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This story is a sequel to Hidden In The Dark

Chrysalis and Luna have been dating for some time now. It's time the others knew about their relationship.


Current Editor: Fantasia Archsage

Past Editor: FluttershyisMetal

First Published
3rd Aug 2013
Last Modified
20th May 2014
#1 · 194w, 6d ago · 2 · · Going Out ·

I love it. I love it so much. :heart:

#2 · 194w, 6d ago · · · Going Out ·

Spike is my fav character, but you never snitch.

#3 · 194w, 6d ago · 1 · · Going Out ·

Wonderful,That is much as ture

#4 · 194w, 6d ago · · · Going Out ·

Serina strikes again with another awesome Luna x Chrysalis fanfic! :yay:

#5 · 194w, 6d ago · 1 · · Going Out ·

Oh god yes!

This should be fun to read!

~Skeeter The Lurker

#6 · 194w, 6d ago · · · Going Out ·

Prologue: :raritystarry:

Luna's puppy dog eyes: :rainbowlaugh:

Spike discovering that chrysalis is holding luna and the love of his life hostage when in truth its just chrysaluna shipping: :twilightoops:

This story will be amazing!!!!!!!! :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache:

#7 · 194w, 6d ago · 2 · · Going Out ·

Spike, you fucking peeping Tom.

#8 · 194w, 6d ago · 1 · · Going Out ·

never would have thought to say this but spike go fuck off

#9 · 194w, 6d ago · · · Going Out ·

son of a bitch spike of all the times you had to be at the boutique you had to be there that day :ajbemused:spike i disappoint :ajbemused:  

#10 · 194w, 6d ago · · · Going Out ·

Can't really blame Spike for going with his gut.

#11 · 194w, 6d ago · · · Going Out ·

THIS IS THE BEST LUNA CHRYSALIS STORY EVER!!!!:raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry: THEY R MY FAV COUPLE EVER

#12 · 194w, 5d ago · 1 · · Going Out ·

This has to be the one time I actually want to hit Spike for being a dummy. Also, hooray for weird ships that confuse and entice me!

#13 · 194w, 5d ago · · · Going Out ·

Even thought im not a fan of shipping( does this count as shipping?) i can see a great story good job mate i was hoping for a sequel :twilightblush: and I like the heart thing so cute :D

#14 · 194w, 5d ago · · · Going Out ·

I think I was being a butt in the critique I gave you in your last story. I've come to realize that long and complicated romance isn't your style. I'm okay with that though. Now that you've established that funny, lighthearted, cutesy cuddly romance is your thing, I can appreciate this easier. I await more. :trixieshiftright:

#15 · 194w, 5d ago · · · Going Out ·

Holy crap! Please continue this, it is awesome!:heart:

#16 · 194w, 5d ago · · · Going Out ·

I'm getting tired of all the suspence. :flutterrage: We demand more!

#18 · 194w, 5d ago · · · Going Out ·

WE DEMAND MORE!!! :flutterrage::flutterrage: please?:fluttershysad:

#19 · 194w, 4d ago · · · Going Out ·

... dammit spike :facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:

#20 · 194w, 4d ago · · · Going Out ·

Doki Doki!,Doki Doki!

#21 · 194w, 4d ago · · · Going Out ·

Come on now,really Spike.:ajbemused:

This sure gonna be funfunfun.:twilightsheepish:

#22 · 194w, 4d ago · · · Going Out ·

Good Lunalis fic.

NEED MOAR! :flutterrage:

Also, God fucking damnit Spike...

#23 · 194w, 3d ago · · · Going Out ·

Spike, this is why you are a Loner with no Boner. :facehoof:

#24 · 194w, 3d ago · · · Going Out ·

GOD DAMN IT SPIKE!! this is why rarity dont like you:facehoof:

#25 · 194w, 3d ago · · · Going Out ·

THIS IS WHY WE CAN'T HAVE NICE THINGS SPIKE

#26 · 194w, 2d ago · · · Going Out ·

Spike you asshole.

#27 · 194w, 1d ago · · · Going Out ·

>>2981851 >>2981996 >>2982023 >>2982056 >>2982059 >>2983414 >>2987360

Daw thanks!

