Caught in the throes of an epic pony prank war, Twilight decides to use a new spell of hers to get even with a certain white mare. But one stop off to prank Rarity turns into a call for help, and a budding romance for the two unicorns, with a few feline perks. But Twilight should really have stopped with that spell long ago, because now she and Rarity face an enemy they never saw coming.
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Chapters (3)
3971006 Holy crap that was fast to publish. I literally submitted this 11 minutes ago.
3971062 Happens. I remember this story from a long while ago. Glad you finally published it!
Great story! I was starting to wonder when you were going to post this!
Well...I'm interested to see where this is going to go. Good start good sir!
D'AWWWWWWWWW!
Oh shit, Opal's loose!
New story by Sam Cole!? YES
Can't wait to see where this goes, especially with Opal
Also, it's "caught in the throes"
This is original as all get out. I can't wait to see where this leads.
“But- but before that, how about you and I go on.... go on a date? Just so you’re less nervous about us having a friendly lunch.”
You are a bucking genius
I regret to inform you that I will be stealing and using this my good sir
I think "The while fucking car" would be a bit more accurate
this. I was expecting a twist at the ending, but that just dwarfed my dreams of this.
Always love the rarelight stuff,
looking forward to more!
Bit rushed on the pacing, I gotta say.
Their first kiss was pretty out of nowhere, even if it was on the cheek.
Overall, I like the idea of a magical bleed effect.
And Rarity romance, gotta love that too.
Have a favorite.
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That just sums it up so well. Once again, great RareLight story Meester Sam.
3981191 .....so if she wants to party do you get teens with attitude or overly stick in the muddish teens to ruin the party and thus foil her plans?
Um... your image is a screencap from the show premier episode, with text over it. You don't need to credit DHX, they don't mind.
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I'm not sure, at that point, really all you can do is hope that Pinkie Pie doesn't find out about said party.
3982532 Honestly I focused more on the action of this one coming up rather than the 8 other concepts I feel I could have/ would have if I hadn't sold myself on a three part story here. But If you're really interested, I'll draft up a little something. Thinking of calling it the 'Twi-Kitty Dating Chronicles' Where I'll explore all those little dating stories with a more feline Miss Sparkle.
3983714 Actually it wasn't until I posted the story that I saw the image, which was a gif, wasn't working properly. So I should change that, but won't because even then I didn't make the original gif, so why try to claim it as mine?
I love Big Bang Theory!
AHH OPALS FREE
AHHH! KILL IT WITH FIRE!!!!!
Silly.... you can't kill it with fire, its Twilight's body!
Oh.. Right..... AHHHH WAIT ALMOST 14 MINUTES FOR OPAL TO GO BACK TO HER OWN BODY!!!
I wonder what would happen if all of Ponyville finds Twilight Sparkle's body possessed by Opal things are going to get strange
Such a bunch of sillies
OUCH! This is a fun story! All we need is like one more chapter to see how everything turned out in the end and it will be awesome! LOL I'm not really sure how much more this story could go from here. Considering I'm almost sure Twilight will never use the spell again...
But this is a fun story!
This needs a real going over. The grammar, spelling, and just structuring was kinda annoying to read and could do with some polish.
Example: Put more spaces between your scenes. It's hard to tell with some spacing settings when one ends, and the other begins.
I don't think 'blonde' is the right word for Fluttershy.
Opal has some serious issues
...is it wrong my first thought was "sequel"?
You forgot 'pussy'
"It took Twilight a full five days to be released from the hospital...Like the five friends that didn’t come to see her in the hospital"
Twilights friends are dicks. It's one thing to be upset and angry, its another for not one of them to even visit.
Poor Twilight, so much pain in her heart. At least she'll be able to start healing. Rarity too, she must feel so hurt by Twi, but she still loves her, again though she can heal. A wonderful story, can I assume from what Rarity said that Opal was put down?
4171445 Or maybe in a pound or something.
Nice poem. Calm, simple, great.
4171445 Nope, the opposite actually. She was charged as a pony, which means jail time for the little villain.
Good story is good.... Thanks for writing it. I believe you have done a good job...
4173204 Opal is jail oh if she gets out of jail she will go after the Mane 6
AND then Rarity learns the mind-swap spell and uses it on Owlo-whatever-the-hell to get back at twilight
......or with spike
4171426 Yeah I expected Rarity not to. but it's not like it was Twilight's fault that Opal went crazy, plus AJ and Dash convinced Fluttershy to stop helping during a dangerous situation because they assumed it was all a prank.
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Ooh, nice idea for a sequel.
4183329 which one though? Owl or Spike?
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OOH, BOTH!
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images6.fanpop.com/image/photos/35800000/Pinkie-Pie-pinkie-pie-35808204-894-894.png Muahahaha!
Love makes us do crazy things and crazy love plus already crazy ponies equals a entertaining story.
On a side note, what would have happened if Twilight was aiming for Flutters heart using Angel bunny, mass ponycide or him/her seducing Golden Harvest (Carrot Top) for her assets?
4217256 Rhythmic, if you write it, I'll read the hell out of that idea. That sounds like comedy gold amigo.
4217276 I would rather leave that idea to someone who knows how to funny.
Any takers?
OMG. OPAL IS GONNA RULE THE WORLD!
Why did she not take a sleeping pill? 
“First, you owe me a new cat. Opal has been charged as a pony actually, once word got out that it was a spell you were writing that took a tragic turn,” Rarity explained off hoof.
That last line... it's very foreboding.
Spike saw Rarity enter the library, "Just stay away Rars, You two are mares are totaly messed up, I'm movin back to Canterlot ." He shook his head.
"Gosh you wrecked the town, Now Twi & you ?, Come on first it's stalions now mares , BUT nooo' Dragons? and you call yourself open minded? That's just messed up."
Spike grabbed his sack & bags , "See ya later when you get your stuff togeather" He sighed
"Luna said this stuff would happen with a town full of mares gettin on the rag at the same time" Spike waddled down the stairs.
Rarity let out a squeek "I'm sorry Spikie poo" She batted those big blues at spike,"Please?"
Spike looked at Rarity with fire in his eyes. "Do you know who has to clean up around here?" Spike took a deep breath "ME!" I file all the insurance clames. File & send the reports to Celestia," Spike closed his eyes "Scroll after scroll sent, File after File FILED" All the Library books reordered ,shelved and refriggin reshelved all because I have a CRAZY BOSS!"
Rarity wimpered "I didn't know Spikey Wikey" A tear ran down her muzzle." Just didn't..." IT's Not Yours to know" Spike added "I feel for you Rarity, I do,
Rarity just stood trembling at the sight of Spike waddling across the room set to leave, She opened her mouth"Spike I love..." "Yeah I know Twilight" spike blasted
She finished "Both of you,Twilight & you"
Spike looked at her "It's not the same is it?" Spike looked at the floor "I'll always be an assistant to both you crazy mares"
Rarity cooed "You'll always be my favorite Dragon"
Spike continued to waddle out "I'm the only Dragon in town"
Rarity planteda kiss on Spikes snout stopping his exit. "Please Spikey Wikey don't go"
Spike set his bags down and grabbed his ear spines "When will I ever learn?"
When I started this, I kind of thought it would be really stupid. I was not disappointed to find that not only was it not completely stupid, but it also was a really good story. You also had some pretty funny stuff in there. Good work!