A singing contest has just rolled around in Canterlot so what happens when our favourite timid pegasus and lovable librarian assistant join?
What would happen if the judges are the two princesses and our favourite douche bag prince?
What happens when a certain cross eyed mare joins the bearers in watching the event?
Would it also change anything if they were friends? What if they were in love with one another?
One thing's for sure it is going to be an amazing night.
AN- Hope you guys enjoy it!
Chapters (1)
I remember seeing that cover scene in Trixie episode and immediately thinking "SHIP SPARK!!! That is a Spike x Fluttershy Ship Spark!!! Yes, BRING ON THE FLUTTERSPIKES!!!". As a fellow lover of Spike shipfics, you have my favorite, my friend. Keep it up. :)
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1761880 Thanks
never expected one of my favourite authors to like this story.
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You're too kind. I hope you continue to make more. :)
1761891 I plan to,
I actually think this is better than my spike and pinkie fic
an interesting story concept. I never saw that pairing coming but to each there own. other then the odd spelling mistake here and there a very well organized story. it seemed a little rushed thou, like you were trying to get so much information and you only had a limited amount of words to write it in. Overall it was a good read and i did get a few laughs throughout. good job from me.
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Don't worry, i will try and improve my next story. But i am glad you liked it
You know when i saw that scene in the show i knew there was going to be a fiction about it
1761964 I actually saw this photo on the internet.... I did the fic before i saw the photo. I haven't seen season 3 yet
1762065 Yeah, lucky for me school break will be here soon and i plan on writing during my break
Shyshy?Hell ya 100% approved!
Why has not anyone else thought of that?!
Why isn't there more views?!
Why isn't this story featured cause it sure as hell deserves it!
Ok enough questions, anyway dude this was awesome I have no other words for it so I'll finish with this,
HAIL!HAIL!
1762220 featured? That be nice
Well...that was nice.
Some parts did seem a bit rushed, and I did catch a few minor grammar mistakes, but I loved the story anyway.
Great premise; Both D'aaaws and chuckles were had by me. All in all, Ya dun good.
>inb4 featured
…AMAZING!!!!!!!!
bit out of character...bu still FAAANTASTIC!!!!
I love this ship, this story was very well made other then a few errors, but very impressive nonetheless, shit, this made my entire day.
GO SPIKESHY!
Aww you guys
You're making me blush
1762687 I doubt it
Am I really the only one who had reasons not to enjoy this one? I still find it weird, because this is one of the few fan ships that I like...
Anyway, I'll just voice my reasons:
Pros
1. Description of the emotions is good.
2. Background description was pretty good
- for example, the stage description gave a good explanation as to how large the crowd was and it was quite believable.
3. Some moments were very sweet and tender.
Cons
1. Too much information, too few events.
For example:
a. " He realized that Rarity would never date him once he found out she was already seeing another colt from Canterlot, he was depressed at first but thanks to the yellow Pegasus, he was once again back to his regular draconic self. He still remembered how they started a friendship; he was running from the library and had crashed into her. Needless to say he apologized a lot and made it up to her by taking her around and treating her against her will, she said she was fine .Fluttershy was a great friend and over time they had gotten closer and closer, .Fluttershy destroyed the emotional storm left behind by Rarity while Spike was slowly starting to coax her out of the shell of shyness that surrounded her being."
- Information like this I would have much rather wanted to see happening in the story and drive its tracks fluently rather than read about them as background fillers. These parts would have made for excellent separate chapters for a much bigger story.
The reason this is a problem is because this is just too much in terms of information and holds me off from immersing myself into the story's narrative.
b. "Unbeknownst to Spike was that Fluttershy reciprocated his feelings but was too shy to act upon it, .Spike was also still harboured thoughts of the disaster that lined his fall with Rarity and he didn’t want to rush anything., lest he lost all his emotional connections with the Pegasus. "
- Similar problem here, this is only mentioned in one chapter but not used to its advantage and the story never seems to use this bit of information to its advantage, other than by explaining what has happened.
