Fluttershy tries to re-form Discord by revealing her true feelings for the man of Chaos, but will Discord return the feeling or believe it is simply a ploy?
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Dat Cliffhanger
Still no rape?
Hm.. Discord should start running now.
So many cliffhangers.
I find this adorable
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Thank you.
Awkward and adorable... and Angel is on Discord's shit list, everyone wins ... except for Caramel, but he's kind of a tool, so nobody cares about him.
Aside from Diamond Tiara, Angel may actually be the only true reoccurring antagonist from the show.
On a side note, it always kinda puzzled me that Luna was easily forgiven for trying to kill the entire planet through eternal night and the implied eating of children (Nightmare Night, candy sacrifice) whereas Discord made six ponies sad and made it rain chocolate, brought culture to the buffalo via ballet dancing and played a few pranks.
lol discord in the bed. friends coming inside the house breaking the door down. Hmmm where is the royal gurad or atleast police haha well good chapter anyway
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Hehe thanks.
Nothing like a little awkward moment in the morning to get the day started.
Very nicely done. Very enjoyable.
Discord is in trouble with Fluttershy's friends. Looking forward to what happens next!
sodnly what to kill some of the elements of harmny is that strange
Ps great ch and what to see Discord get a little pay back somehow agenst the over protctive biches
Discord is soooo gonna turn Caramel gay for some odd reason!
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Oh he's not that mean. But I do have plans for Discord Vs Caramel so that should be fun.
Insanity is to insue.
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Thank you, and cheers for that error, shall give it a fix now.
If MLP was an anime...... I'm pretty sure this would happen.
BTW I'm loving this story! It's almost a shame that it's supposed to be a clopfic even though there has been no clop. This a genuine romance! You could have made it rated teen to encrease your readership, but it's a clopfic... So your readers are limited. Your depriving fans of a well written romance!
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Thank you, and yes there will be clop but not until later. And I already decided when I was talking with my editor before he got ill that the clop will be on an entirely separate chapter, so people like yourself who are enjoying just the romance side will know what part to skip. If that makes any sense.
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How long till the sex? Or clop? Neither of them are ponies soooo.......When?
2404986 I apreciate it.
Thank you, because my little cousin is into these stories, and its kind of uncomfortable to know that we're reading the same clopfic.
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I have no idea what you just said
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Not a problem.
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Patience you All things good come to those who wait.
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Then I shall
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Same here, same could be said for Trixie. She enslaves the town but they do nothing about it, the CMC are blackmailed into being mean and the town vilifies them, same with Trixie's first appearance. Snips and Snails bring the Ursa Minor to town, don't get punished. Trixie tries to stop it, gets run out of town and made a laughing stock.
MLP FIM - Teaching your children whats right!
I am enjoying this story so far, though glad to know you recognize the need for editing. There are several parts where the same word is used twice,and once when a sentence is placed in the wrong spot, but I'll leave all that to your editor. : )
I like the interactions between the main two, and am kinda curious on how Discord will start to act if he starts getting more of his powers back, wether he will start to revert or not. He seems fairly limited for now, but not a bad thing.
While I'm glad to see that despite being humanized you kept things like wing and horns on the characters who had them * or at least I am assuming as RD has wings, though I don't quite recall anything about fluttershy's yet*, I always have to wonder how the heck clothes are designed for a winged human. Shirts and bra's just have to be a pain in the ass.
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Thank you, I'm glad your enjoying it so far. As for Discord, he can still do a fair bit of his powers, its just that a large burst of it, such as the Angel part, will drain him flat out. And as for wings and horns etc, they way I'm doing it is that all characters look human except when they do something. For example.
When Rainbow wants to fly about her wings will appear on her back, same for Fluttershy or any other Pegasus. When Twilight or any other unicorn uses their magic, their horns appear during the spell casting. Other then that they are all have basic human appearances, if that makes sense.
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Yay! Glad to have an explanation of the wings and horns thing as I was not sure at how you were having those work and I was noticing a lack of them coming up in descriptions on Fluttershy. : ) It makes sense, except what happens to the clothing they are wearing at the time. Does the magic for some reason just cut holes in whatever they are wearing so the wings stick through and then reform the cloth once done? I know it's minor and pointless to the story for the most part, but me and my friends argue about magic systems in games all the time so I'm just curious.
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Nah don't worry I understand the asking, the way the wings appear is literally as you'd think, they just appear on the outside of the clothing. That way clothing remains intact (Can actually hear Rarity saying thank Celestia.) I hope that makes sense.
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It does
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Ok, so that makes the wings not so much a part of the body, but probably formed from magic when the pegasus calls on the need to fly. I'm basing that off of the fact that if the clothing remains intact then the wings couldn't be exactly physical, much as you can't cut off a limb, put a cloth where they connect, and expect it to work. I suppose then the mechanics of them getting tired of flying would link into how they feel when they use up their magic, which would technically mean that if a pegasus flew till they ran out of magic they'd just fall like anyone else. Interesting and it works fine for me, and since it isn't hugely relevant I'm not gonna analyze it further. But do contact me if you ever care to look deeper into it for another fic or anything. : )
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Glad it does, and yeah that pretty much sums up what I wanted. Almost like an Icarus kind of scenario when they become fatigued, the whole wings vanishing thing. And sure thank you for the offer, I may do another humanised fic in the future because of how much I am enjoying (And people seemed to enjoy it) writing this one.
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Wunderbar!
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Have a dancing gif: 25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_me5uohCjy21rda9jto1_250.gif
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Speaking of double standards in Equestria.
There was also the time the CMC released Discord, the time the CMC tried to kill Babs Seed via rigging a parade float to careen off a cliff. The time Sweetie Belle disturbed a funeral/wake during Hearts and Hooves Day. Applebloom stole a potion from Zecora and incited a panic.
How are did the CMC not earn their Chaos cutie marks already?
Twilight damn near destroyed the town because she had a panic attack or when she cast the spell on the parasprites that caused them to eat every building. Spike and his greed growth, Pinkie harassing and humiliating a senior citizen, Mac dragging a house through town, king Sombra's crystal slave ponies and Pinkie clones.
Are we sure that Discord is the evil one?
I see fluttershy and this story are undergoing some "plot" development.
Lol, that Caramel scene
2402435 Late reply is late but I had to comment on this
1. How is spending 1000 years on the moon count as easily forgiven
2. That whole Nightmare Night thing was probably created long after Luna was imprisoned
3. Discord did a lot more than what you're suggesting but I do agree that maybe they went overboard on him.
My fedora sense is tingling.
That chicken scene made me instantly think of Beauty and the Beast.
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Me too!
Hmm, I think the elements are just being........Presumptous there at the end.
~I agree. My brother may be chaotic, but all he does is have fun. When has he hurt somepony before?~
Nopony asked you, Misconduct.
I took that sentence as RD referring to Fluttershy's bed as a bed specifically for fucking, even though I know that is not the implication, but I don't care! It's funnier the way I read it!
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Also:
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Discord may be a mind raping Lord of Chaos, but he's not pervert.