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Serina


Short-story writer, future author, poet, history buff, broadway/musical lover, reader, college student, geek, and I think that about covers it! Thanks for checking my stuff out, it means a lot.


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This story is a sequel to Hidden In The Dark


Chrysalis and Luna have been dating for some time now. It's time the others knew about their relationship.


Current Editor: Fantasia Archsage

Past Editor: FluttershyisMetal

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 84 )

I love it. I love it so much. :heart:

Spike is my fav character, but you never snitch.

Wonderful,That is much as ture

Serina strikes again with another awesome Luna x Chrysalis fanfic! :yay:

Oh god yes!

This should be fun to read!

~Skeeter The Lurker

Prologue: :raritystarry:
Luna's puppy dog eyes: :rainbowlaugh:
Spike discovering that chrysalis is holding luna and the love of his life hostage when in truth its just chrysaluna shipping: :twilightoops:
This story will be amazing!!!!!!!! :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache:

Spike, you fucking peeping Tom.

never would have thought to say this but spike go fuck off

dad

son of a bitch spike of all the times you had to be at the boutique you had to be there that day :ajbemused:spike i disappoint :ajbemused:

Can't really blame Spike for going with his gut.

THIS IS THE BEST LUNA CHRYSALIS STORY EVER!!!!:raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry: THEY R MY FAV COUPLE EVER

This has to be the one time I actually want to hit Spike for being a dummy. Also, hooray for weird ships that confuse and entice me!

Even thought im not a fan of shipping( does this count as shipping?) i can see a great story good job mate i was hoping for a sequel :twilightblush: and I like the heart thing so cute :D

I think I was being a butt in the critique I gave you in your last story. I've come to realize that long and complicated romance isn't your style. I'm okay with that though. Now that you've established that funny, lighthearted, cutesy cuddly romance is your thing, I can appreciate this easier. I await more. :trixieshiftright:

Holy crap! Please continue this, it is awesome!:heart:

I'm getting tired of all the suspence. :flutterrage: We demand more!

WE DEMAND MORE!!! :flutterrage::flutterrage: please?:fluttershysad:

... dammit spike :facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:

Doki Doki!,Doki Doki!

Come on now,really Spike.:ajbemused:

This sure gonna be funfunfun.:twilightsheepish:

Good Lunalis fic.

NEED MOAR! :flutterrage:

Also, God fucking damnit Spike...

Spike, this is why you are a Loner with no Boner. :facehoof:

GOD DAMN IT SPIKE!! this is why rarity dont like you:facehoof:

THIS IS WHY WE CAN'T HAVE NICE THINGS SPIKE

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Daw thanks!

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I can only write so fast! :raritydespair:

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Well, I think Spike became the antagonist in the story for snitching. :rainbowderp:

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Say what? :twilightoops:

Gah sorry I'm being lazy and not answering each of you individually. I'm just so tired. *yawn*
Sorry, I'll answer better next comment section. :ajsleepy: ~ ZzZzZz

2989556 true, at least 'till her daddy sister takes the T-Bird changeling marefriend away.:trollestia:

Oh Spike, you poor, deluded dragon.

omg yes! XD
i love this story already! even though the romance between those two popped out of nowhere lol
still great story i am dieing to see the next one soon! X3

3008243 More... Need more!!!! Ha in all seriousness this is spectacular, and its only just begun! I can't wait for future chapters, I do hate you a little for the cliffhanger though.

waitaseconed, what was spike doing looking through Rarity's window in the first place?:rainbowhuh:

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Hopely Chrysalis is been take medcide because we don't see psycho chrysalis,

That version chrysalis self-abused all time and self snitched the all wound

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Maybe he was on his way to visit?

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It's not Spike's fault he wasn't partial to the events of the previous story. He's going off of what he knows of her, that being the invasion of Canterlot.

I have a feeling when Luna vouches for her while not under the effects of mind control, the populous will think she's gone evil again and her being reformed was all an act while she built her power. She's allied herself with the changelings and is trying to overthrow Celestia again and bring about eternal night! The horror! The horror!

... with her evil enchantress Zecora.

3290195 that comment wasn't meant to be serious :unsuresweetie:

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My apologies. Most comments like that are at least partially serious. 'Tis hard to tell one's tone when dealing with text.

3294050 it's cool i've been had a couple times myself

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You lazy bum, What you have doing update already

Stupid Spike... Update please!

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I'm trying! I hate writer's block! I'm so sorry! :raritydespair:

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What do you think? :trollestia:

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I'm so sorry. :fluttershbad:

And then comes nothin :<

As the wise Till Lindemann once said.

,,Ich brauche MEHR!"
-Till Lindemann

When will you add more chapters?

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Okay.

Are you dead

but this story more dead than Fish on boat

Just write. Just put pen to paper force something out. Worry about how it sounds later.

OH HELL NO SPIKE!

WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I AM! :derpytongue2:

Chrysalis sat at the table with her cheek resting on her hoof. She glanced over at Luna who was all bright-eyed and excited while the mare across from them looked like she was due for a day off. Chrysalis groaned inwardly. Canterlot has great dressmakers, right? Ones you can bribe or intimidate to where they don’t talk but nope. Does Luna want to go there? Of course not. She picks Ponyville. Chrysalis tapped her hoof and Rarity jumped.

A pain erupted in Chrysalis’ side. “Ow!”

Luna glared at Chrysalis as she removed her elbow from Chrysalis’ side.

Rarity ran a hoof through her frizzy mane. She took a sip of her tea and then looked up at the mares in front of her. “So, Princess Luna, you want me to make a dress for Chrysalis because you two are going on a... date?”

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