Twilights wings

by Lemoncupquakes

What did I do to deserve this?

Why Ponyville?

Why my friends?

What did I do to loose them?

What did I for this to have happened to them.............

Twilight thought about all of this as she flew for Ponyville. She was wondering exactly HOW bad it was going to be. Where her friends amongst the injured? Was Sweet Apple Achers ok? What about Sugar Cube Corner with the Cakes Damily living there? Or the Golden Oaks Library? Cloudsale?

When she finally arrived the sence before her was absolutely HORRIBBLE.............

Author's Note:

Sorry about the little information included in this chapter about the story, but I am willing for editors to look at this.

Comments

[Xanderfox]

chapters way too short for what young going for. Also there is just so little going on in your story really, you gloss over so much and Twilight just cries over her situation rather than really think about it. Also I don't think the dress and the other Elements of harmony would comprise her daily dress, I doubt Celestia would force Twilight to wear more than necessary.

[Lemoncupquakes]

thanks for the tip, I will work on that