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- EXCITING NEWS BELOW!!!!

NEW COVER ART ALSO MADE BY ChaoticBoop.

At Canterlot University, Fluttershy, a young and beautiful twenty-six-year-old girl, dreams of becoming a veterinarian. She and her friends are studying different careers, but they all must pass one important class: Advanced Chemistry.

Dean Celestia wished her oldest friend would have asked her, literally, anything else but teaching Science class at her college. Discord is not the most responsible or serious person she knows, at all. But he is willing to be a good and "funny" teacher as long as he can pay his rent and have a fresh new start.

For being a forty-one-year-old man, Discord's known for being childish, weird, eccentric, and chaotic. But when he meets a certain young student, he is fascinated with her kindness and curiosity for learning, making him considerate her as his "favorite student".

But what started as an innocent and un peculiar friendship, becomes a passionate and forbidden romance, leading to worries with the school rules, students gossiping, and even the authorities. All goes from bad to worse when a new Gym trainer is introduced, with a dark past and dangerous intentions with the students, especially the attractive animal lover girl.

*This is story is inspired by a friend from Discord Server called @ChaoticBoop. Her amazing imagination and drawings inspire me to write this story. The amazing Cover Art and the other drawings on one of the chapters are also made by her. Follow her on Tumblr: https://thechaoticboop.tumblr.com/

NOTE: Some ideas from this story are hers, and other ideas are originally mine. She deserves credit for this story as much as I do.

WARNING: This story is a Teenage rating but there will be drawings and some dark things in a character's past. There are gonna be some really explicit and specific scenes, for +18 years- old only! Written and drawn. BUT NOTHING UNCENSORED! There'll be a content warning at the chapter title. Read under your own responsibility.

Also:
QueenZozer, another friend in the Discord server, with ChaoticBoop, has done Audio Readings of "My Chemistry Teacher" fanfic! I can not tell you how honored and touched I am about this, so here are the links of the chapters made so far, in case you want to download them and listen to them. Their voices are very accurate! Hope you enjoy them!
Chapter 1: http://www.mediafire.com/file/1mw0lj2qs28otpa/Chapter_1_of_My_Chemisty_Teacher_Final.wav/file
Chapter 2: http://www.mediafire.com/file/jr2uqd6cud0q5sn/Chapter_2_of_My_Chemistry_Teacher_Final.wav/file
Chapter 3: http://www.mediafire.com/file/k8y9q9gbu7vvjb8/Chapter_3_of_My_Chemistry_Teacher_Final.wav/file
Chapter 4: http://www.mediafire.com/file/xh39vt87x8you2b/Chapter_4_of_My_Chemistry_Teacher_FINAL.wav/file
Chapter 5: http://www.mediafire.com/file/y70kh724spft319/Chapter_5_of_My_Chemistry_Teacher_FINAL.wav/file
Chapter 6: http://www.mediafire.com/file/hxqoa2m6d5ncsuh/Chapter_6_of_My_Chemistry_Teacher_FINAL.wav/file

I'll post the rest of the chapters on the description once the new ones are released.
Hope you'll like them! And special thanks to Queen Zozer and ChaoticBoop!

Here are the BLOOPERS, in case you want to hear them:
C1 & 2: http://www.mediafire.com/file/ywoxucrmtf7jq9e/Chapters1%25262Bloopers_of_My_Chemistry_TeacherFINAL.wav/file
C3: http://www.mediafire.com/file/bclbf3pk20ah8jz/Chapter_3_Bloopers_of_My_Chemistry_Teacher.wav/file
C4: http://www.mediafire.com/file/q6hgeirxjhc9fus/Chapter_4_of_My_Chemistry_Teacher_Bloopers.wav/file
C5: http://www.mediafire.com/file/7agx7pvwv0lisec/Chapter_5_of_My_Chemistry_Teacher_Bloopers.wav/file
C6: http://www.mediafire.com/file/evc13nqwpvpk7wi/Chapter_6_of_My_Chemistry_Teacher_Bloopers_FINAL.wav/file
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Chapters (8)
Comments ( 95 )

First chapter looks great! A few small punctuation errors here and there, but nothing really brought me out of the story, so that's good. Information is presented well, and I'm happy most of it happens through dialogue, so that information is relayed between characters as well as to us.
My only complaint is that the chapter is a little short, but it's a great length for the first chapter, the one that's just setting up the story. I'm just greedy and want more of this to read. :twilightblush:
I'm eager to see how this story unfolds!

So, regarding your description: if you write NSFW content you have the up the rating. It's also not allowed if a human/anthro character is under 18. Posting NSFW imagery or links to it is also not allowed.

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Yeah, I know. Don't worry. All characters here are older than 18 years old. And I selected it as a "Teen" rating because there are only three nsfw chapters. The rest is teen adaptable.
About the NSFW images, there is nothing mature or uncensored about them. It is all adaptable for people OLDER than 18 years. AND there is warning of them on top of the chapters. Responsible viewers will be warned.

