Diets can drive anypony off the deep end, and Sweetie Belle is about to find that one out the hard way. Meanwhile, Spike is apparently handsome. Because.
Wrote this one on a whim. I hope it tanks so I can get rid of it.
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This was f*yay*ing brilliant.
I laughed so hard that it gave me a six pack and now I'm in the intensive care unit because my lungs turned inside out. Thanks.
Well got to admit this was one of the most interesting Spike x Sweetie stories I have seen.As funny as it is I would like to see more of these two to see how their relationship goes. I always figured Spike was a flank man and you just proved it lol. At least Spike always knows how to get him some action... cover himself in chocolate
So. Spike is into the fuller-figured ladies, huh? Good for him.
Gotta love Spike/ Sweetie Belle shipping
This is quite possibly the silliest story I've ever read.
I know Sweetie Belle wants the sweetest candy of them all: Spike.
Well, I'mma gonna disappoint you author, I came across this in the feature box, so it tanking is unlikely to be a possibility.
Also, it was hilarious and you made me think of Winnie the Pooh (the proper one, I mean, from the books I read as a child, not what happened as Disney got him).
Naturally, it gets featured.
Gotta love the Ed edd n eddy reference
It makes so much sense that it hurts.
Quoth 4chan:
The ass was fat.
Why did this get featured? I'm sorry,but I really didn't enjoy this. No laughter whatsoever.
What...
I don't even.
Sigh. Fine, upvoted.
that was the work of a genius
This story is going on my user page.
Or it would so I could recommend it, if it was an available choice yet on the list.
Also, take my follow!
This was so absurd that it crossed over into brilliancy.
+1
--Spade
I think Spike will to make Sweetie Belle even fatter
This was so stupid, absurd and silly. I love it!
I need more of Fatty Belle and I need it now!
4699900
Karma's a bitch.
Wait . . .
Holy almighty shit, this line had me laughing so hard that I probably died one or twice in there. But the best was that this story had me rolling THE ENTIRE TIME. I have never laughed so hard. Ever.
This is by far one of the funniest stories I have ever read, and the greatest part was that with all of the crazy stuff that went on, it somehow still felt right for them to be together at the end.
Fucking liked, faved, and followed.
This is the most hilarious Sweetie Belle X Spike shipfic you will ever read
I choked on my rice. So hard. That said, this was a very interesting story. Never though about fat Sweetie Belle. Chubby, but never fat. That was certainly new and added a fair bit of humor to the whole ordeal. Also, Spike as a chubby chaser, totally can relate. Thank you for this, you're very... very something, author.
Loathe,
Your Antagonist
How did Spike not get a nosebleed?
*cough*Frontpage*cough*
4700788 I love Your Antogonist.
Screw loathing him.
Okay, I have to admit, this was amazing.
The timing, the offbeat humor, everything. Just fucking hilarious.
But with that said, I am going to have to nitpick a little...
noisy
No need for the T to be capitalized.
No need for the F to be capitalized.
singeing
And that's about all I can find. Keep it up, and I hope to see more from you! fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/056/7/f/clapping_pony_icon___sweetie_belle_by_taritoons-d5w5zt5.gif
Rotflmfao
4700888
You danging beat me too it.
I love you
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This is the picture that started this crazy mess.
4699900
My reverse psychology worked!
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Thanks for laughing. Perhaps the funniest part of this story's inception is that I based this story's flow on classic clown skits: no real resolution to the story, just a blow-off. (Though I threw in the ending because it felt right to.)
4699889
There's plenty of classic references in this story. See if you can find them!
4699988
Really? Where?
Amusing idea and some interesting pieces, but for the most part, disappointing. It seems like you're relying too much on fourth wall breaking and meta-humor by pointing out certain things (such as pointing out your own plot holes).
4701613
Fourth-wall breaking? Meta? Dude, the point of my comedy writing style is to be as flippant and intimate with my readers as possible. It should read as though I'm sitting there, reading it out to you guys.
And the story itself revolves around mostly shipping and fat jokes. The meta shit is just a bonus.
4701613 Aww, lighten up a bit. It is what it is. It knows it relies on meta-humor and fourth-wall-breaking, and doesn't spoil that by trying to be anything else. It's short, it's fun, and it's exactly what it's meant to be: a cute, lighthearted diversion. And in that, it succeeds.
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You failed at failing. This is a true 'Springtime for Hitler'.
-Lumino
You had one job!
These lines I found irrationally funny.
Not normally a fan of 'ship fics, but this one is pretty funny, and cute. Some of the narrations are a bit much, but that's what makes them so funny, and unexpected. The pacing is pretty good, and you got the characters personalities down well.
I also kinda like the idea of an older teenage Sweetie Belle being chubby. I don't know why, but that makes her so adorably awkward, I absolutely love the concept. (Plus, you don't see chubby characters in the show much.) I like how it's played for laughs, but also kinda makes her a bit more flawed, relatable, and likeable. (Not that I'm chubby. lol)
It also kinda goes well, considering how much more athletic Scootaloo, and Applebloom are, so her being the chubby one kinda balances out the three crusaders a bit. I also like how Spike still seems attracted to her, regardless of her weight, so it's really cute he can look past that. (Or maybe that's one of the reasons he's attracted to her. ;) Chubbier gals are probably more soft and huggable. Hehe)
Diamond & Spoon were quite relentless with the fat jokes, but that just made Spike's li'l comical retribution on them all the more sweet.
Regardless of the comical tone of the fic, I like how the ending of the chapter gives you a warm fuzzy feeling.
Not many fanfics have a "silly, yet sweet/adorable" tone to them, which I think suits the show, so it's nice to see one like this, and a romance fic that doesn't take itself to seriously, or is to overly focused on the romance.
Got to say, loved this fic so far. The first chapter was very good, amusing, adorable, silly, and funny all rolled into one. :)
While not the most hilarious thing out there, this gave me a few laughs, so you definitely deserve an upvote
I still read that book to my son.
I'm not gonna lie, this story was stupid, but the good kind. It gave me a good laugh and was actually very sweet, so a like from me.
4700165 eh. Some people just aren't into crack fics. You're opinion, you're life.
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Yep, definitely more huggable. Plus, you don't have to see their skeleton every time you look at them. (Quite in contrast to the near-skeletal look of the ones that try to lose too much weight, or the Geek ones that forget to eat).
4701295 I love you too man.
Whoever you are.
4702841 your
4703715 I know. Stupid auto correct .
4703752 Ah. Sorry then.
4701721 what book is that? O remember reading it a while back, but I can't remember the name.
Is this the only chapter? It says incomplete.
Winnie-the-Belle,
Winnie-the-Belle,
Tubby little filly all stuffed with fluff.
She's Winnie-the-Belle.
Winnie-the-Belle.
Willy, nilly, silly, little filly!
Half crackfic, half sweet slice of life romance, ALL brilliant.