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Applejack can't sleep because of how good it actually felt to let Spike massage her. Who would have ever thought his little dragon claws were just right for some good massaging? In desperation, she decides to ask Spike to massage her again.
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A little slow, or rambling, not sure which. Nothing bad to say about it though.
Could be a fun idea to run with though. I'll give it a thumb's up.
Clop fic about that part is definitely coming soon.
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I KNEW SOMETHING LIKE THIS WOULD APPEAR EVENTUALLY!
Taggin in for the ride
I like these massage fics. They get all ASMR and its fun.
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This intrigues me.
I wonder just how far A.J will go to get that massage? Anyways, more!!
Yay for context.
Damn...talk about your major build up...I think AJ is reaching critical mass
Go on....
………continue
I see.
indeed
He should do this to his friends.
This is going exactly the way I hoped it would.
hot
Wait...did I just read a story where nothing happens except a highly detailed account of Applejack getting massaged?
...Did I like it? rainbowderp
I was drooling as i read this...
never thought I'd see a story quite like this.
thanks you
Aw, complete already? Man, this has potential to spill off into another story! Seriously! I would've loved to see Rainbow's antics.
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I enjoyed this.The tension and descriptions were amazing.
I like this story. I think I will miss it dearly in the coming days.
From Spike's last thought in the story, I'm assuming he planned some, if not most, of this little escapade.
You need to continue this.
please more
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Please continue this I want to see how it spreads through the town.
1915404>>1916792>>1919421 I'm sorry, but I think right now that's beyond my ability. Can't think how can I proceed without repeating what I wrote here so far.
Spike and his Magic Hands: How Spike conquered Equestria.
1919506 Well, consider writing more on the aftereffects of Spike's massage. Obviously, the others are going to want more and are willing to go quite far for it, yet at the same time, Spike is only one little dragon and will have limits on how much massaging he do.
It's a pity to end this now, things were just getting really good.
I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this story.
It made me laugh that you kept insisting through Applejack's thoughts and some dialogue that the whole thing was supposed to be an asexual form of pleasure. I believe it, it just made me laugh.
It's really odd though. Your grammar was fine right up until the last chapter's dialogue. The wording and the grammar both needed some work, but the story was fine. I really would love to see something to continue this, but I understand there might not be anything left to say really. Just a sign of good work.
Wow... Either AJ is a nymphomaniac masochist, or she's a predator-prey fetishist. And for some reason, entertaining thoughts of the latter, pleases me.
10/10.
I have the weirdest boner right now...
I have the strangest boner right now....
1919506
How?
Yes, you can.
We will start with Rainbowdash , how about this ? By following the sequence of events : 1 ) How to spike her seat easily - Here you should focus on the interpretation of someone who is sensitive to the touch , something quite different from Applejack , which is a hard and totally non- sensitive working at all. I suggest some reading on the subject before, especially about how people react well . Look, you're not going to repeat everything , you're going to describe a very touch sensitive character, an alias which is a special horror fru -fru treatment.
2 ) psychological Narration , not concentrated in the material world - you should seek the sensations of the mare and as a pegasi should feel totally different from a pony- land. Ponies - land are hard and rigorous , pegasi should be more sensitive to certain things and more resistant to the other . This difference will give you a good material .
3 ) Humor - this must be one of the good parts . Believe . I think most here principalemnet liked the first two parts , where AJ is mulling whether inside about it . It was very clever as she tries all ways away from the idea that there is anything sexual involved, but it seems to spend special effort . How Dash would react in their place? Say , you said she chased the dragon, right? What is your conflict and their search for alternative means before that, until she surrendered the idea and began his harassment by Spike ?
So you think it's enough material ? Please ?
I feel weird...
I like this story.
1876178 You're seeing things from the perspective of a tired mare on the onset of sleep deprivation and craving the best sensation she's ever felt. It's only natural that it'd be rambly.
... I think I need a shower now.
You got to make a sequel of that Massage Maniac known as Spike Dragon.
4210172 Same here
Meanwhile in a Bride of Discord universe
"And that, children, is how i gained my Harem."
Most excellent.