Fluttershy tries to re-form Discord by revealing her true feelings for the man of Chaos, but will Discord return the feeling or believe it is simply a ploy?
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Inb4 this.
I gotta say, this was a beautiful idea for a ship, and you're playing Fluttershy and Discord's characters very well you just gotta watch the spelling mistakes a little bit.
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Thank you. My editor is currently under the weather so I'm letting him recover before he gets stuck into the edits.
My question is will he such a sweet talker that some of the women around town (who don't know who he really is) will grow attracted to him? Could add some drama.
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Oooo, I like the way you think. Thanks for that suggestion!
Great chapter, nice how you made it a competition for Caramel. As if he could ever win, he will probably end up being the third weal in the story.
Discord with chaos powers for the win!
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Hehe thanks, Caramel is most likely going to recurring a fair bit in the future anyway.
Holycrapupdatethissoon! Still love te story, and I'm sure it'll be better after editing out those tiny minuscule mistakes.
The story is great. You are writing these characters amazingly.
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Thank you, means a lot to me.
plot line and good comedy only thing left his some clop and the story will blow my mind wider the Twi seeing Pinky sens for the first time
This is a great story, keep up the good work.
Discord looks creepy as hell in the cover picture
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Thank you, there will be clop in the future don't worry.
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Thanks!
Cool story bro
I'm lovin this. Moar!
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And there shall be, with any luck the next chapter will be out tues or weds. ....maybe.
Does this have clop in it?
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Later chapters will don't worry.
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Nice story so far.
Just give me a warning before a clop scene.
I like the drama of a romance story....but not the clop
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Ah don't you worry, there is going to be a warning for when the eventualy clop does come. Thanks for reading!
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But clop is good for romance.
It's not called "making love" for nothing.
2391619 Ahhhh back to the future~
Ahh yes. I have been a fan of discordshy for a long time.
APPLEJACK. CAN'T. FLY. (I assume that you meant RD)
I noticed you really seem to have a lot of punctuation errors. Let me fix this.
This has been going on a lot in the past couple chapters. Though it isn't that noticeable, I still manage to catch it. It pulls me away from reading.
“How many people you got in their?”
There
“What do you think it mean?
meant or means
Clever.
Clever.