Well guys, here it is. The last chapter to this story, I really hope that you have enjoyed every moment of this story just as much as I (surprisingly) have enjoyed writing it.

I'm so thankful for all of your support throughout, weather you gave a compliment, spotted and error and gave me feedback with criticism and the such. Without you guys I don't think I would of enjoyed this as much as I have done, so truly from the bottom of my heart where I keep the plutonium, I thank you all.

I want to give a special mention to the following two people, they helped me out by listening to my ideas and offering suggestions as well as proof reading a few chapters to make sure the flow was ok. So thank you you two, you lovable bastards!

Berry Punch
bocaj518

[Also inb4 must of hurt Fluttershy giving birth, the horns don't appear on the children until AFTER they were born, so nyeh!]

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Congrats on finishing the fic. It's always a good feeling.

MY FEELS-O-METER IS OFF THE CHARTS!!!

And so ends an amazing story...

Chaotic Love
R.I.P
April 6th 2013- May 7th 2013

Great chapter! ^^ I can't help but like the twins >:3

Cheers for the shout out!

Awww so cute!
they had 3 kids... cool

LOVE IT!!!!!!!111!!!1!11!!111111!~~~

Best. Humanized. Fic. EVER!!!!

Holy crap that was great. Ending was amazing: sweet, romantic, beautiful (and I little bit sexy) all in a good chapter.

Gotta ask; how old are the kids?

The amount of cute and dawwww in this ending is just over whelming. You really know how to kick up the warm and fuzzy feeling.

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Thank you very much.
2543507
No problem, your help was brilliant when I had moments of writers block.
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Thank you very much and to answer your question, the boys are eight and shes seven.

2543561 WHAT!!! I thought she would have been the older sibling.

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Nah, shes the youngest

2543576 Meh. Oh well, I still stand by what I said earlier.

*Clap Clap*
That was a good story, and we didn't have to wait months!

You sir, have possibly created the best humanized mlp fic I've ever read.
Now, I am assured that everything ended for the better.
You deserve the praise of...The Doctor!
*Gets into TARDIS and dissappears...for now*

2543603
Thank you.
2543688
Thank you, that means a lot to me.

if you could make a sequel to this that would be awesome! Maybe Chaos would takeover discord again? I dont know, not that good at plots *not that kind*

Loved the names of the kids.

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That would require a lot of planning.
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Thank you.

I love thee

I agree with everyone so far this is probably one of the best Humanized fics I've read. I really enjoyed reading it, and I love the kids especially Songflower. If you ever felt like it you could do a lot with this in terms of continuing it as Slice of Life stuff or maybe add in a villain looking to steal Discord and Fluttershy's kids to get their powers or something. Anyway great story and I hope this isn't the end of Fluttershy and Discord and their kids.

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Thank you very much, I could possibly do a squeal in the future involving the kids but it wouldn't be for a while. I have a fair bit of Uni work to do as well as another story that needs finishing followed by its planned squeal. I'm glad you've enjoyed this story.

Exactly the kind of thing I was hoping for in an epilogue, and I was not disappointed. This whole tale: very well executed, top to bottom. All expectations met and some even exceeded. Very much looking forward to your next project.

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Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

An excellent story with a wondrous end. Very beautiful, and enjoyable from beginning to end.
The twins are wonderfully mischievous, and Songflower is adorable.

A suggestion for a possible sequel. Chaos as a separate entity from Discord attempts to reestablish himself, but he has no body. As he is forever denied from Discord now, he attempts to corrupt and control one - or more - of the kids. Starts with the twins, but they're too strong willed to get caught...and then manages it through fear with Songflower. Discord, Fluttershy, and the Elements are left helpless, as they can't bring themselves to harm her directly...and Entropy and Pandemonium have to duke it out with Chaos metaphysically in her mind to rescue their little sister...and in the end she discovers her own power to fight him off.

Minor plot related question. Discord gave up his immortality. Does that mean all three kids are mortal? Or is the immortality capacity still in his genetics?

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Thank you so much for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that idea sounds pretty good to me ...might have to jot that down in a moment.

And to answer your question, they share his genetics. so when he gave up his immortality, he was mortal during their conception so they are mortal like he is.

2543896
This guy is onto something. Very close to the kind of sequel I was thinking about only better. Maybe we can has? Please?

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Maybe, I still have other stories that need completing, mainly my Chronicles of the Mage series. And I first need to finish of some Uni work but I break up next month, meaning more free time to do story work.

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Sequel?

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Maybe.

Book two now or i call Orange to my aid

So many feels. I got diabeetus.

There better be a sequel.

2543853 Kufufufufu~ if you ever get free time, could you consider a sequel? this was soooo good Kufufufufu~

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dudddde how dose thisw not have over a billeon views

In a non-anything other than fanly admiration:

I LOVE YOU

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-Shrugs- Tis a simple story is all.
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Maybe.

tears

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2544770
Do you mean Liquid Pride?

yes

Hmm, dont want to be mean, so good job, i guess

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2544751 dude do not dowt yourself or I will beat you with the confidence bat

Dude you need to have someone make fan art of those kids. It would be so epic.

Yay its completed i can finally start

While the story has many typos, even with the revisions in place. I admit though, that I am enjoying it so far. Keep up the good work.

OK. So i just finished and wow . Wonderful. What i expected and more

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If you want to do some, or know anyone who wants to go for it.
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Thank you.