See what I mean here? Too much Information, too few Events! Way too much of this is just explained and many parts just beg to have their own chapters written and described, in an attempt to immerse the reader inside the story.
2. Some pieces of story just Make no sense what so ever!
Take this for example:
- "Fluttershy half-closed her eyes, she expected Spike to scream. She thought he might leave and never talk to her again, she envisioned him smacking her."
WHY... How did we get to something like this, did anything in the story indicate that Spike somehow hated Fluttershy, or other ponies for that matter? I seriously have no idea how she even got such thoughts in her mind. I know she's shy, but this, this is really Pushing it!
And furthermore, this part here served no purpose, nothing other than what Everyone would have expected happened here. I was honestly just disgusted with this one, Fluttershy thinking that Spike would SMACK her face!
Unless I've been told otherwise, I have absolutely no reason to believe something so apparently manufactured as this line!
3. Why is there no real conflict in this story?
This is where I put the nail on the coffin. I honestly could deem this a good story and like it as well, even with said problems above, but this one just makes my head hurt so much to the point that it's no longer bearable.
Is there a good reason for why no one other than Fluttershy and Spike exist in this story?
By which I mean, they're only ones existing in this story due to the apparent and rather convinient abscence of other characters in their scenes together, even if there are a few of them.
Other than Fluttershy and Spike's personal turmoil, there's nothing here and even those aren't really conflicts, as they never lead to ANYTHING what so ever. They just end up together, Nothing was ever made of the idea that Spike would rush things or Fluttershy would think Spike is going to reject and even punish her for thinking about him in such a sweet, caring manner.
I don't get this at all, the way I see it, stories need conflicts, or at least a personal turmoil type of conflict that does lead to something.
4. Too many similar opinions from the author thrown into the story = redundancy.
"To say she was red was the understatement of the millennia;"
"To say she was in a state of euphoria was a joke;."
"To say Blueblood was bored to death was the understatement of the century;"
"To say the dragon and Pegasus was flustered was sugar coating it;"
"To say the duo was surprised at one another was a lie;"
This was the most redundant phrase that stuck in my head even after I finished reading this and that would be the key word to this problem, Redundancy.
So instead, let me make a quote for this to explain how this made me feel:
"To say that the repeatedly usage of this phrase bugged me would be the understatement of a lifetime, because this phrase made me want to stop reading this story. Thankfully, I skipped the constant reusages of the phrase and it was ok."
Conclussion:
This story wasn't meant to be a short story.scratch that... This story wasn't a short story, it was a Shortened story that was meant to fit every single mention of a plot and narrative, only to offer us just the ending of the story.
That is literally the best way I can put it, what I have read in this story is just the end of it.
So I'm sorry to say this and have to be the first comment to critique this, but I'm one of the few who dislike this story.
I love FlutterSpike ship, but this was an unsatisfactory story that explained too much but had no story to tell.
1768405 You know I like these kinds of comments
These help me improve and I guess I can't impress everyone, I'll take your advice into consideration.
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Will there be a Pinkie X Spike ?
1846738 I have already done a PinkieSpike so unless i do a sequel maybe not
This has to be one of the cheesiest (if not the cheesiest) stories I've read so far... And I love it!
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What story is your PinkieSpike ? Link me please ?
Dynamic duo means I'm very muc sure means hero & sidekick!
Ah, nothing like great music and good romance. A most excellent tale.
That was the cheesiest story ever... Yet i loved EVERY SINGLE SECOND!!!! You, sir, have earned 10 D'awwws from me.
-YNA
You sir, are very lucky that I happen to own 'Payphone' so I could get the entire feeling of the story.
so so beautiful
O)_(O I'm staring at you.
Ahahahaha! This shit had me in tears!
hahahah very nice it was a really good fic and the part of justin and rebecca was so fun to bad that we can´t do that or can we?