanted that child
Sucks Ken dies and skylight I can only hope there kid can live a good life being as he the first of his kind in equestria
The most used name for a human in Equestria story
I'm not saying it's a bad story though 
2735842 Well thank you very much,
Jason is the name of one of my closest friends so I wanted to use his name. It's a good name 
2735842
I thought the most used name in a HiE story was Connor?
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Some of the most used names would be:
Andrew
Connor
Jason
Kyle
2735975 Know what names I haven't seen yet:
Matthew, Kevin, Greg, Mark, John, Peter, or Philip
2735994 Yeah, can't say I've seen any of those names before; it'd be a nice change to see different names in HiEs. Heck I think my story may be the only one with a human called Cary xD
I never seen a Tyler yet maybe one day it will......
I loved this (: So sweet. Although, I would have liked to have heard a little more on her time with Ken
...to have heard his reaction to Equestria and it's ways would have been fun! 
Still, I'm looking forward to the next update! 
I liked the prologue and I still like it after the subsequent chapter! Yes the death of Starlight Skydancer and the disappearance of Ken was saddening, but I like where this is going by putting a human with wings in Equestria. I can't recall if I've seen that played out, at least I can't recall one that hasn't made the hero extremely Mary Sue...ish. I'm eager to read the subsequent chapters as they come out, so thanks for posting this!
Starlight ist tote. :( I like this story so far I am excited to see more!
now, I wonder who's gonna adopt the kid
2740992 who knows, there might be side stories covering that on the way
my only issue with your fic, is that you make the same typo, "your" instead of "you're"
2751620 Sorry about that I am in need of a proofreader. I have one willing to help so soon I will be able to have correct use of grammar
OMG loved this chapter! I seceretly wish Luna just keeps and adopts Jason. But how did Starlight Die
to me it sounds like a gunshot or gunfire or something, or I just misread it. Anyways keep up the amazing work!
2735994 Ive seen a couple where the humans name is mathew. Most of them he just goes by Matt.
Fucking CIA
2765761 you and me lets go take em down, you can handle Mason I'll take on Simon
Bull-fucking-shit THEY SHOUD DIE HORRIBLE DEATHS AND BURN IN HELL FOR ETERNITY.
2765789 let me grab my inter dimensional OC
Valk: how do you like your agents, fried or grilled?
OKAY! THAT! IS! IT! The CIA needs to die! Let me get my minigun, my flamethrower, and my grenades!