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The Official Sequel to Spike's Home Alone.

Don't panic! Hiatus is temporary, suffering serious writers block with this story atm. Got another one in the works to keep you entertained. Should be submitting it on Monday.

A few weeks have passed since Spike and Fluttershy made their relationship official. Despite a few bumps in the road it seems the perfect ending the fairy tales always promised. What follows however, is something that no one could have prepared them for.



But first!

A massive thank you to all those who gave me such a warm welcome to FiMFiction! Especially those who found Spike's Home Alone as interesting to read as it was to write! A number of you asked for a sequel so here you go, free of charge.
Sorry for the long hiatus, my life's been getting pretty busy lately. If you enjoyed this fan fic or it's predecessor, Spike's Home Alone, I'm now looking for proof-readers and an editor. Please message me if you're interested.

Haven't yet read Spike's Home Alone?
Here's the link:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/37900/Spike's-Home-Alone

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 125 )
Riz

Is this a FlutterSpike ?

Following this, because it looks interesting as of now.

1868921:twilightblush: Yep, why not take a couple of hours to read the first part. Link is in the description.

Riz

1868955

Reading the prequel right now..

Woooo! Sequels are fun!

By the way I like the internal Pinkie thoughts. I always thought it was tricky writing for Pinkie Pie.

Anyway can't wait for more!

1868969 I've found the easiest way to do it is to pretend you've gone insane and throw everything you know about punctuation out the window. The rest comes naturally.:pinkiehappy:

I think Twilight might be getting a little jealous about Spike finding his love intrest before her. And par tof her doesn't want to admit that Spike's growing up. Aw it o.k. Twilight you're still young and Spike's still going to be around for a few more years at least. :pinkiehappy:

Also I think perhaps the real reason why Rarity is so busy lately is because she's spending time with Big Macintosh, her prince charming. :raritystarry::heart::eeyup:

A continuation of a FlutterSpike fic?:rainbowhuh: Okay you have my interest.

Riz

1868979 Thank you for the FlutterSpike fic..is a rare to find this..thanks again..:twilightsmile:

Can you please write what is fluttershy thinking in i dont know another color orca darker yeloow. Because now is just you know. Beside i was waiting for this since a long time.:raritywink:

1869849 Sadly there is no darker yellow. Is it too much for me to ask that you set the page background from light to dark at the top? I guess I can set the color to green like last time if more people complain but I'd rather not. Quick question have you ever written a story on this site using the coloured fonts tools You only get like 8 choices. Since the Mane 6' s coat colours are available it made sense to have their thoughts in that color though I get where you're coming from.

1871565 You can keep guessing all you want, you'll just have to wait! :raritywink:

Rarity is pregnant! MLP PIM - Pregnancy is magic. :)

1868936
You, I like you:moustache:

On a note about the story. I'm glad there's a sequel, and Fluttershy and Spike plushies would be awesome to have.

The sequal is gonna need a sequal cause its just too good

1868921>>1868936

I just finished reading through "Spike's week home alone" just so I could read this.
May I have some moar of this surprisingly rare couple?

1875032
Surprisingly so since there is some shipping material in the first episode when Fluttershy fawns over Spike and listens to his entire life story.
Im pretty surprised that so few people make FlutterSpike outside of clopfics.

Riz

1875047

What do you mean by ' few people make FlutterSpike outside of clopfics.' ?

1875059
Exactly that, I actually haven't found any romance fics between Fluttershy and Spike (outside of this one and its precursor) when sex wasn't the primary focus.
Big reason why I dropped the time to read the precursor and this in one day.

Riz

1875091


I can't believe, I'm going to do this...but can you link me some of it ?

1873304 Oh come on! I've only written the first chapter. Let me write this one first please!

I've got to say I'm liking what's going on so far, I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens next.