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I'm SO glad you like it. Sorry for it being so short. Is just the first chapter, they'll be longer along the way. And if you have comments about the grammar or any errors, feel free to tell me about it. I want to improve my writing skills and all advice is welcome! I have big hopes for this fanfic and I know you do too. With help, I'm sure it'll be as huge as I want it to be. Thanks for the support here and on Discord.

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And I selected it as a "Teen" rating because there are only three nsfw chapters. The rest is teen adaptable.

Site rules dictate that you can't publish any NSFW chapters in a T-rated story, even if you have an in-story warning. You'll have to publish them as a mature side-story/linked sequel or make a separate mature version. Anything else would be breaching the kind of rules that get people banned.

About the NSFW images, there is nothing mature or uncensored about them. It is all adaptable for people OLDER than 18 years. AND there is warning of them on top of the chapters. Responsible viewers will be warned.

The point is that the site itself doesn't allow you to publish or link to NSFW images directly. This goes for stories that are marked mature. You can read about it and the very clear details right here.

Comment posted by FanMLP deleted Apr 16th, 2020

Oh gosh, Discord teaching CHEMESTRY... that's bound to go wrong...

Good chapter! I like the idea that Discord has not quite been on the right side of the law up until now. Looking forward to him and Fluttershy meeting each other!

"Teaching a class, how hard can that be?"

I think you're going to regret saying that, Discord. :rainbowlaugh:

A couple of mistakes I noticed, corrections in bold:

"Yeah! After our parents called the police!" Luna yelled. "Why are you helping him?! He hasn't even talked to us for the last twenty years!"

No apostrophe on parents.

"He and I have been writing to each other for the last five years. From time to time."

"Look, I really don't want to talk about it." Discord said firmly. " Let's just say it wasn't legal, at all. BUT, I've paid for my actions and I want a fresh new start."

But, for a few years, I used that knowledge for... really messed up stuff. I'm no longer doing that!!! But, the stuff I know is pretty advanced. I figured, if I want to come clean, I could teach it. And what better place to do that than at the same college I went to with my dear friends, and they happen to work here too!?"

"Discord. Are you really sorry for the things you've done? And are you serious about cleaning up your act and becoming a better person?" she asked him seriously.

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SOOO GLAD YOU LIKED IT! AND THANK YOU FOR THE CORRECTIONS! I'll change them right now! This is so helpful for future chapters!

This Is getting interesting
Can't wait for More

You're doing a great job 😁😁

I remember my science teachers in high school and college all being interesting in a way. Discord should fit the bill.

I can't wait for the next chapter! ❀️❀️❀️

This was an enjoyable chapter! Fluttershy feeding the stray animals on campus is very much in her nature. And I love how Discord is late to class, and he's such a frazzled mess when he arrives. :rainbowlaugh:

I only noticed a few mistakes:

Fluttershy got her bag back, stood up, and ran to her class.

"So Twilight, what about that new teacher? Please tell me it's a new Gym trainer!" Rainbow asked her friend while playing a game on her phone.

"Just... wanted to know... since... y-you said you've never taught before."

Other than that, just remember quotations should end in a comma, and not a period, when the person is still speaking.

I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next!

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Thank you sooo much for the corrections. They really have helped me with the next chapters.
And I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.

Comment posted by Annie_TC deleted Apr 25th, 2020

OMG I just love this chapter
Their first interaction and it was beautiful 😍
Great job
Can't wait for see the next chapter. And about that ...
are you going to upload a chapter every 8 days? Please answer if you want

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I am planning on publishing a new chapter every Friday or Saturday. Between those two days. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I lovie writing it. :pinkiesmile:

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Ok then thank you
And please don't stop writing this story

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Yeah! Don't worry. I won't. :raritywink:

It's good to see Discord and Celestia getting along well, as well as Discord opening up a bit about what happened to him. Smooze as a therapy dog is super cute :heart:! And Discord seems to be getting the hang of teaching. We'll just see how the Tea Party Club goes...

I noticed only one minor mistake!

"I was just on my way home. Unless it’s against the rules to walk alone to the bus stop."

I'm excited to see what's going to happen next!

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OMG!!!! From three mistakes to one?!?! Your help is really making a difference!
:yay:

But seriously, thank you so much! I'll change it now.

And I'm glad you're liking the story. I don't want to force it or rush things into the drama, so I've been working a lot on the character's stories and relations with one another. Chapter 5 is on the way.

Thanks for your support and help.
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And of course, I can't take all the credit...
ChaoticBoop gave me the idea of Smooze as a therapy dog. She is a genius.

Soooo beautiful and cute .
You really made a great job doing this chapter 😍😍😍😍
Love it
Can't wait for next week!!!!!

