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Mr101


Fimfiction's sexiest robot, how do you do?

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I GAVE THIS STORY A LIKE SO YOU WOULDN'T CRY. I AM A MERCIFUL GOD.

It's a good start... sarcastic and snarky Discord is best Discord. :scootangel:

This pleases Sithis, somewhat. You need to describe what each human is wearing in the first chapter unless they are nude in this humestriaverse. But other than that small thing, I have no qualms with this and it is quite good.

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I AM A MERCIFUL GOD

A merciful god? HAHAHA, you are no god then.

Looks good so far. The story has potential. Keep up the good work.

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THANK YOU OH GREAT ONE
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Thank you. :twilightsmile:
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:pinkiehappy:
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Thank you. :twilightsmile:
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A fair point, I will most likely rectify that when it comes to editing it, most likely later on. Thank you for reading. :twilightsmile:
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Thank you. :twilightsmile:

God help me if no one is raped.

Cause honestly, I can see either raping the other.

Seriously, Fluttershy can only take so much before she decides to yell "Love me!"

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My mind has so many images racing through my head right now, I thank you for them good sir.

I can't wait to see him mess with Angel. Please, please, make him turn the bunny purple or even use him as a Q-tip while Shy isn't looking.

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My good sir, I have a burning hatred for the little white devil, I have plans for him in the next chapter.

2386475 Good. But the Q-tip thing is on? Like it could be an accident and she'd walk in just as he realizes it's Angel.:pinkiesmile:

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Just have to wait and see. :rainbowwild:

2386495 Ok... I've been getting that sentence a lot recently.

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I hope of one of them is:

Discord: Fluttershy, you're scaring me...

Fluttershy: Love Me!

Discord: Rape! No wait, that's not what you yell... Fire! * yells through a window*

Fluttershy: When somepony tries to block, show them you rock!

Discord: Help! *Gets dragged back as the windows shut*

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'After that day, Discord swore he would fight for the side of good. When asked what she did Fluttershy simply stated she used her charm, when Discord was asked what she did he would mutter incoherent sentences and avoided giving a proper answer.'

“Ok Spike you do that.” She giggled. “Can you also tell the others? Oh and Spike?”
Spike stopped in his tracks and turned around.
“Don

Well now you're just teasing me with the Spike x Twilight romance this fic wont have!:twilightangry2:

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I'm sorry :applecry: Will this picture of Twilight make it better?

i.imgur.com/rUhP0.png

2386907 Weeell..that pic is pretty adorable...

Okay I'll forgive you

This is a ship I have never seen before. This could be fun :pinkiehappy:

Essentially what I wanted to happen.

That coverart... Fantastic.

I was wondering when I would see this out. It's brilliant.

I'm digging this so far. It's great seeing a good humanized piece on the site. Too many are pointless wish-fufillment that give the rest of us that try to tell a good story a bad name, haha. Keep up the good work!

Ps: nice coverart, may I ask who the artist is? Because I dig the style.

Lol they both look hot. Gonna put this on read later

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Thanks man. :twilightsmile:
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Thank you. :twilightsmile: And his name be ManicPaint.

I like the premise and general tone, but you might wanna get a editor or even re-read it after you finish a chapter, there was some errors.

Also, who is the artist of that cover, I love it!

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Thank you, the artist is a guy called ManicPaint, and its gunna get edited soon. My editor is currently sick and I don't want him to be overworked as he edits other work as well. :twilightsmile:

I gotta say, this was a beautiful idea for a ship, and you're playing Fluttershy and Discord's characters very well :twilightsmile: you just gotta watch the spelling mistakes a little bit.

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Thank you.:twilightsmile: My editor is currently under the weather so I'm letting him recover before he gets stuck into the edits.

My question is will he such a sweet talker that some of the women around town (who don't know who he really is) will grow attracted to him? Could add some drama.

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Oooo, I like the way you think. Thanks for that suggestion! :pinkiehappy:

Great chapter, nice how you made it a competition for Caramel. As if he could ever win, he will probably end up being the third weal in the story.
Discord with chaos powers for the win!

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Hehe thanks:twilightsmile:, Caramel is most likely going to recurring a fair bit in the future anyway.

Holycrapupdatethissoon! Still love te story, and I'm sure it'll be better after editing out those tiny minuscule mistakes.

The story is great. You are writing these characters amazingly.

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Thank you, means a lot to me. :twilightsmile:

plot line and good comedy only thing left his some clop and the story will blow my mind wider the Twi seeing Pinky sens for the first time:eeyup:

This is a great story, keep up the good work.
Discord looks creepy as hell in the cover picture :twilightoops:

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Thank you, there will be clop in the future don't worry.
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Thanks! :twilightsmile:

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