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Darkmale76


I am a first-time writer and would love any input, good or bad, on any of my stories :D

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Luna is shunned by society. Her sister is still distant from her. She is told to investigate strange magic in the Ever-free. Can she handle what she finds, and the emotions she has bundled inside of her?

Edit: Logged back on one fateful day, years later from making this. I'm sorry, truly, to anyone and everyone who followed this story for it's short time, as I, like most others, have seen the beginnings of fics that could be great but just get dropped. Not saying my fic is great, of course, was my first attempt at real writing at all. I just didn't have the time to work on this, and when I did have the time, I wasn't the same person with either the same inspiration or motivation. I made this a long time ago when my heart yearned for something I did not yet have and I let it out in a form of a fanfic. I would come back to this, and maybe someday I'll be able to be that person, but I don't forsee it. So I apologise to all those who wanted to see this journey to the end.

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Applejack and Rainbow have been secretly dating behind their friends' backs for a couple of months. However over the course of time Rainbow has found the farmer constantly making excuses to avoid her, and it seems that she is too busy for anything. It's a peaceful day, Rainbow is just taking it easy, doing her job just like everypony else, when she gets word that Applejack wants to see her right away. Unfortunately the news is terrible... It turns out that the mare of Rainbow's dreams had been lying to her all along...

Everything seems like it is spiralling out of control for the poor peagsus, and she seeks refuge in the one friend that she knows that will help her in time of need. Will Rainbow be able to piece back the parts of her broken heart? Will the now destroyed friendship between Rainbow and Applejack, be able to go back to normal after what happens? Does Applejack deserve to be forgiven for what choices she has made?

They say when one door closes, that another one opens... But why must some doors cause so much pain and suffering when they close?

Author Notes on story:
- First story so it may be a little bit terrible... But hey you got to make mistakes before you can improve
- Some editors acquired! Special thanks to jlm123hi , Kodeake and monkhm for taking the time to edit this. (Just started editing, so please be patient. I am trying to edit as well so it will be an interesting process)
- Cover Art was actually made by me which is nice
- Feel free to comment, always appreciate feedback

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Ponyville is being utterly obliterated by Twilight Sparkle, or at least somepony who looks exactly like her. She wakes one morning to the devastating sight, somehow having lost her voice and her ability to use any magic. With no way to convince any one that it's not her causing the destruction, she is callously sent away by her impostor to face her doom. Suffering through immense turmoil and emotional pain, will she finally find her ultimate savior not within herself, but within Rainbow Dash?

What will become of Twilight and Ponyville? Will the impostor Twilight stop only at Ponyville, or continue to go for a much greater target? And are the impostor's motives really as sinister as they appear to be?

--This is my contest Entry for Blundy's TwiDash Framed Challenge-- Completed.

Many thanks to a thorough and helpful contributor--> Senyu
Thanks also to my helpful prereader/proofreader/editor--> LightningBass94

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Twilight acquired her wings not to long ago and now she's thinking of she is going to do next. While she has been thinking Rainbow Dash has been planing a little something for her new flying buddy.

EDIT: This is going to be an ongoing series with one or two chapters each week, more if I can, and I am also going to try to get out a new short with that to :D the reson there are only one or two each week is because I still go to school and am busy, but I try to do what I can ;)

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This story is a sequel to Hidden In The Dark


Chrysalis and Luna have been dating for some time now. It's time the others knew about their relationship.


Past Editors: FluttershyisMetal & Fantasia Archsage

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This story is a direct sequel to Trixie's Return.

It's been two weeks since the party, but neither Twilight nor Trixie have the courage to talk about the kiss. As they begin thinking of each other in a new light, things only seem to be getting more awkward between them. Will they come to terms with their feelings for each other, or does this threaten to decimate their still-young friendship?

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When Twilight discovers an invisibility spell, she decides to use it for pranking her friends. However, she soon finds out some interesting news that one of her good friends, Rainbow Dash, might be interested in her as more than friends. But can Twilight accept this news, or will she rebuke the rainbow maned mare? What chain of events will this set off?

Edited by The Abyss

My amazing cover art was drawn by Graphic~Lee!

An extensive re-edit will be happening soon. Expect a re-working of the ending, if it stays the same.

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Everypony knows the old foals tale of Nightmare Moon. How in a sudden fit of jealousy Princess Luna tried to overthrow her sister, Celestia? Well, there is only one pony alive who knows the true story behind that fable. This is the story of how I disobeyed my own sister for the benefit of all ponykind, only for those same ponies to turn their back on me, of my fight against Discord, Sombra, and ultimately... my older sister.

My name is Luna, and this is my story.

Edited by The Abyss
Cover art by Graphic-Lee

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After nearly a year, Trixie returns to Ponyville, but for what? Why did she put herself in harm's way to return there of all places? Does she have yet another scheme in store for the Ponyvillians?

This story has a comic!

It's being done by one of my readers, Crelyous!

Here's his devianart page. Crelyous

He's really, really good at what he does, and to prove it, here's the brand spankin' new first page of the Trixie's Return comic series! Go give him some love, guys. <3

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Michael Walker is a middle-aged man, who has a passing interest in My Little Pony : Friendship is magic. On one particular Saturday morning, he awakes to find himself transformed into Twilight Sparkle. How will his wife, her youngest daughter and two grandchildren react upon this new form? And how will he react once he manages to transport himself and his wife to Equestira? How will Twilight react to seeing a double of herself from another world? And what sort of events happen after he and his wife return? What happens after the Princess returns to his world, requesting his assistance in helping to defeat Discord? And what happens next?

Cover Image by iFoxTrax of Deviantart.

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