1875119
Want me to fix you up with some links eh?
I can do that

The majority of the SpikeXFluttershy involve Spike going balls deep into the entire known population of Equestria so those don't really count.
So let me remember and relocate some FlutterSpike for ya
*searching*
Here we are:
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Edit: Removed links and sent them to Riz via PM
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Thats all I can remember and find.
Man, even in clopfics they are a rare couple.:applejackunsure:

1877174
My bad, Riz wanted some links.
Want me to move the links to a PM to him and remove them from my previous post or just leave my previous post alone and just not put anymore clop links in the fic discussion?

1877530 I ain't gonna censor you so I'll overlook it this time. Just please stick to pms. I would hate for any underage readers to stumble onto clop through one of my stories.

Riz

1877530

I'm sorry SecretBrony and Paladin. Its my fault not Paladin for posting the links.

My curiosity got the best of me. I hope this will be forgiven...

And also I'm gonna take my time on what I have done...

1878334>>1878534
I understand the wish SecretBrony, I have taken a moment to send the links to Riz via PM and edit out the links from my previous comment.
I should have kept the younger ones in mind when I posted the links and should have PM'ed them.
Ive posted links in the past on other stories in the past and didn't get complaints.

While there are worse things for the younger ones to read, see, and do on the internet than clopfics, its best we don't introduce them to it during casual forum conversation in a site and subject thats supposed to accomodate all ages.

1878844 I appreciate your maturity in this matter, quite rare on the internet I must say and I agree with you about it being far from the worst thing they could see, however. I don't approve of clop generally and most certainly will never write any, Though I have nothing against those who do and those who read it

I read Spike's Home Alone and I never thought that a sequel was in the works. :pinkiehappy:
I have re-read that fluff dozens of times, can't wait to read this sequel. :heart:

Cloaked figured... Now I wonder who that could me :P

Aw did Rarity and Big Macintosh hit a rough spot in their relationship (not that I'm surprised), speaking of which when are they going to tell Applejack about it? :trixieshiftright:

Also Twilight Sparkle jelaous? Oh man can I call it or what? :eeyup:

All and all another good chapter.:pinkiehappy: I guess AJ was a fan of FlutterMac:applejackunsure:. Twilight is going overboard agian:facehoof: and still nothing on Rarity. It could be nothing or she's even worst shape than Twilight. And I'm curious about the cloaked strangers motives.:unsuresweetie: Is the pony antidragon or as secert lover of Fluttershy that can't stand the fact that someone else got to her first?:rainbowhuh::twilightoops:

Brace yourselves,
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I am really curious to who that cloaked pony is!

uhm one mistake that really bothered me and made me laugh a bit

Fluttershy just couldn't shake the feeling though that not all of her concern was focused on Sonoma.

Cloaked figure? I'm betting she is Rarity, I mean, she is one of the few characters who was wore a cloak in the series. Maybe she misses being stalked by Spike?
Anyway, good chapter, looking forward to the next one.

1883989 Kindle autocorrect screwed me over again:ajbemused:

1885742 you kindle must enjoy sonoma brand cigarettes XD?

Riz

1885742
Oh my. Whose that mysterious figure and what does it wants with Spike ?:pinkiegasp:

Can't wait for the next chap.:rainbowkiss:

Really enjoy your work...:twilightsmile:

1885742
Ugh, if I had a nickel for every time i had to use my sister's Kindle to type something and it messed up... I'd be able to pay somebody to write for me!

1885531
I'm guessing the same thing, the cloaked Pony is Rarity. It makes so much sense:
- Applejack has already let everypony know that Mac is having "girl troubles"
- from the previous story (Spike's home alone), it shows that Rarity and Mac started a relationship a few months ago, and even though they are clearing out the air with Spike, there is still a bit of regret on Rarity's part.
- maybe not according to the story, but maybe there is a bit of jealously on Rarity's side that Spike and Fluttershy are a couple now after Rarity indirectly dumped Spike.

of course, I could be completely wrong..:twilightsmile:

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