I'm super excited to see what happens now. I am also curious to see if fluttershy will interact with smooze or not.

Oh! My! Gosh! It’s been absolutely forever since I’ve read a fanfic as great as this! You’re absolutely killing it, I’m enthralled by every word!!!! Please keep this up, it’s wonderful and so exciting!!!!

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Awwww! Thank you so much for such wonderful words! Of course, I'll keep writing more in this fanfic. I'll be publishing the next chapter soon. I've been a little down this week but I'm back and chapter 5 will be here soon!

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well you’re doing amazing :)) hope you feel better soon!!!

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Ok! I'm really enjoying this story btw I cant wait for more :)

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I was worry that something bad happened to you when you didn't post anything yesterday or Friday but don't worry take your time we can wait until you feel better.

Btw you are amazing. Thanks for writing this story.
πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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OMG! Thank you so much for your compliment! I'm happy to be writing this! And I'm feeling better, thanks again! Chapter 5 is on the way!

Oh my gosh! I got butterflies reading this!! Fluttershy and Discord just have such a
-chemistry- that I can’t handle it! You’re doing great, and it’s honestly wonderful!

I was wondering if you wanted a proof reader? Someone who you could send the chapters to before publishing and they can fix any little mistakes you might have made. Don’t get me wrong, It’s a wonderful fanfiction and your penmanship is great! It would just save you asking AFTER publishing it if there are any! If you’d like that, I’m always available to DM! If you’re happy doing it the way you are, that’s also great! It’s an amazing fanfiction!

All my love~

It's great to see some more interaction between Fluttershy and Discord. And it's also nice to see that her friends are a little cautious and overprotective, but understand when they've overstepped their bounds and apologize.

Grammar and spelling in this chapter look pretty good! Just remember that at the end of dialogue, if the person speaking is mentioned after the quotations, replace the period with a comma. For example:

"Oh, I said that I invited Profesor Discord to my Tea-party Club," Fluttershy replied. "And he said yes."

Take as much time as you need to write the upcoming chapters. I'm looking forward to them!:twilightsmile:

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oh I have to totally agree with GeekCat here, i’m loving the interaction between Discord and Fluttershy!

And so begins a beautiful "friendship" between Fluttershy and discord.

Beautiful and great chapter I'm really happy and glad that you feel better and I'm looking forward for the next chapter 😍😍😍😍😍.

Btw. You're amazing and incredible. Hope many people see your work and love it as much as we do. πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜

I'm doing nothing for the next three days. I can take a look if you want me to. I'd love to help you out.

As Fluttershy was passing by, she stopped for a second right in front of a Pet Store. She looked through the big glass where the little puppies were held and smiled warmly. Even though she loved her bunny pet, she loved puppies too. She saw the green light on and continued her road.

I was rereading this and until now I noticed this. Omg like Fluttershy is going to meet smoze? Or will smoze be an escencial element for Fluttershy and discord relationship? Anyway I can wait for see their interaction. It may be like when Fluttershy meets spike I guess πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

"Oh, I really need to stop feeling this way," she said calming herself down. "He's my teacher! We could get into so much trouble. But... I kinda like feeling this way."

i literally squealed!!! this is going so well!!! congratulations on 4,000 words i know how much of a challenge that is!!! your writing in this chapter was almost perfect, have you been practicing? well done and i’m very excited to see the progression of this!

-stay safe, b!

Congrats on the four thousand words. I loved this chapter and I'm so excited for more :heart:

Congratulations on 4,000 words! This was a very good chapter, with some good progression of Fluttershy and Discord's friendship/relationship. I'm excited to see what happens in the next chapter...it looks like big things are going to start happening!

Your writing has really been improving! I only have three small nitpicks to make this time.

He has been referring to her or calling her "my dear" ever since they first talked.

"Did... did you fail the classes?"

Discord opened his night table's drawer and find a stress ball, but before he could close the drawer, he saw a dusty book.

This was an enjoyable chapter, and I'm looking forward to more!

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Thank you!!!! I'll correct them right now!!!

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HAHAHAHAHA! I'm glad! And thank you for your kind words!

Oh... My... God

first of all, CONGRATULATIONS FOR THE 4000 WORDS!!! I Know you were able to make it.

And second... This is my FAVORITE chapter YET. I'm so happy and excited for see how this is going to be. You really did an amazing job and I really appreciate all the hard work you are putting in this fanfic.

Also I really feel empathy when discord was remembering his past and seeing how smoze was helping him was really cute.

And I love how Fluttershy and discord are starting to have feeling for each other and they are like in a negation fase. We just have to wait and see.

As always you are amazing and can't wait for the next chapter 😍😍😍😍😍.

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Thank you SO much for your kind words! I'm so happy you liked the chapter! More Fluttercord sweet moments coming soon!!! But, it might take some time. There are things I gotta organize but the next chapter will come soon! Thank you for your patience and support.

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