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Brony_Fife


A simple writer with complicated taste.

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This is a story related to my other fanfic, "Are You Kidding?! There's PORN of Us?!" It's meant as a silly little side-story before I decide on what to do for an actual sequel.

Applejack and Rarity decide to host a dramatic reading of bad fanfiction written by Apple Bloom. How long will they last before it becomes too much?

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in the words of Vinyl Scratch, YES HOH MAH GAWD

2339651 When did she say that?

Applejack and Rarity decide to host a dramatic reading of bad fanfiction written by Apple Bloom. How long will they last before it becomes too much?

>that feel when you know the answer but don't know if it counts as a spoiler or not.

“Dis is hogshit, sugarcube. Hogshit! Ah ‘kin git laid if Ah wannit, an Ah don’t need no golt to feel shpeshul!” She shakes a hoof at nopony in particular as Rarity says “Damned shraight, sisser”

A yellow hoof shoots up from behind the table. “ANGEL, BABY!” cries Fluttershy. “MOMMA NEEDS HELP!”

Why do i want an episode in s4 where they all get drunk?

Reading that story out loud myself, made me want to watch this again:

Especially to everypony's reaction to this horribly written story. ^^;

This felt VERY much like an MLP version of Jacksfilms 'Your Grammar Sucks'.

Oh my god. Apple-Jack Douglass. Are you a Bich? And this should be a damn series.

Heck, I got the notification of this story a day later, well, let me read some other stuff first before going with this one

Absolutely hilarious :rainbowlaugh: , though, something that I didn't liked, are that some grammar errors were pretty forced

Wow... just wow man i mean that was funny, i cant even think of how hard it was to misspell all of those freaking words lol but the end was perfect loved it man 10/10 story

oh sweet jesus riding a popsicle, what in the nine frosty hells did i just read? :pinkiegasp: ... and where can i get more? :pinkiecrazy:

Another one of those stories where I kept laughing out loud and my wife or friends kept asking what I was reading and I really, really, really wasn't willing to explain it. :rainbowlaugh: High-larious!

I cringed, I laughed, I cried, I liked it, I faved it.

This will make a very fine series.

-AND THE SEXED AND THEY SEXED AND THEY SEXED AND THEY-
I pretty much shorted myself at that point. Too many hilarity tears.

Okay, to be honest. When I usually see a comedy tag on one of these, I usually feel like I'm missing the funny bits or it's over my head. Or just not really funny. This first chapter. This had me laughing so hard, I had to comment. Really Applejack was just beautiful in this! I loved it and I had a good REAL laugh from this! I can't wait to read more!

this needs a PMV and voice actors

this is beautiful... just beautiful

IT IS 3 AM WHERE I AM RIGHT NOW, AND JUGGLING BETWEEN READING THIS AMAZINGLY AWESOME FANFIC, ABOUT A FANFIC IN A FANFIC, AND A POST MILLENIUM REBIRTH OF AND UNDEAD GENRE, I AM LAUGHING MY ASS OFF. NO ONE IS AWAKE YET BECAUSE ITS TOO DAMN EARLY.

whoops caps lock again. damn that button should not be so close to others on a laptop. i really wish there was more to read to this.

DINKAMAROO! XD

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And dinkamaroos go in your BO-BO!!!

That was awesome! :rainbowlaugh:

This needs more.I am laughing so hard right now, I can't. I have lost my ability to can.

Remember kids: Getting drunk while reading fanfic will improve your acting and story telling skills. Who cares if you pass out in middle of it?

Oh, this is so hilarious. You should do more of these. Flutterdrunk should be a very interesting (pfft-hah) reader of fan fiction.

I HAVE HAD A VISION!:pinkiecrazy:
Some beautiful, talented person is destined to go and create a fully voiced and animated version of this hilarious as hell story!
Someone pleasepleasepleasepleasepleeeeaaase get on that! I'll pay you! :raritystarry:

If they coaxed fluttershy into reading that by getting her drunk, what would the others be like?

BAHAHAHA. I think I may have found my new favorite fanfic. Here. Take a fav and a like. (I think I spotted a spelling mistake but I'm willing to let it slide.)

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