Fluttershy tries to re-form Discord by revealing her true feelings for the man of Chaos, but will Discord return the feeling or believe it is simply a ploy?
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Very nice.
Well now you're just teasing me with the Spike x Twilight romance this fic wont have!
This is a ship I have never seen before. This could be fun
nuf said
Lol they both look hot. Gonna put this on read later
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Actually Fluttercord is quite a common ship, present even before "Keep calm and flutter on" for some reason.
Just there's not a lot of Fluttercord fics out there, just mainly present in fanart.
I like Discord humanized he always looks badass
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2443188 although i wish he still had a mishmash of body parts or clothes…
DREAMS
WE DONT KNOW WHAT THEY MEAN!
static.fjcdn.com/pictures/I+love+dreams..+Dem+tags_36f8d5_3391503.jpg dem dreams.
I'm gonna ask a werid question, in the story, should I picture the characters ponies or humans???
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The story has a Human tag and the cover characters that look human so I'm going to go with picture them human.
Is Twilight purposely tricking Spike into pinching her butt? Also: *Too. Perfect* I cannot fathom Luna's confusion. And I, too, am picturing them all as humans, although it's a little bit more difficult with Spike.
You have a small issue with run ons in the Luna scene, along with some minor issues with 'show, don't tell' but overall, I love this story so far
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How do you put this on read later??
3688346 When you're in the summary of the story (you know where you can read the description and see a list of chapters) to the left of the story's name you click the little clock icon.
Lovely, I've been waiting so long for this
Hmmm... The reason Fluttershy would be dreaming about Discord would be that it was a dream.
Dreams are known to be random as Hell. Heck, I lucid dream, and I still find myself often weird-ed out by what my mind throws at me.
Aside from a few grammar mistakes, it's good.
I love it!
Its really a shame the writer didn't hire a proofreader, because there's quite a few awkwardly worded and run on sentences. The grammar's not bad, just, not good either. I'm also not sure what to feel about Spike staying a dragon(???) in an otherwise humanized fic.
But, BUT fluttercord is best ship and even if it wasn't best ship, this story has promise. I really do wish there were more human fics that weren't HiE. Gijinkas are so much more common in art than fic. Anyway gonna keep reading (tomorrow) yep yep!
I have a question, are they human or pony in this story... cause it's hard to tell
6533249 human