Fluttershy tries to re-form Discord by revealing her true feelings for the man of Chaos, but will Discord return the feeling or believe it is simply a ploy?
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I hope you liked this chapter!
Please don't hate me.
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Now, why on Earth would we do that?
So it contains sex, what's the big deal?
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It's my first attempt at writing clop, I'm just hoping people enjoy it and its up to their standards.
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Who's Red Barlett? I don't remember him.
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OC, i'ts a type of Pear
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Oh, he's a helper around Sweet Apple Acres
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Nope, he's a Pear seller.
F-Fuckkkk....
Celestia. No offense. Buuuuttt... You better hide and fast. Fluttershy ain't happy, and you won't like her when she is angry.
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Wait...oh yeah he was the man Silver prank alongside Applejack My mistakes
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Hehe, so It was alright then?
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Don't worry it's alright.
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Also for the bold scene
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Loved the chapter!
But you have a bad case of 'cliff hangers' which tends to show time after time.
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Hehe.
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But Cliffhangers are fun.
As epic as always, Mr101.
Keep it up!
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but also mean...
There's a video I want to add, but it's sadly too early because it was a wet dream.
Ahhhh, oh well. When it happens, it happens.
One thing I've noticed in a lot of writting is that few clop authors distinguish between the 'real' sex and 'dream sex' as far as writing styles.
As far as 'dream sex' goes, this is quite excellent, as it is entirely from Fluttershy's perspective and focuses on how she pictures the moment - especially with that confession moment and the shower scene. Very 'in your dreams' moment.
Overall, great chapter, but still needs editing.
ohhh! theres gonna be a smack down in ponyville!! next chapter should be FUN! so, please? hurry? think you can have it up before wednsday? we're leaving for vegas since the 24th is my sis's 21st birthday. i'd like to see what happens before we leave because i am unsure if our hotel has internet.
Awesome chapter, Hmmm now what will fluttershy do with Celestia
Heck yeah! Update
Why must you tease us so with the cliffhangers? but again yay!
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I actually really enjoyed this chapter. Most stories I really can't stand the clop scenes and I avoid stories with it most of the time, and honestly I was prepared to avoid it in this story too but then I read this chapter and I was like "Oh gosh, a clop scene where I didn't want to go hide in a corner and question life! WHAT IS THIS SORCERY?"
There is too much awesomeness in this story. I fear that because of all the awesomeness I may just explode.... twice :O!
2466708 Quite the contrary.
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Because it keeps you hooked.
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Thank you , I shall fix that error in a moment .
Hot damn. Do not want to be Celestia right now.
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Your too awesome to hate.
and thanks for the 18+ warning.
FUCK! FLUTTERSHY IS PISSED HEAD FOR THE VAULTS, A SHITSTORM BE A BREWIN, MATES!
THE WRATH OF FLUTTERSHY!
ASSERTIVE FLUTTERSHY!!!
Please hurry with next chapter!
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You are doing something right. Keep it up!
Oh shit fluttershy is mad hide your kids hide your wife and run to the safe house under ground
2466708 loved it ^_^
hmm...what the heck has caramel been up to for six months? It seemed like he was up to something a chapter or two ago when Discord left Flutters alone for that day but no word since. Kinda wonder if he is involved with whatever flew away from Discord in the forest. o.O
look out here comes flutterrage!
2466708 celestia has everything and more coming.
I hate her, alot.
Celestia is about to get destroyed by Angry Fluttershy, the most dangerous creature in Equestria!
2467519 Yeah Celestia can be a real manipulative bitch sometimes...
2467591 sometimes? and also ignorant/idiotic. Canterlot Wedding, anyone?
Thanks for marking the kinky stuff, bro.
Ohho I have been waiting for this for oh so long
Um...I really liked this chapter. So, could you make more...that is if you don't mind. i.chzbgr.com/maxW500/6219980544/h2443B410/
Celestia vs Fluttershy. Yes.
Boss battle time!
Celestia vs Flutterrage the ultimate smack down shall begin soon, place your bets now!
Great chapter, you sure know how to keep a person hooked now don'tcha sugar cube?
I bet flutters will get rarity's soulmate, Tom to help her out with celly.
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Yea sometimes I question whether or not she even knows what the hell she's doing half the time.
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Don't forget irresponsible, lenient, careless, and overbearing.
Coronation, anyone?
Good work with this story so far. Everything about it so far is over the top. Nice work with your 1st clop bit
I am this story's biggest fan
There, I said it.
Me. Fragging. Gusta.
Moar.
Moar Moar Moar!
Shit just got real. To be fair Fluttershy only knows Discord's side of the story and that paints Celestia as a vile, evil harpy that betrayed him to her murderous bigoted tyrant of a father. *Shrug*
So, you're (meaning Discord) an ass man......
ANYWAYS, I liked it, keep it up!