>>2987723 >>2987770 >>2987910 >>2993515

I can only write so fast! :raritydespair:

>>2981963 >>2982061 >>2982153 >>2982463 >>2982781  >>2985020 >>2988270 >>2989556 >>2993515 >>2993976 >>2996982 >>2997975 >>3003348

Well, I think Spike became the antagonist in the story for snitching. :rainbowderp:

>>2988709

Say what? :twilightoops:

Gah sorry I'm being lazy and not answering each of you individually. I'm just so tired. *yawn*

Sorry, I'll answer better next comment section. :ajsleepy: ~ ZzZzZz

#28 · 193w, 6d ago · · · Going Out ·

>>2989556 true, at least 'till her daddy sister takes the T-Bird changeling marefriend away.:trollestia:

#29 · 193w, 5d ago · · · Going Out ·

Oh Spike, you poor, deluded dragon.

#30 · 191w, 2d ago · · · Going Out ·

omg yes! XD

i love this story already! even though the romance between those two popped out of nowhere lol

still great story i am dieing to see the next one soon! X3

#31 · 188w, 3d ago · 1 · · Going Out ·

>>3008243 More... Need more!!!! Ha in all seriousness this is spectacular, and its only just begun! I can't wait for future chapters, I do hate you a little for the cliffhanger though.

#32 · 187w, 5d ago · · · Going Out ·

waitaseconed, what was spike doing looking through Rarity's window in the first place?:rainbowhuh:

#33 · 187w, 1d ago · · · Going Out ·

>>3008243

Hopely Chrysalis is been take medcide because we don't see psycho chrysalis,

That version chrysalis self-abused all time and self snitched the all wound

#34 · 186w, 1d ago · 1 · · Going Out ·

>>3240082

Maybe he was on his way to visit?

>>2981963>>2982153>>2988270>>3003348>>2996982

It's not Spike's fault he wasn't partial to the events of the previous story. He's going off of what he knows of her, that being the invasion of Canterlot.

I have a feeling when Luna vouches for her while not under the effects of mind control, the populous will think she's gone evil again and her being reformed was all an act while she built her power. She's allied herself with the changelings and is trying to overthrow Celestia again and bring about eternal night! The horror! The horror!

... with her evil enchantress Zecora.

#35 · 186w, 1d ago · · · Going Out ·

>>3290195  that comment wasn't meant to be serious :unsuresweetie:

#36 · 186w, 1d ago · · · Going Out ·

>>3291875

My apologies. Most comments like that are at least partially serious. 'Tis hard to tell one's tone when dealing with text.

#37 · 186w, 20h ago · · · Going Out ·

>>3294050 it's cool i've been had a couple times myself

#39 · 175w, 6d ago · · · Going Out ·

>>3008243

You lazy bum, What you have doing update already

#40 · 173w, 4d ago · · · Going Out ·

Stupid Spike... Update please!

#41 · 173w, 2d ago · · · Going Out ·

>>3215166

I'm trying! I hate writer's block! I'm so sorry! :raritydespair:

>>3240082

What do you think? :trollestia:

>>3622743 >>3698287

I'm so sorry. :fluttershbad:

#42 · 173w, 1d ago · · · Going Out ·

MOAR :flutterrage:

#43 · 173w, 6h ago · · · Going Out ·

And then comes nothin :<

#44 · 170w, 1d ago · · · Going Out ·

As the wise Till Lindemann once said.

,,Ich brauche MEHR!"

                         -Till Lindemann

#45 · 167w, 3d ago · · · Going Out ·

When will you add more chapters?

#46 · 161w, 5h ago · · · Going Out ·

>>3711730

Okay.

Are you dead

but this story more dead than Fish on boat

#47 · 158w, 5d ago · · 1 · Going Out ·

Just write.  Just put pen to paper force something out.  Worry about how it sounds later.

#48 · 153w, 5d ago · · · Going Out ·

OH HELL NO SPIKE!

#49 · 153w, 4d ago · · · Going Out ·

WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

#50 · 153w, 3d ago · 1 · · Going Out ·

>>4224898

>>4412715

I AM! :derpytongue2:

Chrysalis sat at the table with her cheek resting on her hoof. She glanced over at Luna who was all bright-eyed and excited while the mare across from them looked like she was due for a day off. Chrysalis groaned inwardly. Canterlot has great dressmakers, right? Ones you can bribe or intimidate to where they don’t talk but nope. Does Luna want to go there? Of course not. She picks Ponyville. Chrysalis tapped her hoof and Rarity jumped.

A pain erupted in Chrysalis’ side. “Ow!”

Luna glared at Chrysalis as she removed her elbow from Chrysalis’ side.

Rarity ran a hoof through her frizzy mane. She took a sip of her tea and then looked up at the mares in front of her. “So, Princess Luna, you want me to make a dress for Chrysalis because you two are going on a... date?”

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