Fluttershy tries to re-form Discord by revealing her true feelings for the man of Chaos, but will Discord return the feeling or believe it is simply a ploy?
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Well here you go, I hope you enjoy this one. Personally I don't really like it...
Fluttershy just bitch-slapped Princess Celestia!
HOLY FUCK!!!!!!!!!!
Wait what ?! Queen Chrysalis, shit hope Celestia let discord remove that ring, then the a bloody fight for the ages well I hope that anyway he he, good chapter by the way
----------------------Chrysalis is going to fucking die
2476874 i like you for saying that here
Well, I've got to say...I LOVE IT!
Minor reccomendation, you might try adding what, exactly, Discord read in the diary. A few key entires type of thing.
Wait a moment...Celestia told Luna the key to Discord getting the ring off was learning to love again...and accepting love in return (very Beauty and the Beast, good usage). So that means all that needs to happen for the ring to stop working is the dramatic confession moment between the two of them...which will probably happen during the confrontation with Chrysalis. I can see it now.
Chrysalis: You will do as I say, Discord...or she dies!
Discord: Fluttershy...alright, I'll do it.
Fluttershy: Discord, no!
Discord: I have to, Fluttershy. I...I can't lose you. I love you.
Chrysalis: *laughs* How pathetic! The God of Chaos, defeated by love!
Fluttershy: Discord...I love you, too...I'm so sorry...
Discord: I know, FLuttershy...I know...
*sound of snapping metal*
Chrysalis: What was that sound?
*Discord stares at his hand...then looks up and grins*
Discord: Your death kneel, bitch. *snap*
he knew there was defiantly food in there
*definitely*
It's confusing to me sometimes too
Glad to see a good update :)
Bitch Slap of the CENTURY!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! HAAA HAHAHAHA- *Coughing* HAHAHAHAHAHA!
2476874 agreed
Oh damn shit just got serious
2476575 this is really decent. Shit-hitting-the-fan chapters are always iffy but are defined by what happens after them.
Wat a twist
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Boom Headshot
love of a dragques stolen ohho shit is going to go down and their better be make up sex bettwen the two but I still don't forgive tia
2476575 I love it and you should too... or else. lol.
Run out of ideas? Changelings.
I like it! Although... Changlings... Rrrrg... No gusta...
Oooohhh
It would have been interesting to see Discord go full rage mode and loose it. It would be like an old fashion tragedy, a great lose through a mistake.
Great chapter.
Flutter-bitch slap!
Shit's about to go down!
2477147>>2476814
Thank you.
2479671
Who said he wasn't?
Ahhh, this is gonna be good. Even better than it already is.
Shit just got serious.
BOM-BOM-BOOOOOOOOM
2481187
I understand completely.
Gah! I can't wait for more! This is actually inspiring me quite a bit...Oh, but I don't want to be a thief! Great chapter! Can't wait for more! MORE. MOOOOAAAAAARRRRR!!
~Raxel~
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Its about to get good! Don't fail me now!
This was not an awful chapter, but a lot of things didn't come like you wanted to, right?
It's fine, happens to us all. Just find a pre reader or editor. While the writing is great, you have a... Hang-up? Unease? When you're writing outside your element. And not genre- element. Suspense and proper build up for things outside romance and horror is hard, right?
That said, this chapter was at least a step forward. Needs a bit or work and it could be great.
Plot twist!
2477150i agree
Stuffs bout to go down.
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LOVE IT!!
I love the way there are some many twists and reader really doesn't know what to expect! This is so good! And adding in chrysilis, too! This so gonne be gud!!
OH FUCK RUN PEOPLE CHRYSALIS BOUT TO GET FUCKED UP!
Fluttershy sucker slapping Celestia was good drama i loved it.
-cracks neck- Dammit, Chrysalis, now you've got multple beings wanting tohurt you. Too bad Dache and I can't interfere from across the multiverse.
I can't stop reading. No I mean it I can't stop reading this... did you have Twilight cast an obsession spell over your story or something?? lol!
I knew it was changelings
GOO FLUTTERSHY!!
Chrysilas about to have chaos unleashed onto him